View Full Version : Flawless(0) vs Young Ghost(3) ...:::FINISHED::..
FlawlesS
09-11-2006, 02:09 PM
4 bars..
house rules
due friday
Young_Ghost
09-11-2006, 03:36 PM
checkity check.
i might drop before Fri. due to my schedule
holla
FlawlesS
09-15-2006, 03:01 AM
I spit words-that’ll-blast-him fuck pumpin’em-shots, watch me curb’em-and-pass him cause hes nuthin-to-watch, man my flow make ya have an ‘allergic-reaction’ while ‘jumpin-in-shock’/
My flows-fire so im showin-the-arson, dude is so-tired, hes supposed-to-have-hard-shit? I blow-by-him just flowin-some-bars-quick and everybody see ghost-writin, but noone-regards-it/
You a customer, cant get ya hands on a fuckin-bird, Ima hustla, so I watch u 'feen nicks' (phoenix) like that fuckin-bird, leave ya jaw stuck-to-curbs, punch-him-first have my knuckles-hurt and leave ghost backing down till he really wants-some-nerves/
When I rap-my-bars, ima stay-in-charge, catch-the-dog and then slay-his-squad, I’ll spit a flame and you turn to a middle aged man cause you only half-as-hard as you say-you-are/
Young_Ghost
09-15-2006, 09:21 AM
aiight. here we go...
i dont know who you think your messin with... 'this dogs infected' ... still new, but ill 'kill a vet' like i Bit-One-Quick//
keep talkin on some I Grip-Guns-Shit, and like 'abandoning young males' ill 'leave him' a ' Dis(s)-Sonned-Bitch!//
(damn... thats Just-One-Hit!)
No-Delayed-Killings... another victim... its [Horror-Bull], so thought of 'the Ghost'-Remain-Chilling//
i'll expertly 'demolish' his 'unsound text structure' like setting dynamite in Old-Decayed-Buildings!//
[Horrible]
how can you be better than Young Ghost?... im First-ta-Slay-ya-Soul your old, im This-Curse-that-Plague-ya-Slow//
the only way the overused multies in ya Verse-Contained-a-'Flow' is if you decide to [Convert-ya-A-to-O]!//
[Flowless]
... Dont mean his 'hall of fame status' when i say this old rap Dog-is-History!//
his verses All-is-Shit-ta-Me, so 'quick Mortal Kombat wins' is the only place you'll see a 'Flawless-Victory'!//
FlawlesS
09-16-2006, 10:34 AM
can we get some votes?
Trigo
09-20-2006, 03:21 AM
um, before voting i'd like to know if ghost fed on some of flawless's lines... i cant make up my mind, what u think flawless?
FlawlesS
09-20-2006, 03:23 AM
i think so...but i dont care..
jus vote man lol
Trigo
09-20-2006, 09:03 AM
I spit words-that’ll-blast-him fuck pumpin’em-shots, watch me curb’em-and-pass him cause hes nuthin-to-watch, man my flow make ya have an ‘allergic-reaction’ while ‘jumpin-in-shock’/
ok opener, nice mutlies, could've made it a bit better tho
My flows-fire so im showin-the-arson, dude is so-tired, hes supposed-to-have-hard-shit? I blow-by-him just flowin-some-bars-quick and everybody see ghost-writin, but noone-regards-it/
i think ghoster-writer is a concept alotta ppl se aganist this cat, again nice multies but the build up could have been more hard hitting
You a customer, cant get ya hands on a fuckin-bird, Ima hustla, so I watch u 'feen nicks' (phoenix) like that fuckin-bird, leave ya jaw stuck-to-curbs, punch-him-first have my knuckles-hurt and leave ghost backing down till he really wants-some-nerves/
mmm u gotta be more explicit bro on what ur trying to say, reading this line reminds me of obnoxious
When I rap-my-bars, ima stay-in-charge, catch-the-dog and then slay-his-squad, I’ll spit a flame and you turn to a middle aged man cause you only half-as-hard as you say-you-are/
are middle aged men half as hard?
shit, my ignorance or ur lack of capability in writing clear dosnt let me vote on this battle, plz give some explanations so i can re-edit this and finally really fucking vote
Young_Ghost
09-20-2006, 09:04 AM
you guys are talking about the 'useless multies' line?
im sorry that it looks like feeding, but i checked him out before i accepted the challenge and saw that it was his style.
i thought of saying something like that before you dropped. its all good though
VOTE's................ Anyone?
Authenticz
09-21-2006, 10:02 AM
Flow: YG
Punches: YG
Personals: Nah
Creativity: YG
Multies: F
Entertainment: YG
AO VOTE: YG
Young_Ghost
09-22-2006, 08:35 AM
1-0 uppin
Shoalin
09-24-2006, 08:03 PM
Punches: YG
Multies: FLAW
Personals: -Tie-
Flow: Flaw
Metas: YG
W/P: YG
VOTE: YOUNG GHOST.
Flawless What happend , This is the weakest ive seen you drop Homie.
YG you lucky dawg, Cause FLAW in his Prime Eats people For breakfast
2-0
SiiNiDE
09-26-2006, 08:14 PM
Punches: YG
Multies: F
Personals:Tie
Flow: F
Metas/Wordplay: YG
Enjoyment: YG
Overall: ghost.
Flaw gotta be rusty. I read some of your old shit.. you's sick dude..
Young_Ghost
09-27-2006, 06:07 AM
good battle
3-0 KO