Freestyle Need Feed back

[Rukahs71]

Let me introduce myself muhfukahs/When I light tha fuse it's gonna be Rukahs.
U might catch me on tha scene/posted up puffin on green
Tryin 2 serve up tha fiends/Nah,this ain't a dream.
Real life sellin'em icecream/So my ice will be gaurenteed.
Everyday hustin' bricks/Brings me troublin' risks.
On my Corna/Cops set up shop/and come right 4 ya.
It's rough when theres no luck/Instead u get cuffed when they call ya bluff.
So when ya on tha grind/Make sure its u they don't find.
I've been held in custody/No bail and gaurds cussin' me.
I began seein' Demons/Maybe I was dreamin.
Could've been a sign tellin' me that tha
streets were fiendin.
I'm a money maka/So do me a favor
when u see ya boy/Know Im'a hot patata

[lyrical thinka]

ok... main problem right therr....ya style is not unique... its common as hell... i can name over 200 people u rap like right now.... no one cares if u sell o feens or how many guns u got... its not affecting them at all... its like "random statements".... like me sayin , "dont think i dont got my gun son// i juss shot someone and it was fun//.... nothing we havent heard... so find ya own style and get wit it.... no disrespect