:Finished: KMA (L) vs. baby_uzi(W)

[KMA]

3 bars

Due when you feel like it, so says me. Should be soon.

[Young Ru]

chek.........

[KMA]

Checkers.

[KMA]

A dusty old microphone lay there, shrouded in the mist of the night. A barely ledgible marking, formerly a bright indication of the wielder, now only read,

|< l\

The last letter and a half washed away by the rains in it's abuse. The long forgotten sound of footsteps approches. A hand shoots into the grasses surrounding the mic, and brings it up high, proudly.

The wielder has returned. He unsheaths a mighty black sword and slashed a few things through the microphone's side.

|< l\/l /-\

It now read. With a smile, he brought it into battle.

Baby_uzi? I often think he was the seed of a freak-loser who hit a diseased-kooter and the seed-grew-to a pea-shooter//
You the whackest-faggot who yap on packiin-action, I pack-a-mattress 'UZi', and catch Z's-through-ya//

Get smacked-up wit ya bad-luck I'ma 'spell-insults' and launch 'assault on U-Z-I without throwin-a-spice/
Christ! I can lift-it-swiftly, clip's-spittin'-pretty-quickly if the semi's-wit-me, shoot nine-through-you, fuck, I blast '9-2-Uz', like a cloning-device//

Holdin'-game? You bitch, the spit put'cha soul-aflame, wish for the 'Golden-Grain' but can't 'Mill-K' like 'Homogenous-Mixtures'//
Dodgin-ya-bitch-words, tossin'-some-fists-first that lump-up-your-ass, Uzi can't 'fuck-with-the-rap' like 'Monogamous Scriptures'//

Verse1(U-Z-I. There's a Z through the middle of his last name, feel me?)
Verse2(I'ma spell insults/spillin' salts. Spilling salt is bad luck. You're supposed to throw some over your shoulder [launch a salt] if you're a salt-spilling fuck-up. Well, and then there's blast 9-2-Uz/Ninety two Uz's. If you're a good thinker, you should've been on top of that)
Verse3(Mill-K/Milk... is homogenous. You can't fuck with a monogamist cause obviously he or she has already got one lover and sticks to them. Yes?)

Whew. That was a fucking workout.

[KMA]

Did uzi become dead?

Oyyyyyyyyyy...........

Waiting blows.

[Young Ru]

Quick Key, got mad battles going ya dig?



Ru Smack Fucks putting the pump to kids Crunching hips an if they act up they get punctured ribs
Dude doesn’t know his sex…
Making him choose both genders so I’ll have dis ‘bi-gone for good’ like 'Lowlifes Becoming Rich'!
Bygones for good

I really Hope you have lots of passion cuz i'll Stop ya acting and you'll never come on top with rapping
Quickly i'll place ya career down the drain
And terminating ya reign and ya wins here will become 'undy term end' like 'Boxers Ran Outta Fashion'!
Undetermined

Now This fake is finished! Only time you in a ‘Khan Flick’ is when ‘Indians have you place in scrimmage’
Scare this dude, fuck ya facial image…
Im Bringin the shotty kid an It obvious that When im seen 'K Knows, runaway' like ‘Nigerian Fugitives Escaping prison’!
Conflict...Kanos Runaway

votes up...

[KMA]

It's cool. I'm just not used to the waiting anymore. Been gone too long, methinks.

And yes, votes shall commence.

[johnny 5]

ya'll want explanations or are cats only good?

let me know coz ya'll didn't really post nuttin bout the rules?

[Young Ru]

which ever one you can do would be fine...itz your choice....

[johnny 5]

KMA: good job bruv, nice setups but i still really don't get that 92 uzi's line. i'd like to know if that was a diss, or were you just playin wit his name?

BABY UZI: not one of the best verses i've ever seen you drop but, nevertheless still very skilled.




rhyme scheme:K
flow:tie
personals:K(uzi's were more generalized)
metas:K
wordplay:K

o/a:K

it's not as one sided as my vote makes it seem. both contestants did very well, but K just came a bit harder.

[KMA]

Thankee Mr. 5.

I'd explain the 9-2-Uz a little better, but if I recall, that'd be swaying votes.

[Rocladii]

Flow--->ehh both choppy
Multies--->KMA
Punches--->uzi..came a lil bit harder
Personals--->Tiie
Complexity--->Uzi

vote--->BABY UZI..battle wuz close 2 call but both of yall came weak liike used 2 yall cumiin better but i think uzi came a lil harder

[johnny 5]

I'd explain the 9-2-Uz a little better, but if I recall, that'd be swaying votes.

just pm me the explanation. i'd like to know the platform 'n' premis for the line. might give me some insight on my own style......good battle...........................DEUCE.

[KMA]

1-1 Tie.

Votes?

[johnny 5]

don't mean to freepost but could you pm the explanation of the 92 uzi line, i'd like a better understanding of it.

