Finished: Obnoxious (3) vs Smythe (0) K.O.

[EmceeSmythe]

4 bars... House rules... I don't care who spits first or about any other rules...

Obs and I have agreed... Breakdowns and actual, explained vet votes only.

[obnoxious]

me neither. check.

[obnoxious]

when you're ready.

[EmceeSmythe]

Okay... I'll prolly key tonight but I can't make a promise.

[EmceeSmythe]

You're 'BEAT' and 'got no drive' - So even before your rap-started
Reached in with tentacles, 'stole both your ventricles' - Evident you're 'Half-Hearted'!

That's right, cause...

You're too nice to mean mug, See cuz, you're not a fiend on rapping spits
You don't have 'hostile in-tent' even if you're 'mean on camping trips'

You'll get 'F'd up 'G', we see 'O Face' when a 'phallus is in your seat'
You 'don't have X, L,'n C' like your alphabet's incomplete!
(excellency)

'Courage comes with years', but you've 'got no nuts', no wonder you'll melt
I'm not 'talking experience' but duke, you got 'nothing under your belt'!

[obnoxious]

Leave this Girl handled! Murdered so Quick, it'll look like a vet against a newbie Having his First Battle
Swing a Sword at this Slag So Sick, ::shit:: Have "ESPN / ES peeing" worse than the Fucking News Channel

60 billion backhands! the rookie hurts! defecate on this moron! ARROGANTLY! like "you stupid herbs"!!
Original????? This Kid couldn't be “A Hard Act To Follow” if His Verse was the “Creation of the Universe”
….Sharp n Witty Like I Fix the Votes When I ‘Connect A Cut’(Connecticut) In The ‘Elect; Tri City’(ElectTriCity)…. But Da Ark Was Never In Ness!!(LochNess) Then Its Easy When I Get Into 'Crews Control' And Your Like A Faggot Camper Cuz Theres 4 Other Dudes When Its 'Dark In Tent'…
http://www.hollafront.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1623103&postcount=4

Spit on ya lame shit, unzip and piss on ya status, easily rape him, ::draw:: like kneel to the greatest
His Hobby???? I got punchlines that'll "Rip Smyth From the Inside" worse than Neo's Feat in The Matrix

this nitwit aint stopping me, rip him and i'll even rush this key, after I'm thru killing, nothing'll bring "MC back" not even "a ruler's unit term you'd see"
plant fists in his skull-so-deep, Beat Me??? :lol: Someone might give You A Pat, Smythe like the Rumoured Gift of a biography :shock:

mc - cm? You get me? GTFOOH
http://www.answers.com/topic/pat-smythe-1

[EmceeSmythe]

Vote ya dicks... I'll drop one in your battle too...

[B.Earth]

Wordplay-MC
Multies-MC
Punches-ob
Personals-ob
Complexity-ob

O/A-ob gets the vote.

I got two battle goin on at the moment, so pick whichever you'd like.

[EmceeSmythe]

That's no vet votee... I thoguth this was RD3 :roll: :roll:

[obnoxious]

true

0-0

[1-G_MC]

check

Flow:Tie
Punches:Obnoxious
Personals:obnoxious
wordplay:Smythe
metaz:eh, obnoxious
vote:Obnoxious

that matrix line really was the deciding factor

[SiiNiDE]

Smythe:
You're 'BEAT' and 'got no drive' - So even before your rap-started
Reached in with tentacles, 'stole both your ventricles' - Evident you're 'Half-Hearted'!

^^ Not a bad punch. Nothing special / no personals. Could've picked a better opener, but not bad. 3 / 5
That's right, cause...
You're too nice to mean mug, See cuz, you're not a fiend on rapping spits
You don't have 'hostile in-tent' even if you're 'mean on camping trips'
^^ This wordplay has been seen soooo many times. It's been played since like 04 lol. 2 / 5

You'll get 'F'd up 'G', we see 'O Face' when a 'phallus is in your seat'
You 'don't have X, L,'n C' like your alphabet's incomplete!
(excellency)
^^ I didn't flow too well, but the punch was ok. Basic, but it hit. 3.5 / 5

'Courage comes with years', but you've 'got no nuts', no wonder you'll melt
I'm not 'talking experience' but duke, you got 'nothing under your belt'!
^^ I think the XLNC punch shoulda been the closer, this was ok, nothing to make me say "Woah". 2.5 / 5
11 / 15

OB:

Leave this Girl handled! Murdered so Quick, it'll look like a vet against a newbie Having his First Battle
Swing a Sword at this Slag So Sick, ::shit:: Have "ESPN / ES peeing" worse than the Fucking News Channel

