need help

[~Yung_Money~]

alright get this, i know wat methaphors and similes and multis and all dat are, but i cant write dem off of the top of my head for shit, i completely flunk english so im startin from scratch on dis one, could anybody help me out

[lyrical thinka]

well thats ya first problem... u need to try... cant get nowhere doubting yaself... dont be afraid... post up what u got and let the emcees do the criticizng... it helps and works...