Need Your Flow Critiqued??

[C Squared]

I've seen a couple post on here with users asking how to do this or that or what's wrong with blah blah...

Well, if you wish to recieve constructive critcism feel free to post one of your barz in here
on better would be to PM it to me with what you would like to be done..

Reason for me doing this is because:
1) I would like to see MC's skill level increase on this site, since I've only seen so-so textsyles on here (no disrepect to anyone.)

2. I'm just that ginuwine of a caring person ;)

so Get @ me if you got questions or need help

[callum]

Thanx man ill send u bars n stuff cus ive only been rappin for like 2 weeks now (nas - i can, made me start) and its like 40/60 on ur good/ ur crap quit and take up guitar or sumthin lol