[Divine Write]

Okay...Lets start..

KMA
A dusty old microphone lay there, shrouded in the mist of the night. A barely ledgible marking, formerly a bright indication of the wielder, now only read,

|< l\

The last letter and a half washed away by the rains in it's abuse. The long forgotten sound of footsteps approches. A hand shoots into the grasses surrounding the mic, and brings it up high, proudly.

The wielder has returned. He unsheaths a mighty black sword and slashed a few things through the microphone's side.

|< l\/l /-\

It now read. With a smile, he brought it into battle.

I'd like the little introduction...useless really but I enjoyed it...Good imagery..

Baby_uzi? I often think he was the seed of a freak-loser who hit a diseased-kooter and the seed-grew-to a pea-shooter//
You the whackest-faggot who yap on packiin-action, I pack-a-mattress 'UZi', and catch Z's-through-ya//

In battles I'm all about the attack...just straight up rip your oppenant..Punchlines are second...I admit it's a creative way to flip his name but I don't feel it attacked him like you intended...he's not a matress...I feel the first line was harder hitting..

Get smacked-up wit ya bad-luck I'ma 'spell-insults' and launch 'assault on U-Z-I without throwin-a-spice/
Christ! I can lift-it-swiftly, clip's-spittin'-pretty-quickly if the semi's-wit-me, shoot nine-through-you, fuck, I blast '9-2-Uz', like a cloning-device//

Now you have way to many inner multies for the actual end rhyme to work...You get so caught up with the filler that you forget the root word that was intended to be rhymed...plus the cloning line is weak and played out...again..the first line was better..

Holdin'-game? You bitch, the spit put'cha soul-aflame, wish for the 'Golden-Grain' but can't 'Mill-K' like 'Homogenous-Mixtures'//
Dodgin-ya-bitch-words, tossin'-some-fists-first that lump-up-your-ass, Uzi can't 'fuck-with-the-rap' like 'Monogamous Scriptures'//

I wasn't feeling this to much...I admit your multies make it seem flashy but the punchlines are not doing it for me...sorry K..don't hurt me..

Overall:Decent..nothing amazing...Your first lines hurt harder than your actaul punches did...7/10

Baby_Uzi
Ru Smack Fucks putting the pump to kids Crunching hips an if they act up they get punctured ribs
Dude doesn’t know his sex…
Making him choose both genders so I’ll have dis ‘bi-gone for good’ like 'Lowlifes Becoming Rich'!
Bygones for good

Right off the bat...no pre-story..You lose..I'm just joshin' ya'....Your first line was a bragging line...which is okay if it builds up to an insane punch...which it didn't...I felt it was a little forced...a much better word could have been used other than "good"...It doesn't seem to truely capture what you were shooting for..

I really Hope you have lots of passion cuz i'll Stop ya acting and you'll never come on top with rapping
Quickly i'll place ya career down the drain
And terminating ya reign and ya wins here will become 'undy term end' like 'Boxers Ran Outta Fashion'!
Undetermined

I liked this line...Clever...the word "undy" always makes me giggle..

Now This fake is finished! Only time you in a ‘Khan Flick’ is when ‘Indians have you place in scrimmage’
Scare this dude, fuck ya facial image…
Im Bringin the shotty kid an It obvious that When im seen 'K Knows, runaway' like ‘Nigerian Fugitives Escaping prison’!
Conflict...Kanos Runaway

This had nice punches but I feel they were way to obscure...Not everyone will understand what you're talking about...A good punch is something internationaly relatable..

Overall:Not bad...some faults with punchlines and being to smart for the masses...8/10

Winner:Baby_Uzi

I feel that his attack was more consistant and on track...He had harder punches that just hit the mark...

[jayhood]

Flow....baby uzi ( uzi got this fast, two pattern beat flow)
Multies....KMA, (kma definetly got this, almost his whole verse got these
Punches....uzi..came a lil bit harder
Personals....nya, both people had personal, but i think kma had it
wordplay.....uzi (his whole verse had them)


overall vote to my son, UZI

good battle to both

and yeah i want another three way to pop off again :D , Remember?, uzi, kma, jayhood lol



and yeah, THE PIMP SIRE IZ BACK :shock:

[Lord Have Mercy]

Don't Know if I can vote on this coz i'm new to the site but remember my name coz some niggas say I'm ILL so here goes the way I see it
Flow--->Tie
Multies--->KMA
Punches--->uzi
Personals--->Tiie
Complexity--->Uzi
4-3 UZI

[[King_Mc]]

flow. TIE
multies. KMA
punches. BU
personals. EHH TIE
wordplay. BU
creativity. BU
metphors. TIE
enjoyment. BU

.:OVERALL:. Uzi took it...

[EmceeSmythe]

Uzi won by TKO... This battle can be closed at last :shock: