lyrics (0) vs young rice (3) finished

[LYRICS]

4-6 bars
till tuesday to drop
no hate crew d/r votes
this is my check uppin for yours

[1-G_MC]

check we can up the deadline since we're both on right now...??

[LYRICS]

ye but i have 3 battles goin on and one has two rounds on but i can try and drop tomorrow plus its 12:10am here

[1-G_MC]

coo I'll drop soon

[1-G_MC]

*ahem*

Rice isn't asian or white so I don't epitomize the name...
Lyrics? anything but, so for you I can make the same claim

/Get Em\


Defile ya text-style(textile) piss on ya gene(jean) fabric~
U gangsta? the only time ya waist tight strapped is wit elastic/

Sadaam knows this wont be a hung jury, I'll come this broads way n splatter ya whole cast-
JFK du-day(Uday) presidential assass n leave ya flag at half staff/(wuz poppin? haha)

Lyrics a noob? l'll have this bull(bowl)-cut like that ol beattles dew~
Slash ya organs leave a real liverpool then call my nigga.....hey Ju(Jude) bet he'll end ya rally in an alley like that John Lenon dude

ezzy////1-2-1-2

[LYRICS]

good drop i can get summin on 2day for sure

[LYRICS]

ok here we go

Young rice needs to do each bar twice, but there as good as shitting mice, losing his hair hes got lice /
feel the heat cook you like rice, punches are so bad havnt felt this bad since the crucifixion of christ /

You bore me like bruces price is right, saddam Hussein life compared to your career was more bright /
Head messed up like a boxer in a fight, annoying like a nanite, as pesky as a little mosquito bite /

you losin is an instigate, winning wont happen unlike fate, face has so many pimples looks like a cheese grate /
Weird like a gay inmate, young but you even hit puberty too late, cant take the heat you just incinerate /

Flatulent you are, this is a comeback but your off par, useless par-ent as active as someone who was hit by a car /
So ugly whole face looks like a scar, head is really off this planet like you on mars, rap career you wont get far /

Crazed devious look, everything you do is highly obvious like a cook, not needed like a battle with a hook /
Your life is owned by the devil it was took, your just a retarded fuck, hated as much as a crook /

[1-G_MC]

nice drop_bump n grind like R.Kelly at Chuck E. Cheese's

[LYRICS]

still uppin

[EmceeSmythe]

Okay... Breakdown...

YR First...

Rice isn't asian or white so I don't epitomize the name...
Lyrics? anything but, so for you I can make the same claim

^^... Ummm... Filler bar? Talking about yourself first line and no real punch except saying he doesn't have any lyrics... an ultra-basic name player.

Defile ya text-style(textile) piss on ya gene(jean) fabric~
U gangsta? the only time ya waist tight strapped is wit elastic/

^^... Textile WP I've seen a few times before... On this site... Jean/Gene was alright. Punch was okay but not very hard hitting.

Sadaam knows this wont be a hung jury, I'll come this broads way n splatter ya whole cast-
JFK du-day(Uday) presidential assass n leave ya flag at half staff/

^^... The Saddam/Hung Jury play is cool but not connected well. Ass Ass N is good but the punch isn't hitting hard...

Lyrics a noob? l'll have this bull(bowl)-cut like that ol beattles dew~
Slash ya organs leave a real liverpool then call my nigga.....hey Ju(Jude) bet he'll end ya rally in an alley like that John Lenon dude

^^... Really good themed punchlines here... But the WPs are forced. Bull and Bowl and Ju and Jude... are below your level.

Definitely think you coulda come harder... Let's see the other verse.

Young rice needs to do each bar twice, but there as good as shitting mice, losing his hair hes got lice /
feel the heat cook you like rice, punches are so bad havnt felt this bad since the crucifixion of christ /

^^ Shitting mice? You gotta get complex instead of just making random rhymes. Rice punches are played. The cruxifiction of Christ isn't a bad image but you've gotta get more creative and tie in more, ya know?

You bore me like bruces price is right, saddam Hussein life compared to your career was more bright /
Head messed up like a boxer in a fight, annoying like a nanite, as pesky as a little mosquito bite /

^^... I don't know if you fed off his verse to get the Saddam thing but that's not allowed... Anyways... You're just making general statements... Get complex punches and WPs in instead of just those lyrics...

you losin is an instigate, winning wont happen unlike fate, face has so many pimples looks like a cheese grate /
Weird like a gay inmate, young but you even hit puberty too late, cant take the heat you just incinerate /

^^... Same thing as other bars... Just flowing without any big punchlines.

