Some rhymes I wrote

[fluffy_death]

This is just one verse I did

yo
yo
When you pass the mic, I steal the show
I'ma blast like I ain't feel ya flow/
I do it fast and right, the real deal ya know,
Cuz when I grab the mic its like, WHOA/

What you gonna get mad at me?
Coming up to me harassin me?/
Askin me to tone it down, and get a glance at me
Mad cuz you aint never gonna be surpassin me?/

You just mad cuz your flow ain't no show
So you try to go low and throw a low blow/

I spit fire, god knows I can hit higher
than this shit writer, who says he big, but a big liar/

I'ma win this match, face the facts
I never been this bad, I laced the track/
This right here is history in the makin
Your mistakin, if you think you can erase it

Well how was that?

[Theory]

decent...
lacked flow
the lines came too early
meaning i had a beat on
and the rap wasnt flowin with it

rhymes...ehhhh....
try readin a dictionary to look for more better words

or go to
http://www.rhymezone.com/


a thesaurus
it helps for rhymes,meanings,synonyms,antonyms, shows the syllyble count

i started off using it untill i got more of a vocab

[nebotnebot]

all my rymhes are about shit i really did, no1 likes a stupid ass fake you arnt all that try this:
As we left emeny territory we saw the police and ambulance pass us in da hurry
thinking about those dead motherfukers we left on da cement
there faces fuked and bent
the cop chased us down the off ramp
we sprayed there ass like the fukin nazi concertratoin death camp.
we hit da corner plowed a street lamp...
and a girl under the fukin wheel
watch the skin fro her face skin peel
we new we were done when da pol I.C.E
Hit us like da rymhes from the DPG
Found dead on the front grass
I got out a beat that motherfukers ass
(versue begins)
that shit was hard you feel Jewels and Gems man

This is a slow beat in da background it fits great...
I'm also aware that some sites are strict on swearing if what i said volets this site rules in any way tell me and i will never do it again... and im sorry.. Dont band me