YR(3) vs MVP(0) .. KO .. CLOSED

[1-G_MC]

I'll let u make the rules....check

[MVP]

aight 5 bars mayne.....



check....

[MVP]

I'll drop by tomorrow night mayne....

[MVP]

Every focused-omen slashes necks till ya throat-is-open.. ya vocals-showin./
I'll choke-Rice-knowin. I'll make my "diss-connect" like broken-modems, and my verbal gats are loadin/[1]
ima leave Young shattered-broken-battered-and-brusied when i crack-em-open-and-splatter-his-fluids /
in the bathroom-hoping-his-dad-is-so-stupid he hasn't-a-notion-it's-plastered-wit-dudes-kid/[2]
Ill stun-this-vet-wit-a-spit capable of embarrassment wit the way im clownin-rookies/
So dont think your a man cuz ur cool with vets, cuz even dykes are down-wit-pussies/[3]
Ya flare is gone my blare is strong, but there’s no settlin this beef like ja rule interviews with Farrakhan/
Fare to bond the stare is long, you beating me absurd like bald chicks in hair salons/[4]

FINISHER:
You've got-to-lose, my lyrics concoctin-brews to leave you in shock-n-bruised/
You Beatin-who? Please, i could get more complex rhyme schemes from DR-Seuss/[5]

[1-G_MC]

I posted my verse n it didn't come up I'll key one quick

[MVP]

ok.....its all good mayne....

[1-G_MC]

/1-2-1-2\

This assinine pr!ck'll pantomime simple verses till this hate crime nine'll split you like it's a black n white issue/

/lukewarm\

Be honest sexuality u pondered since you stopped seeing pu$sy in ya offices like a long since retired gynecologyst/

/maybe a little more\

This aint beef fo real its more like smothered veal cause I can give ya a deep slumber to manage ya sheep numbers...Break "tex[t]" like cheap rubbers, and we know you don't have shyt on MICS/Mike's like stat comparison of the Vick brothers/(Marcus n Mike Vick)

/down a notch\

Of course G press the pen the ink the win on one of my sons n see his stress in brethren, dont usually go raw, but I caught the b!tch without a glove like one of those outfield webjems/<LOL

/embarass em\
Ya pic shows T.I. I see why cause you must love d/r men you should astrive to be better than...Serve em a pound he cant shed, showerin flow thats tainted, since you wanna be him so bad, give a lil brain for change, spit top back, and rep bankead/

[1-G_MC]

uppin

[MANE]

Flow: MVP
Punches: 1G
Personals: Tie
Multies: MVP
Wordplay: 1G by far
Enjoyment: tie..

Overall vote: 1G


How'd u change ur name??

[MVP]

1-0 1G........

[1-G_MC]

I changed my name by asking admin...uppin

[Trigo]

MVP

Every focused-omen slashes necks till ya throat-is-open.. ya vocals-showin./
I'll choke-Rice-knowin. I'll make my "diss-connect" like broken-modems, and my verbal gats are loadin/[1]

not bad, multes are good... wordplay and punch mad played tho


ima leave Young shattered-broken-battered-and-brusied when i crack-em-open-and-splatter-his-fluids /
in the bathroom-hoping-his-dad-is-so-stupid he hasn't-a-notion-it's-plastered-wit-dudes-kid/[2]

uh, why? only thing good here are multies


Ill stun-this-vet-wit-a-spit capable of embarrassment wit the way im clownin-rookies/
So dont think your a man cuz ur cool with vets, cuz even dykes are down-wit-pussies/[3]

nah, aint really feeling it

Ya flare is gone my blare is strong, but there’s no settlin this beef like ja rule interviews with Farrakhan/
Fare to bond the stare is long, you beating me absurd like bald chicks in hair salons/[4]

again, multies are good, but no wordplay, metaphor is ok, but with no wordplay so not that hard hitting, punch overall weak

FINISHER:
You've got-to-lose, my lyrics concoctin-brews to leave you in shock-n-bruised/
You Beatin-who? Please, i could get more complex rhyme schemes from DR-Seuss/[5]

thats kinda corny, i mean, ok, yea i get it but it aint at all hard hitting, ur opponent laughs at this


1-G_MC


This assinine pr!ck'll pantomime simple verses till this hate crime nine'll split you like it's a black n white issue/

nah, dont like much

Be honest sexuality u pondered since you stopped seeing pu$sy in ya offices like a long since retired gynecologyst

eheheeh i like i like

This aint beef fo real its more like smothered veal cause I can give ya a deep slumber to manage ya sheep numbers...Break "tex[t]" like cheap rubbers, and we know you don't have shyt on MICS/Mike's like stat comparison of the Vick brothers

nice wordplay, ok punch

Of course G press the pen the ink the win on one of my sons n see his stress in brethren, dont usually go raw, but I caught the *Biznich* without a glove like one of those outfield webjems


kinda wierd line, i get it, but try n be more clear, commas and punctuation helps... nice punch

Ya pic shows T.I. I see why cause you must love d/r men you should astrive to be better than...Serve em a pound he cant shed, showerin flow thats tainted, since you wanna be him so bad, give a lil brain for change, spit top back, and rep bankead

nice nice, wordplay ok, concept flips were nice...


flow: MVP
Multies: MVP
punches: 1-G
personals: 1-G
wordplay: 1-G
enjoyment: 1-G
Structure: MVP
overall: 1-G


MVP u gotta put more wordplay in there, get harding hitting punches...

a lil adivce for 1-G: i had a hard time getting ur stuff the first time, its bout punctuation i guess, i'd say clearing up ya verse more and structuring it better... well, after that i'll say payce

[1-G_MC]

quick key, I cant edit thoroughly since Im not using a PC but watev 2-0me up up and away

[(x [____] %)DiViNe BuDhiZ]

MVP

Every focused-omen slashes necks till ya throat-is-open.. ya vocals-showin./
I'll choke-Rice-knowin. I'll make my "diss-connect" like broken-modems, and my verbal gats are loadin/[1]

Multies are good, good wordplay but been around and seen the disconnet like broken modems line before. Nice way to set up.


ima leave Young shattered-broken-battered-and-brusied when i crack-em-open-and-splatter-his-fluids /
in the bathroom-hoping-his-dad-is-so-stupid he hasn't-a-notion-it's-plastered-wit-dudes-kid/[2]

Sick multies, no real punch


Ill stun-this-vet-wit-a-spit capable of embarrassment wit the way im clownin-rookies/
So dont think your a man cuz ur cool with vets, cuz even dykes are down-wit-pussies/[3]

No

Ya flare is gone my blare is strong, but there’s no settlin this beef like ja rule interviews with Farrakhan/
Fare to bond the stare is long, you beating me absurd like bald chicks in hair salons/[4]

Nice multies, good overall metaphor, punch lack.

FINISHER:
You've got-to-lose, my lyrics concoctin-brews to leave you in shock-n-bruised/
You Beatin-who? Please, i could get more complex rhyme schemes from DR-Seuss/[5]

Dr. Suess punch is lame and played.


1-G_MC


This assinine pr!ck'll pantomime simple verses till this hate crime nine'll split you like it's a black n white issue/

No

Be honest sexuality u pondered since you stopped seeing pu$sy in ya offices like a long since retired gynecologyst

LOL

This aint beef fo real its more like smothered veal cause I can give ya a deep slumber to manage ya sheep numbers...Break "tex[t]" like cheap rubbers, and we know you don't have shyt on MICS/Mike's like stat comparison of the Vick brothers

LOL

Of course G press the pen the ink the win on one of my sons n see his stress in brethren, dont usually go raw, but I caught the *Biznich* without a glove like one of those outfield webjems


O_O

Ya pic shows T.I. I see why cause you must love d/r men you should astrive to be better than...Serve em a pound he cant shed, showerin flow thats tainted, since you wanna be him so bad, give a lil brain for change, spit top back, and rep bankead

Nice personal

Flow: MVP
Multies: MVP
punches: 1-G
personals: 1-G
wordplay: 1-G
enjoyment: 1-G
Structure: MVP
overall: 1-G

[Trigo]

1-G takes it

3-0, clean KO

-Closed