[1][King_MC] vs. [4]Obnoxious -TKO-

[obnoxious]

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
5 to win

battle length:

4 bars

voting criteria:

(A) No newbs
(B) Explanation votes only, meaning either or both of:

1. Categories:

Opener
Punches
Personals
Wordplay
Complexity
Vocab
Structure
Metaphors
Flow
Multi-Syllables
Creativity
Originality
Closer

2. Quotations of the best line(s) from both battlers, critique, and conclusion.

[[King_Mc]]

Check

[obnoxious]

check, ready when you are.

[[King_Mc]]

aiight ready...

End of the battle..? 'K' comes before 'O'..


Ob? nothin but a cheater the way he got to sway with the votes and shit..
and im not talkin bout runnin into some 'deep waters' when i say {O' a sis}!

cuz 'havin to get his best prewrittin bars' even got his secret supply scared
a rap site? like 'sun tan lotion to eyes', {O' aint meant} to apply there!

and im not 'settin blaze to fancy cars' when I be burning this "Vet"
cuz even Nox sees his lines are 'forced to rhyme' like the way {Ob' servant} of text!!

bones will be mangled! O couldnt bring out the 'beast in his game' if he was 'exposing the Bengals'
and when it comes to stretched verses '{Ob' long} gone' like the disposing of angles!!

[obnoxious]

the blow is madness! Rip you from Head to toe! so bad, leave ya creativity looking like baloney! wackness!
Heard of the SNES??? Homie, this bar alone'll make You "Turn green in the ring" like NightWolf's SHOULDER BARGES..........

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o217/0bn0xious/nightwolf.jpg

it's clout You clone! 8 battles a time - You still looking the Fool on one, convulsing, with mouth in foam
King's “not ready for skill”! so before start I swinging, Homie'll even "Mo shun to stop" like Bart and Lisa without a PHONE..........

Ripping this Fool up! AFTER THE KNOCK OUT! There'll be no Lifting this Rook up!
Key a nameflip at the Kid, so HARD, leave "MC lyte on his Feet" without the woman Giving a FOOT JOB..........

Nuke every flow you sent, when I'm done speaking, you'll be dead, not only reverent!
So, Homie, You'll always be wack on this site! cuz “Scared A.U.”??? is that a hydrophobic element???!!!!

http://www.biochem.northwestern.edu/holmgren/Glossary/Definitions/Def-N/nonpolar_molecule.html

[[King_Mc]]

UPPIN FOR VOTES

[[King_Mc]]

^^

[1-G_MC]

Flow:King
Punches:Ob
Personals:King...Ob had none *scratches temple*
Structure/set-up:Ob
Metas:Ob
Vote:Obnoxious

good battle

[Antic]

Aiight, here's my breakdown...good battle, btw....


King Mc:


Ob? nothin but a cheater the way he got to sway with the votes and shit..
and im not talkin bout runnin into some 'deep waters' when i say {O' a sis}!

-----This bar's alright...some name play, a personal swipe...Oasis is okay, but the context is off, I think. Oasis being a random watery, plant-like place in the middle of the desert...I wouldn't imagine they're deep by anymeans...Nice wordplay, needs better execution.

cuz 'havin to get his best prewrittin bars' even got his secret supply scared
a rap site? like 'sun tan lotion to eyes', {O' aint meant} to apply there!

-----O aint meant/ointment, right? Seems stretched, wordplay-wise....came personal...lacking a hard punch, but a good idea.

and im not 'settin blaze to fancy cars' when I be burning this "Vet"
cuz even Nox sees his lines are 'forced to rhyme' like the way {Ob' servant} of text!!

-----Observant/Observations is played, I did that shit too, not knowing...Punch is just okay. Nice attempt at a personal, though.

bones will be mangled! O couldnt bring out the 'beast in his game' if he was 'exposing the Bengals'
and when it comes to stretched verses '{Ob' long} gone' like the disposing of angles!!

-----I thought this was your strongest bar...multis were cool in this one...like the punch and how it was tied to the personal.

Overall Feedback: Nice flow, I appreciate seein' cats actually try to incorporate realistic flow...Hard Punches were a little lacking through out. Personals were good, though. Liked the multis. Decent drop, try to incorportate harder punches tied to your wordplay.




Obnoxious:


the blow is madness! Rip you from Head to toe! so bad, leave ya creativity looking like baloney! wackness!
Heard of the SNES??? Homie, this bar alone'll make You "Turn green in the ring" like NightWolf's SHOULDER BARGES..........

