View Full Version : I need help structuring my punchlines
Quixotic
11-08-2006, 07:00 PM
In a battle I can always figure out a great way to get personal with my opponent but when I type it or say it the way it comes off is not as intended. Can some one help me with this problem?
Thesaurus. Sounds extreme, but it helps you figure out different words you can use in place of others (to reduce or extend syllables as needed).
The only advice I can really give is just think long and hard about other ways to reword it. Think of word you can eliminate or change (the Thesaurus helps here.)
Hope this helps a little...
Quixotic
11-08-2006, 07:16 PM
thank you
Divine Write
11-11-2006, 01:21 AM
Yeah...I personally do the thesaurus thing...but I also sit down and read dictionaries for fun...I'm weird...so stay out of my room...
Quixotic
11-12-2006, 06:27 AM
Thats not wierd cause I have done that since I was ten and I have learned alot of words but if I used them my lines would over flow.
Theory
11-18-2006, 08:39 PM
lol i needa buy a dictionary
Vladivostok
12-09-2006, 10:19 AM
I don't have a problem with understanding words,I learned everything when I was watching cartoons and then when I got to primary school I could take the teatcher down when it comed to english.My problem comes with remembering the words that I already know,sometymes I think in english,evon now..I'm not trying to translate romanian words,my head just think automaticly what I want to say.When I try to put it in rhymes my head can't think anymore... :lol: :lol: