View Full Version : MAK v Free2Rhyme
yo wzup... I'm new here and I was Wondering if anyone wants to battle me...
free2rhyme
11-22-2003, 02:46 PM
aight dawg i'll battle ya u set it up n then u drop first
Textacee
11-22-2003, 05:22 PM
moved to the newbie place
RULES!!!:
14bars max
no feed of
1st to 5votes wins(no dickridin,hate or crew votes)
votes should be explained,and no freepost...since i'm new to this site it's coo' that ppl give some advice or critisism with no hate-intention...
categories:
MULTIES
OPENERS
FINISHERS
VOCAB
PUNCHES
friendly battle ay
u gonna react like u’ve never been smacked like this before
So let this sick lore fill ur tiny brain whore
You’re a disgrace to the asshole you were farted out from at birth
So don’t expect to be the last mc standin’, bitch get down to earth
Have u heard the greatest joke of all time, free to rhyme
He claimes to be free, but I made him an offer he wasn’t free to decline
I’ll drop my lyrics on u like bombs from saddam’s sky like it was rain
So now ur bombed, punched, fucked up and left out with no fame
Ur that homo dick that appears on faggots porno flick
Stop actin like a thuggish gangsta’ cause ur more like a low-low chick
My words are the bullets, so face this fo’fo’ bitch
I’m the solo kid, punch u under the belt cuz I got a so low pitch
It’s obvious that ur speechless this line’s so ascended that it’s reach less
Don’t use binoculars, try telescope to peep this
Yo u gonna answer or what...
Due to thursday, or it will be noshow.
fysics
11-25-2003, 08:28 AM
a yo i'll battle
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 09:49 AM
iaght sry for bein late dawg ....but heres my verse...
check it ayo ayo...
Ya Rhymes Cant Ex-ceed!!!… Cause Im Just Too ‘Hard’ To ‘Smoke’ Like ‘Erect-Weed’!!!!!!//
Tested-Me!!!… Now Ya Constantly ‘In Search Of Ya Balls’ Like ‘Jugglers’ Whos ‘Hands Is Emp-ty’!!!!!!!//
Murkin-Thoughts!!!… The Only Way You ‘Came On Time’ Was ‘Fukkin-Clocks’!!!!!//
You In Rankless-Spots!!!…Its Like ‘Chickens Is Breathless’ The Way You ‘Suckin-C0cks’!!!!//
Ya Genitals-Used!!!… Youre Composed Of ‘So Much Pu$$y’ You Leave ‘Cannibals-Confused’!!!!!//
Youre Under Federal-Review!!!… Cause You ‘Spank Your Monkey’ To The Extent Of ‘Animal-Abuse’!!!!!//
FINISHER:
MAK Couldn't Spit Fresh Lines If He Cleaned 'Em With Floss//
Take Your Head Outta Ya Ass So You Can Look Forward To This Loss//
It's Weird How You With Celestial Scriptures When You Have No Heavenly Skills//
At Least When I Crucify Ya Ass You Can Say You And Jesus Were Similarly Killed//
MAK So Under Par Your Like A Amatuer Golfer On A Losing Streak//
Your Like A Desceding Mountain At Sea Level, Your Both Way Past Your Highest Peak//
MAK Couldn't Walk All Over Me Even Though I'm A PhyscoPath And I'm Lying Down//
This Will Be Like Vietnam Cuz If I Dont Kill Ya Then Ya Sure To Slit Ya Wrist or Drown//
Your From Nazareth And Yet You Still Have To Pose As A Philosophic Prophet//
You Couldnt Spit Sick If You Took One Of My Lines And You Tried To Cough-It// !!!!
aight there it is....
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 10:23 AM
VOTES PPLZ
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 10:48 AM
WE NEED VOTES
mrjules1257
11-25-2003, 11:12 AM
Yo before I vote I want to say yall both is hot
Openers: I give to Mak
Finishers: I give to Free
Punches I give to Mak
Vocab: I give to Free
N I'ma bout tha read it again for my last vote.
mrjules1257
11-25-2003, 11:15 AM
Here we go for multis I give it to Free but both of yalls was hot
Yall is evenly match it was a hard discision
A yo Free aint you wit B-town n Simba
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 11:18 AM
aight 1-0 f2r
fa sho you guys are hot
flow-mak
multis-free
personals-mak
punches-free
complexity-free
enjoiablity-mak
overall- i gotta go wit mak on dis one sry....the only reason i went wit him is becuz free went ova tha limit which means he had two more lines to beat mak...so mak gets mah vote...no h8
best parts from mak
My words are the bullets, so face this fo’fo’ bitch
I’m the solo kid, punch u under the belt cuz I got a so low pitch
best parts from free
Ya Genitals-Used!!!… Youre Composed Of ‘So Much *Kitty Kat*’ You Leave ‘Cannibals-Confused’!!!!!//
Youre Under Federal-Review!!!… Cause You ‘Spank Your Monkey’ To The Extent Of ‘Animal-Abuse’!!!!!//
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 11:24 AM
agiht 1-1- uppin more votes
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 11:39 AM
WE NEED MORE VOTES PPLEZ
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 12:09 PM
come one pplez dont be sleepin cake up n vote....try tostay active n give explained votes pplez pleaz ....thnx holla back
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 01:03 PM
uppin more votez
[FS]Tonk
11-25-2003, 02:29 PM
flow: mak
multies: free
punches: free
personals: mak
creativity: mak
goes to mak, just. nice battle though, you two are good
2-1 MAK
uppin for more votes...
