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BloodySkyz
01-12-2007, 07:55 PM
please somebody help me i need help badly i can not do punches i absolutely dont do punches dont know how to multi dont know exactly what to start my raps or freestyles off with even tho i kno what i wanna talk about and i dont know how to keep my flow goin i write and it get a little good and then im out of ideas or things 2 say

Trigo
01-13-2007, 09:13 AM
Did u read the stickies in this forum? Read all of them and u'll understand

The Professional
01-13-2007, 06:16 PM
First tip: Use punctuation. In the English language, there are these little marks called periods and commas. They let the reader know when to pause.

mello2
02-15-2007, 08:37 PM
dude, i have the same problem, u gotta keep workin at it, im nowhere near perfect but i keep goin at it everyday, thats only u can better...

EyEcRu:ST
02-16-2007, 07:43 AM
try rappin bout things around you if you run out of things 2 say

brown town sd living
02-16-2007, 01:55 PM
nah nah nah....u got to post up or write something that u got alot of feeling for.....how u were raised or where u grew or something of the like.... dont worry bout waht ppl will say, post it on the freestyle forum n ull get tips

just say that u want tips on how to do things, n how ur writing looks

just play wit it....u cant get worse, unless u da kid d nice