View Full Version : (Newbie Tourny) - - the_falconkid (L)vs. young_springs(W)- -
ya'll know the deal . .
-20 line MAX (20 word length MAX/line)
-First to 5 votes wins
-3-0 is a K.O.
-no hate/dickriding
-explained votes
-the person who has the most votes in 2 days after both MC's have dropped wins
-Both of you check in within 2 day or its a no show . .
-After checkin in, young_springs has 2 days to put up a verse . . after that the_falconkid has 2 days to post up with his verse . .
. . good luck . .
. . winner will move on to the next level . .
free2rhyme
11-25-2003, 12:24 PM
u better win too young cuz we gots to make it and battle in tha finalz
the_falconkid
11-26-2003, 09:18 PM
yo im here dont u worry about that
the_falconkid
11-26-2003, 09:23 PM
it sais u drop first.....so pretend its hott and drop it
young_springs . . you got two days to drop a verse . . due by Sat. 29 (12:18 am ET) . .
the_falconkid . . you have until Sat. 29 (1:22 pm ET) to drop a verse . .
the_falconkid
11-27-2003, 10:46 PM
It wasnt a chase, i stright up found out that u had dumb rhymes/
its like yer trying to SLAP me in my face, please try a PUNCH line/
saying i think im big, when i eat kids like you at lunch time/
if there was a freestyle battle team, ud ride the rough pine!//( the bench )
its not like yer a stranger boy i dun figured u out/
u spend ur whole time on rapdogs running your mouth//
saying you the hottest kid going round and callin people cutty/
the majority is guys, but u still wanna chase some booty//
I study my opponent, so ofcoarse i read yer bio/
u should stick to country u lil cowboy from ohio//
your on the road to choke! boy im gonna smoke you/
do i call u young springs, or do u go by the name Goku?//
before the battle started u told expo u was hungry as hell/
now ive fed you, yer kinda full? wanna log off yer dell?//
talkin bout poppin springs like leggo my egGO/
but see the funny thing is yer just a fag OH!!//
i'll turn mortal kombat into virtual reality/
cz when he yells out FINISH HIM, i end with a faitality//
stick a fork in you yer burnt, and im the cook/
now go around telling evry one the BIRD had u shook//
(sorry i didnt take the time to make mine pretty)
the person with the most votes by Sun. 30 (12:46 am ET) wins the battle and will move on in the tourny . .
b-town
11-27-2003, 11:24 PM
Multiez: if there was an attempt, i didnt see it
Enjoyable: springs
punches: springs
Finisher springs
Flow: falcon
personals: springs first line took this
Overall: springs
Falcons verse sounded better as i read it, but lacked originality. Springs you had a pretty nice verse, I would just focus on the 'flow' part of your writings and you will be a dangerous cat
the_falconkid
11-27-2003, 11:37 PM
yo kid your shit is tight, and i know ohio aint all country.....but yea man it was a good battle none the less!! however it turns out. yer already 1 up
Celtic
11-28-2003, 10:26 PM
Punches: young
Wordplay:young, i liked the football player shit
Multies: didnt see any
Flow: falcon by far!!!!!
Personals: i didnt like what i saw.... nothing seemed like it would actually make the other person mad or anything, too weak
Overall: Young
Young Highlights:
ayo ricky boi u bout as soft as an Erectial disfunctional dick/
matta fact u couldn't be FALCON_KID-if ya moms got fucked by MIKE VICK//
every thing u spit is recycled- its like watchin old ass re-runs-this beef u want some/
grab da A-1-stick this cat wit a fork-an call him Warrick cause hes dunn//
not great flow on them, but they both had some wordplay, some punch and hit it personaly
Falcon Highlights:
It wasnt a chase, i stright up found out that u had dumb rhymes/
its like yer trying to SLAP me in my face, please try a PUNCH line/
its not like yer a stranger boy i dun figured u out/
u spend ur whole time on rapdogs running your mouth// <--- i I like it cause its true, i see springs mouthin off alot
2-0 young_springs . . keep the votes comin . .
Sswytch
11-30-2003, 08:56 AM
VOCAB :: Springs
MULTIES :: Falcon
WORDPLAY :: Both tight
FLOW :: Falcon
PUNCHES :: Springs
Personal :: Falcon
Overall :: Falcon
Both really tight, young it seemed you were all over the place but came together tightly in the end... still believe falcon took this one
free2rhyme
11-30-2003, 11:49 AM
Flow:Young
Multiez:Falcon
Wordplay:Both
Opener:Young
Finisher:Falcon
Overall:Falcon
VOTE: Falcon_Kid
HOTT battle guyz....peace
Simba..
11-30-2003, 11:52 AM
Multies: none
Enjoyment: springs
punches: springs
Flow: falcon
personals: springs (first line)
worldplay: falcon
Overall: springs
1-G_MC
11-30-2003, 10:09 PM
Multis:YS
Punches:Both
Personals:YS
Flow:Falcon
Overall:YS
Good battle....
=1=
4-2 young_springs . . . keep the votes comin . .
[FS]Tonk
12-01-2003, 04:10 PM
flow: young_springs
wordplay: falcon
opener: young_springs
finisher: falcon
overall: falcon
i say that one goes to falconkid just, but nice battle
young_springs Wins . . congrats . . the second round is comin soon . .