^^ Clean wordplay, punch was ok. Could've hit harder for an opener tho. 3.5 / 5

60 billion backhands! the rookie hurts! defecate on this moron! ARROGANTLY! like "you stupid herbs"!!
Original????? This Kid couldn't be “A Hard Act To Follow” if His Verse was the “Creation of the Universe”

^^ Ehh, not feeling this. The set up was ok, but had nothing to do with the punch. 2.5 / 5

Spit on ya lame shit, unzip and piss on ya status, easily rape him, ::draw:: like kneel to the greatest
His Hobby???? I got punchlines that'll "Rip Smyth From the Inside" worse than Neo's Feat in The Matrix

^^ This should've been your closer.. This was dope. nice punch 4 / 5

this nitwit aint stopping me, rip him and i'll even rush this key, after I'm thru killing, nothing'll bring "MC back" not even "a ruler's unit term you'd see"
plant fists in his skull-so-deep, Beat Me??? :lol: Someone might give You A Pat, Smythe like the Rumoured Gift of a biography

^^ nice punch, could've been alot better if it wasn't so stretched. (I cant say anything bout stretches lol) 2.5 / 5

12.5


Ob took this, but not by much. I've seen OB come alot harder, and Smythe I read some of your older stuff, you've come alot harder aswell.
Ok battle guys.

O/A: OB

[(x [____] %)DiViNe BuDhiZ]

Smythe:
You're 'BEAT' and 'got no drive' - So even before your rap-started
Reached in with tentacles, 'stole both your ventricles' - Evident you're 'Half-Hearted'!

Not bad for an opener.

That's right, cause...
You're too nice to mean mug, See cuz, you're not a fiend on rapping spits
You don't have 'hostile in-tent' even if you're 'mean on camping trips'

Nice, but I flipped something similar in audio verses. So it's not much creativity.

You'll get 'F'd up 'G', we see 'O Face' when a 'phallus is in your seat'
You 'don't have X, L,'n C' like your alphabet's incomplete!
(excellency)

Wordplay was good, metaphor was iight, punch was nothing special and flow was shaky.

'Courage comes with years', but you've 'got no nuts', no wonder you'll melt
I'm not 'talking experience' but duke, you got 'nothing under your belt'!

You shoulda hit harder in the closer, like K said the XLNC bar woulda made much better closer.

OB:

Leave this Girl handled! Murdered so Quick, it'll look like a vet against a newbie Having his First Battle
Swing a Sword at this Slag So Sick, ::shit:: Have "ESPN / ES peeing" worse than the Fucking News Channel

LOL, nice one. Good opener and nice wordplay.

60 billion backhands! the rookie hurts! defecate on this moron! ARROGANTLY! like "you stupid herbs"!!
Original????? This Kid couldn't be “A Hard Act To Follow” if His Verse was the “Creation of the Universe”

Nice set up, but everything was a hard act to follow in this one.

Spit on ya lame shit, unzip and piss on ya status, easily rape him, ::draw:: like kneel to the greatest
His Hobby???? I got punchlines that'll "Rip Smyth From the Inside" worse than Neo's Feat in The Matrix

Nice 1 O_O

this nitwit aint stopping me, rip him and i'll even rush this key, after I'm thru killing, nothing'll bring "MC back" not even "a ruler's unit term you'd see"
plant fists in his skull-so-deep, Beat Me??? :lol: Someone might give You A Pat, Smythe like the Rumoured Gift of a biography

Nice Punch, metaphors was good. Stretched a bit, but eh I'm not one to say LOL.


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Flow: Smythe
Punches: Ob
Personals: OB
Wordplay: Tie
Multies: Smythe
Creativity: OB
Structure: OB
Metaphors: OB
Entertainment: Tie

Seen OB come harder too and Smythe, gotta 'check out' like a library book. A good battle. Best I've voted in in a the span of a couple of days.


O/A: OB

[EmceeSmythe]

Okay... now that I'm K.O.'d and it's not swaying votes...

IT IS NOT FUCKING PRONOUNCED SMITH. MY NAME IS NOT EMCEE SMITH. EVERYONE. STOP MAKING FUCKING PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS USING SMITH.

I'm fucking sick of people benefiting, at my expense, from mispronouncing my god damn name.

Every single voter in this thread has put a lot of emphasis on the Matrix line, YR said it made the difference, somebody else gave you your highest scoring bar for it, and it's just pissed me off for the last time.

Obnoxious, it's not your fault, and if my name were Smith I would have thought it was a dope wordplay...

Blah. Good battle.