-----Flow is stretched the hell out, like in all your drops. Nice reference, ya big nerd, thought it was funny. Punch in this bar is pretty decent. Meta was cool.

it's clout You clone! 8 battles a time - You still looking the Fool on one, convulsing, with mouth in foam
King's “not ready for skill”! so before start I swinging, Homie'll even "Mo shun to stop" like Bart and Lisa without a PHONE..........

-----Wordplay cool....Punch is hard...multis alright...flow was better in this bar.

Ripping this Fool up! AFTER THE KNOCK OUT! There'll be no Lifting this Rook up!
Key a nameflip at the Kid, so HARD, leave "MC lyte on his Feet" without the woman Giving a FOOT JOB..........

-----Rook up/Foot job don't rhyme, at least in my head. You're a Brit, right? Maybe it does to you....Punch is good, wordplay is okay.

Nuke every flow you sent, when I'm done speaking, you'll be dead, not only reverent!
So, Homie, You'll always be wack on this site! cuz “Scared A.U.”??? is that a hydrophobic element???!!!!

-----Punch cool, multis decent, flow's alright....


Overall Feedback: Hate your flow, it's stretched out and ugly. Mad respect for your wordplay, your punches. No personals? Uninteresting, IMO. You're ill, though.


Opener- Ob
Punches- Ob
Personals- King
Wordplay- Ob
Complexity- Ob
Vocab- Ob
Structure- King
Metaphors- Ob
Flow- King
Multi-Syllables- Meh, tie.
Creativity- Ob
Originality- Nothing that blew my mind.
Closer- King

My vote goes to Obnoxious....good battle.

[[King_Mc]]

thanks for voting 2-0

btw, good battle Ob..

[LocoKidd]

King MC

Ob? nothin but a cheater the way he got to sway with the votes and shit..
and im not talkin bout runnin into some 'deep waters' when i say {O' a sis}!
lol,this was cool. punch wasn't that hard hitting

cuz 'havin to get his best prewrittin bars' even got his secret supply scared
a rap site? like 'sun tan lotion to eyes', {O' aint meant} to apply there!
decent nameplay

and im not 'settin blaze to fancy cars' when I be burning this "Vet"
cuz even Nox sees his lines are 'forced to rhyme' like the way {Ob' servant} of text!!
ehh...

bones will be mangled! O couldnt bring out the 'beast in his game' if he was 'exposing the Bengals'
and when it comes to stretched verses '{Ob' long} gone' like the disposing of angles!!
first line was aight,second line saved the bars,cool finisher



obnoxious

the blow is madness! Rip you from Head to toe! so bad, leave ya creativity looking like baloney! wackness!
Heard of the SNES??? Homie, this bar alone'll make You "Turn green in the ring" like NightWolf's SHOULDER BARGES..........
coo punch


it's clout You clone! 8 battles a time - You still looking the Fool on one, convulsing, with mouth in foam
King's “not ready for skill”! so before start I swinging, Homie'll even "Mo shun to stop" like Bart and Lisa without a PHONE..........
this was decent,wording was off

Ripping this Fool up! AFTER THE KNOCK OUT! There'll be no Lifting this Rook up!
Key a nameflip at the Kid, so HARD, leave "MC lyte on his Feet" without the woman Giving a FOOT JOB..........
decent..

Nuke every flow you sent, when I'm done speaking, you'll be dead, not only reverent!
So, Homie, You'll always be wack on this site! cuz “Scared A.U.”??? is that a hydrophobic element???!!!!
meh..




Punches-ob
Personals-King
Wordplay-King
Complexity-ob
Vocab-ob
Structure-King
Metaphors-ob
Flow-King
Multi-King
Creativity-ob
Originality-King
Closer-King


Vote: King_MC[/b]

[obnoxious]

upping

[dannyruxspin]

Im pretty sure K-EMCEE meant for a play on words with the Oasis remark, seeing as the way he broke it up, and come on, antic, it wouldnt've made sense if K-EMCEE said "Large body ocean" instead of "Oasis". LOL.

I did happen to enjoy K-EMCEE's few bars though. He played on his name as much as possible, and was quite clever.

Obnoxious, I did not understand really anything. And no, Im not clicking that SNES link you put up, or the Element link. Not everyone is going to understand what you are saying, and quite frankly, I didn't understand any of your punches. Hip Hop would've been dead YEARS ago if every artist stopped a song to explain what they just meant, so why does it fly in text? I didn't really play SNES, I don't watch the Simpsons, and I damn sure know nothing about science.

You started the bars great, but then you just went off on some sort of tangent that really, would take me too much time and effort to attempt to understand, and well, text battles aren't that important.




I give this to K-Emcee, for well, not being Obnoxious. LOL.

