..:::Shoalin..VS..Mc Chaldean:::... [VoTee NowWw Hot Battle]

[mc_chaldean]

Iiight homie...u been here long enuf so u kno tha house rules
3-0 = k.o
or else, first to 5
I'll prolly drop 2moro tha latest...
i jus need u to check in

[Shoalin]

check

*MOVED TO SUIT OUR STATUS :)*

[mc_chaldean]

My pounds rusty cuz it leave u wet up, ur guns-in-tact
this dumbest-f@g aint no football playa but i'll leave em running-back
n make you disappeare like Mc CHaldean, but u won't be comin-back*// 1
I'm tired of blastin, now i aim-lazily
I got u workin for free, so jus blame-slavery
while i stack paper n fillup banks (Phillip Banks) like James-Avery// 2
I'll hurt-you cuz i raise tha steal like magneto ta murk-you
squirt-two n leave ya parents worried like its way past ya curfew//3
I'm holdin-tha-5th n loadin-tha-clip blast n leave ya blown-into-bits
get thrown-ina-ditch, now his parents cant see their son like a solar-eclipse//4
get laced-on-da-spot cuz u late on makin-ya-drop**
bein a mod'z tha only time ur names-at- tha-top***//5

*Been gone from dis site fora while, but now back.
**his verse is late.. was already supposed to be posted.
***he'sa mod his names up there self explanatory

Officially murked by urs truly :wink: ...

[Shoalin]

*ill Edit and Drop in a Few Hours, Gota go to work, got called on a late shift*

[mc_chaldean]

comon b.. its been more than a few hrs.. a day has passed :roll:

iight since u neva dropped yet..ima edit my verse n add another bar since i have 4 n tha max is 5...so drop 5 to match mine.
ez

[Shoalin]

This Aint a Bank Robbery But Lay on the Ground Please, Consider My Jabs Diary Porn Props They'll keep ya FACE and Ya MOUTH creamed
Your Girls be My Jacket They Stayin 'Round Me, Im Jus Like Some IRANIAN HOSPITAL BOYCOTTS Aint Got No patients For Chaldean!!!

Prowling Loose Bears be Waiting Now Watch This Pro line up to get Choked Blind like Brothel Workers Not knowing Who There Tastin'
Mirror My Style Learn What This Dude here is facin Leave you wit Stars so when i bring Duece to Mc dont Expect NUCLEAR EQUATIONS

Quad some Red Cross Shots Toten-4's-to-bleed-pores Every last Drop 'Still fram Bulletin ya Head' Like An 'Open SOurce To C'z Thoughtz'
Treat U Worse then 'Downies at Winter amusement Parks' Frozen Claw this Retard School Him By Bars Quicker Then Broken Laws Being Retaught

Draw Heat 'Teckz Melt N Cz'll Rise' Its Global Warming Watch You Get Dropped off the top Like Gettin Thrown Over Awnings
Present Arms Ima 'Smoke Ya Warnings' Cause When it Comes To Keepin Ya Locked i Got'assets of ancient society' This Is Total PWNage


EXPLANATIONS(For The Fuck heads WHO dont Understand Greatness):
1st Bar
(Dairy Porn Prop= Whipped Crea, CHaldean- Ancient iranian Society, Patients/patience Wordplay)
2nd Bar
( Pro- Prostitute, Choked Blind-stand behind Walls and Dicks Get thrusted by people they cant see,
Stars,Duece- UNder His Name he got the 2 stars, and MC2 is the Formula for Nuclear Shit)
3rd Bar
( Steel Framed Bullets, still Framed(c'z= Sieze) Bulletin (open source Forum) Claw= Amusement Ride In AUS)
4th Bar
(cz= Sea's Teckz= Text. Assets of Ancient society= OWNING CHALDEAN :) )

[mc_chaldean]

uppin 4 votes.. Ohh btw... *edit*. Chaldean is an ancient IRAQI society.

[Trigo]

*EXCUSE ME FAGGOT, THAT IS HOW I WRITE. GOT A PROBLEM SET UP A THREAD, YOURS TRULY- SHO Fucking ALIN*

[mc_chaldean]

dude if u took tha time to make a post, you have might as well voted lol...its all good, but ill be waitin for ur vote in tha future

uppppppIN

[Muphaser]

Flow: Chaldean
Punches: shao
Personals: shao
Mutlies:shao
Wordplay/Creativity: shao

OA easy win for Shaolin

[mc_chaldean]

thnx for da vote, BUT can u break ya shit down so i know why u voted for shoa.... :roll: .. neway uppinn...

[Muphaser]

thnx for da vote, BUT can u break ya shit down so i know why u voted for shoa.... :roll: .. neway uppinn...
No, should be no need. He killed you on everything except flow...

Your Girls be My Jacket They Stayin 'Round Me, Im Jus Like Some IRANIAN HOSPITAL BOYCOTTS Aint Got No patients For Chaldean!!!
was easily a personal punch... And was stronger than any of your personal punches in metas, creativity etc


Sorry, but it was pretty onesided. Count it or not... Atleast I voted :D

Duece

[mc_chaldean]

thnx for da vote, BUT can u break ya shit down so i know why u voted for shoa.... :roll: .. neway uppinn...
No, should be no need. He killed you on everything except flow...

