Another one that i need to some help on

[J~Rob~525]

See back in da days everyone was cool wit one another now it just seems like everyone is against one another...We all dont talk anymore not that i care or anything but your the one who brought this shit upon yorself Take responsibility you stupid fuck....

So i hear yor running yor mouth trying to start some beef when all u really doing is wasting yor breath and chattering yor teeth. u think yor all big and bad cuz fuck people over when really in da long run you will be the one turned over and laying 6 feet under all becuz u said the wrong shit to the wrong person

all yor words are just a bunch of clutter but when u get in da army they better call u colonel mustard u think yor life is incompolete but wait until u sink and no one weaps when yor gone but i will be thinkin of u as i sit on dat toilet seat takin a hot steamin shit

[lyrical thinka]

look dude ima be the first, (but definetly not the last) to tell ya that this is not made for stories... Most overused phrase ya gonna hear is elevate.... I mean u have the right intentions but every thing else is lacked.... juss follow rap dogs tutorial lessons and u should get better... im stilll bettering my self as we speak...