Flatulent you are, this is a comeback but your off par, useless par-ent as active as someone who was hit by a car /
So ugly whole face looks like a scar, head is really off this planet like you on mars, rap career you wont get far /

^^... Same...

Crazed devious look, everything you do is highly obvious like a cook, not needed like a battle with a hook /
Your life is owned by the devil it was took, your just a retarded fuck, hated as much as a crook /

^^... I think you were just kidding with this one... Cook obvious? Blah...

You gotta get some PUNCHES instead of just flowing, ya know?

So let's vote...

Flow - YR had shorter bars... Lyrics, you stretched the hell out of them.
Punches - YR... Lyrics, you gotta up this.
Multis - None really... At least nothing too impressive.
Personals - None. Played from both sides.
Wordplay - YR

Overall vote goes to YR, but I'm looking forward to better from you.

[[King_Mc]]

yea Rice must be a lil rusty :D


flow. TIE
multies. TIE I GES
punches. YR
personals. NONE
creativity. YR
wordplay. YR

.:OVERALL:. Rice took it

[1-G_MC]

just a warm up fellas, you'll see 8) ....2-0 uppin

[LYRICS]

dam 2-0 anyways uppin

[(x [____] %)DiViNe BuDhiZ]

But why in RD3, this is for legendary battles that'll get no votes due to inactivity LOL

Rice isn't asian or white so I don't epitomize the name...
Lyrics? anything but, so for you I can make the same claim
Weak.


Defile ya text-style(textile) piss on ya gene(jean) fabric~
U gangsta? the only time ya waist tight strapped is wit elastic/
Meh, nice wordplay and all but flip was ok.

Sadaam knows this wont be a hung jury, I'll come this broads way n splatter ya whole cast-
JFK du-day(Uday) presidential assass n leave ya flag at half staff/
Pretty OK

Lyrics a noob? l'll have this bull(bowl)-cut like that ol beattles dew~
Slash ya organs leave a real liverpool then call my nigga.....hey Ju(Jude) bet he'll end ya rally in an alley like that John Lenon dude
This is surely a long time of cobwebs and shaking dust, this isn't your skill level to get onto basic rhymes like this.

Young rice needs to do each bar twice, but there as good as shitting mice, losing his hair hes got lice /
feel the heat cook you like rice, punches are so bad havnt felt this bad since the crucifixion of christ /

^^ Shitting mice? You gotta get complex instead of just making random rhymes. Rice punches are played. The cruxifiction of Christ isn't a bad image but you've gotta get more creative and tie in more, ya know?

You bore me like bruces price is right, saddam Hussein life compared to your career was more bright /
Head messed up like a boxer in a fight, annoying like a nanite, as pesky as a little mosquito bite /

^^... I don't know if you fed off his verse to get the Saddam thing but that's not allowed... Anyways... You're just making general statements... Get complex punches and WPs in instead of just those lyrics...

you losin is an instigate, winning wont happen unlike fate, face has so many pimples looks like a cheese grate /
Weird like a gay inmate, young but you even hit puberty too late, cant take the heat you just incinerate /

^^... Same thing as other bars... Just flowing without any big punchlines.

Flatulent you are, this is a comeback but your off par, useless par-ent as active as someone who was hit by a car /
So ugly whole face looks like a scar, head is really off this planet like you on mars, rap career you wont get far /

^^... Same...

Crazed devious look, everything you do is highly obvious like a cook, not needed like a battle with a hook /
Your life is owned by the devil it was took, your just a retarded fuck, hated as much as a crook /

Just flow and no punch, lyrics step your game up again my bro you slowing down lately.

You gotta get some PUNCHES instead of just flowing, ya know?

So let's vote...

Flow: Young Rice
Punches: Young Rice, although weaker than I woulda thought
Personals: Meh
Multies: Tie, kinda
Creativity: Meh
Entertainment: Meh, not an RD3 battle

Vote: Young Rice, but you gon' come hard in my battle. I'm trying to prove something.

[LYRICS]

oh well 3-0 the only thing i can take from this is i gotta tie on multis :shock: its back to basics for me in battlin and id hit me up bout that audio collab i wanna know wat the topic is

[Young Ru]

3-0 rice wins....locked....