Your Girls be My Jacket They Stayin 'Round Me, Im Jus Like Some IRANIAN HOSPITAL BOYCOTTS Aint Got No patients For Chaldean!!!
was easily a personal punch... And was stronger than any of your personal punches in metas, creativity etc


Sorry, but it was pretty onesided. Count it or not... Atleast I voted :D

Duece

Regardless of wut u say, is not a one sided battle.. And that so called 'personal' isnt even a personal to be technical... cuz I aint IRANIAN...thnx.
Uppin

1-0 Shoalin.. Uppin

[Shoalin]

OK well im sorry the Encarta Dictionary is wrong.
I Will edit it if you Wont.



VOTE TALLY
1 Shoalin
0 Chaldean

[mc_chaldean]

nahh its no biggie dun worry. Uppin 4 Votess

[Trigo]

shaolin


This Aint a Bank Robbery But Lay on the Ground Please, Consider My Jabs Diary Porn Props They'll keep ya FACE and Ya MOUTH creamed
Your Girls be My Jacket They Stayin 'Round Me, Im Jus Like Some IRANIAN HOSPITAL BOYCOTTS Aint Got No patients For Chaldean!!!

wasnt really feeling this opener, its good u did ur reseach bout the guy but at least double check to come up with the right meaning... plus its so forced

Prowling Loose Bears be Waiting Now Watch This Pro line up to get Choked Blind like Brothel Workers Not knowing Who There Tastin'
Mirror My Style Learn What This Dude here is facin Leave you wit Stars so when i bring Duece to Mc dont Expect NUCLEAR EQUATIONS

um, puncuation plz... i liked the concept u were bringing bout the nuclear shit, but the set up was lame... pro dosnt equal to prostitute...u better have explained that, has nothing to do with greatness son... the set up is mad wack, concept rel coo' but set it up betta dude...


Quad some Red Cross Shots Toten-4's-to-bleed-pores Every last Drop 'Still fram Bulletin ya Head' Like An 'Open SOurce To C'z Thoughtz'
Treat U Worse then 'Downies at Winter amusement Parks' Frozen Claw this Retard School Him By Bars Quicker Then Broken Laws Being Retaught

god, i wish u would use some commas or periods some times..anyways, i liked the wordplay, it was neat but not really hard hitting... im still bieng nice cuz ur shit has to be really thoguht upon to get it, all the work u should have done we have to do... nice the school line was ok, one of the only parts i was really feeling in this bar


Draw Heat 'Teckz Melt N Cz'll Rise' Its Global Warming Watch You Get Dropped off the top Like Gettin Thrown Over Awnings
Present Arms Ima 'Smoke Ya Warnings' Cause When it Comes To Keepin Ya Locked i Got'assets of ancient society' This Is Total PWNage

rime absense here... nice punch... wordplay good


um shoalin, my persoanl opinion is that u fucking stretch ur bars way to much, so thats also gonna count dude...
ya did a good thing by looking to hit him with personals, i dig that cuz thats always what i try to fix on... i think u got mad potential, just keep it a bit more simple... no hate (even tho u may think so, but i have no reason to)


Chaldean


My pounds rusty cuz it leave u wet up, ur guns-in-tact
this dumbest-f@g aint no football playa but i'll leave em running-back
n make you disappeare like Mc CHaldean, but u won't be comin-back*

ok opener, concept may be a smudge played... lol bout the disappear part, u did disappear for a while... but it aint that hard hitting


I'm tired of blastin, now i aim-lazily
I got u workin for free, so jus blame-slavery
while i stack paper n fillup banks (Phillip Banks) like James-Avery

nice wordplay, but its only bragging bout urself here dog, aint digging that


I'll hurt-you cuz i raise tha steal like magneto ta murk-you
squirt-two n leave ya parents worried like its way past ya curfew//3

lol nice punch steel-magneto... i was really feeling this line, it flowed hella nice and finished with a decent punch

I'm holdin-tha-5th n loadin-tha-clip blast n leave ya blown-into-bits
get thrown-ina-ditch, now his parents cant see their son like a solar-eclipse//

nice multies, punch is ok, i feel u could have set it up a lil better to make it hit harder... concept kinda played tho

get laced-on-da-spot cuz u late on makin-ya-drop**
bein a mod'z tha only time ur names-at- tha-top***//5

ehe nice personal, good multies...

u kept it simple but its what i prefer, i think some cats try to complicate it so much that it becomes to fucking much...

shaolin permit me to give ya some advice, keep ya bars shorter, dont get to complex wanting to say a million things in one bar cuz then it just dont role of the tongue no more ( it kills it)...

flow: def Chaldean
Punches: i was feeling both here, so tie
personals: chaldean only had one while shaolin kept coming with'em
wordplay: shaolin
creativity: shaolin

u would think i'd give shaolin ma vote but no i aint gonna do that... im titleing this a tie.... cuz overall shaolin may have a had a more solid text but i think that his bars, already stretched out-PLUS WRITTEN SO SMALL-, shouldnt be tolerated... so in the end every things weighs itself out and this is a TIE

O/A TIE

[mc_chaldean]

thnx for tha vote n breakdown trigo.
2-1 shoalin

[StaticKaos]

im gay...!!!!!!

[Shoalin]

^ uh thanks for sharing

[johnny 5]

im gay...!!!!!!

yes you are....aren't you.