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 05:34 PM
we need more votes
Simba..
11-25-2003, 06:47 PM
flow: mak
multies: free
punches: free
personals: mak
creativity: free
I think that free's punches killed mak in dis battle.
Overall: Free
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 07:20 PM
2-2 uppin more votes pplz pleaz....holla back.......
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 07:30 PM
uppin
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 04:03 PM
aight 3-2 F2R uppin
DatNutyNut
11-26-2003, 04:24 PM
was that a dick ride or what..how the hell can u say none came with multies,both had some hot ones...don' look like u read through that or u just don' got the idea of what a multi means...
PEACE
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 04:29 PM
idk if it s wuz dick ride cuz young sprongs and me got beef
DatNutyNut
11-26-2003, 04:37 PM
well didn't u have multies,and i kno' MAK had to...it's either BOTH or one of ya but sayin' none had multies that's pretty damn fucked..
PEACE
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 04:42 PM
yah i know, i know i had multiez but idk...? but me and young springs aint tight we got beef between
DatNutyNut
11-26-2003, 04:45 PM
i kno' what u mean,but i ain't sayin' it's dickride but i think that he just put ya in categories randomly like he didn't read the shit....
PEACE
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 04:48 PM
yah.....i dont think he even read tha shyt........
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 04:50 PM
uppin more votes peoples....pleaz holla
DatNutyNut
11-26-2003, 04:55 PM
i don' kno' if u want it to be counted as a vote,but it's in favour for u so it's up to u to except or decline that vote...
PEACE
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 04:59 PM
no im not gunna count it so it is still 2-2 young springs vote did not count..............uppin more votes peoplez
DatNutyNut
11-26-2003, 05:02 PM
keep it real,man that was sporty...
PEACE and good luck
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 05:03 PM
yah thnx
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 08:02 PM
VOTES PPLEZ
free2rhyme
11-26-2003, 09:27 PM
Keep tha votes comming wote now peoplez...pleaz...holla back
Uppin' for more votes....
yo that was sporty F2R, I appreciate it...
MAK
Uppin' for more votes....
yo that was sporty F2R, I appreciate it...
MAK
free2rhyme
11-27-2003, 12:57 PM
so does tha vote now count
free2rhyme
11-27-2003, 01:57 PM
aight thnx 3-2 F2R uppin more votes...holla
free2rhyme
11-27-2003, 02:50 PM
UPPIN MORE VOTES
Celtic
11-27-2003, 03:02 PM
Multies : mak - just some obvious good multies
Personals : Mak - it was almost all u diss him, good shit
Flow : mak - you was flowin liek the nile
Wordplay : free - the animal abuse part was hot
Vocab : free for sure, he got biblical on that shit, i liked it, educated shit
Punches : free - your finishing couple of bars.. nice punches
Overall - Free
Free's highlights:
Ya Rhymes Cant Ex-ceed!!!… Cause Im Just Too ‘Hard’ To ‘Smoke’ Like ‘Erect-Weed’!!!!!!//
Youre Under Federal-Review!!!… Cause You ‘Spank Your Monkey’ To The Extent Of ‘Animal-Abuse’!!!!!//
MAK Couldn't Spit Fresh Lines If He Cleaned 'Em With Floss//
Take Your Head Outta Ya Ass So You Can Look Forward To This Loss//
t Least When I Crucify Ya Ass You Can Say You And Jesus Were Similarly Killed//
MAK Couldn't Walk All Over Me Even Though I'm A PhyscoPath And I'm Lying Down//
Your From Nazareth And Yet You Still Have To Pose As A Philosophic Prophet//
You Couldnt Spit Sick If You Took One Of My Lines And You Tried To Cough-It//
there was alot, hot shit
Mak's highlights:
Have u heard the greatest joke of all time, free to rhyme
He claimes to be free, but I made him an offer he wasn’t free to decline
I’ll drop my lyrics on u like bombs from saddam’s sky like it was rain
So now ur bombed, punched, fucked up and left out with no fame
Ur that homo dick that appears on faggots porno flick
its hard to pick out highlights for Mak, all his shit was good, after i read through, almost every line was good, but for some realin i was just feelin free's verse a lil bit more, i think its his finisher bars, that shit took it for him
TIGHT BATTLE (sorry if some peeps didnt like the long post, felt like writin a book)
free2rhyme
11-27-2003, 03:06 PM
aight 4-2 F2R uppin more votes...
DatNutyNut
11-27-2003, 03:42 PM
sorry for the freepost BUT YOUNG'N, I AIN*T SUCKIN' YO DICK IF IT WAS J.LO'S CLIT/
WITH WHAT YA GON' HIT, WITH YA GAYSHOW CLIQUE/
I'VE SEEN U LAY MO' SHIT THEN CLAY ON DISH/
IF U WANT THE BEEF C'MON PLAY YO SHIT /
PEACE
free2rhyme
11-27-2003, 05:15 PM
uppin more votes...
Illtacticts
11-27-2003, 05:16 PM
flow: free
multies: free
punches: free
personals: mak
creativity: mak
overall: free
free you made some with ya multies and punches and i like ya personals and ya creativity but free flowed better
free2rhyme
11-27-2003, 06:48 PM
i won 5- 2 good battle peace
congratulations...
u deserved that victory.
guess i'll have to win annother time...
MAK