[AKA-Ability.]

-DONT BE A DUMBASS, GO BACK TO RD1-

[[King_Mc]]

2-1 Ob.. we'll have it first to 3..

and thanks for voting dannyruxspin, but since u did not understand his verse, ur vote cant count...

[J Day]

King MC

Ob? nothin but a cheater the way he got to sway with the votes and shit..
and im not talkin bout runnin into some 'deep waters' when i say {O' a sis}!
lol, cool

cuz 'havin to get his best prewrittin bars' even got his secret supply scared
a rap site? like 'sun tan lotion to eyes', {O' aint meant} to apply there!
i guess

and im not 'settin blaze to fancy cars' when I be burning this "Vet"
cuz even Nox sees his lines are 'forced to rhyme' like the way {Ob' servant} of text!!
nah..

bones will be mangled! O couldnt bring out the 'beast in his game' if he was 'exposing the Bengals'
and when it comes to stretched verses '{Ob' long} gone' like the disposing of angles!!
lol..favorite bar



obnoxious

the blow is madness! Rip you from Head to toe! so bad, leave ya creativity looking like baloney! wackness!
Heard of the SNES??? Homie, this bar alone'll make You "Turn green in the ring" like NightWolf's SHOULDER BARGES..........
tooo stretched..not tight punch


it's clout You clone! 8 battles a time - You still looking the Fool on one, convulsing, with mouth in foam
King's “not ready for skill”! so before start I swinging, Homie'll even "Mo shun to stop" like Bart and Lisa without a PHONE..........
bad wording..but straight

Ripping this Fool up! AFTER THE KNOCK OUT! There'll be no Lifting this Rook up!
Key a nameflip at the Kid, so HARD, leave "MC lyte on his Feet" without the woman Giving a FOOT JOB..........
lol..coo..favorite bar

Nuke every flow you sent, when I'm done speaking, you'll be dead, not only reverent!
So, Homie, You'll always be wack on this site! cuz “Scared A.U.”??? is that a hydrophobic element???!!!!
pssh..




Punches-ob
Personals-King
Wordplay-King
Complexity-ob
Vocab-ob
Structure-King
Metaphors-ob
Flow-King
Multi-King
Creativity-King
Originality-King
Closer-King


Vote: King_MC

[obnoxious]

this guy is a complete noob, & im not accepting sub par votes in RD3, so it's still 2-1.

[Blow]

Opener O
Punches K
Personals K
Wordplay K
Complexity K
Vocab O
Structure K
Metaphors -
Flow K
Multi-Syllables K
Creativity K
Originality O
Closer K

O/A=King MC close battle yall...

[obnoxious]

What is it with RD3 and newbies voting?? I assume the votes in here are supposed to be by people who actually have some skills. The only reason I have to keep bringing this up is because too many of the noobs on this site just vote in here gratuitously and wouldn't know a multi from a punchline.

1) If you are newb don't vote
2) If you're on a losing streak don't vote
3) If you have net wins below 100 don't vote

if that excludes you, you're a newb.

[::Severe::]

Punches - Obnoxious
Personals - King
Wordplay - King
Complexity - Obnoxious
Vocab - Obnoxious
Structure - King
Metaphors - Obnoxious
Flow - King
Multi - King
Creativity - Tie
Originality - Obnoxious
Closer - Obnoxious


Vote: Obnoxious

[Muphaser]

I would vote, But I've not had over 100 battles over the internet... too bad

[obnoxious]

I would vote, But I've not had over 100 battles over the internet... too bad


no, vote if you think you know what you're talking about. I was just being honest about what I think is fair. Although ideally I'd expect a certain standard of voters, RD isn't the type of spot where that can happen, or happen consistently. As for battles, I think of my actually wins or lose here, I don't go by official votes, although I record my losses and wins by the official votes. If you think you're a vet or if you think you'd know what you are talking about if you vote, vote. I've said what I wanted to say, vote against me if you think I didn't merit a win, and vice versa if you think I did. My problem with voting here is people who think they're a vet because of their post count but lack skills and the associated sensibilities to judge basic skills like multi's or wordplay. I just happen to be someone who will speak his mind irrespective of what or who it concerns.

[Muphaser]

Opener Ob
Punches O
Personals KMC
Wordplay Ob
Complexity O
Vocab O
Structure KMC
Metaphors O
Flow KMC
Multi-Syllables KMC
Creativity Ob
Originality Ob
Closer King Mc


Vote goes to Ob

[[King_Mc]]

we will disclude the newbie votes.. 4-1 Ob.. Good Battle Man..

-locked