Travesty(0) vs. Artik Phrost (3) ..KO.. Closed ..

[Travesty]

1:30 - 2:30 minutes
Hook is optional...
Commercial beats are okay to use...but come with your own style on it..
House rules on the votes...
No beef.. just a battle for fun..
Due one week after check in...
(2 day grace period with that... so you can be at the most.. 2 days late.. but if at all possible try to get it done by teh due date.. but hell i know shit happens and i understand that.)


Anyways yo... Check. My shit's due... Monday, January 29th, 2007

[Artik Phrost]

yep yep.. i shall have it then mayne

[Travesty]

Got mine already hommie..... Peep game...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=621994&songID=4926820


Lyrics-

Gunz up hoes down, tha'z how the hook goes//
And i aint the one, so guess who's the hoe//

I aint gonna say that this man likes it in the ass//
but if i made a pass, i bet this faggot wouldn't pass/

You weren't in the plan, but i'm servin you DAMN//
spin the blades so you can say i'm turnin your fans//

And he's more bitch than any of us would ever even think//
Gotta instrest in music, but he aint puttin up any links//

You aint got any 'cents', so how you gon' have a market-cost?//
Eatin snow, tha'z the only time that somebody's feelin artik-phrost//

It's time for me to end this shit, let's just crack-down//
Raps are borin, tha'z why he's from naptown//

Cuz got mac-now, got the mic-gripped/?
And if you comin' at me hommie, you're career might-slip//

You aint got enough hype-to-spit/
So you might get ripped... BLAT BLAT good nigt bitch//


I gotta swiss-made switch-blade//
put into ya, bitch-made rib-cage//
You don't think you takin an L? Then try and bet me//
Cuz i got more punches then jackie chan and jet li//
Murderously hurtin these, unworhty Mcs//
Personally-be merkin with ease//
I'mma a savage muhfukka, cuz i toke the jays//
But what kinda faggot averages fifteen posts a day?//
Touch me on a collab man? That aint gon' happen//
Phost gettin ugly on the pad with his rappen//
Rollin on ya block, tuckin stolen glock//
I got roman rocks, with the golden stocks//
And i'm blowin shots, cuz i own the cops//
He smokin' a lot, tryin to get it official//
And i aint the type to try diss your initals//
But i aint talkin about BET, when i leave you in the basment//
Cuz the only good AP, i've seen means advanced placement//

[Travesty]

Due Tommorrow for you hommie... Please try to have it by then.

[Artik Phrost]

I'll Post Tomorrow... and yea, Im A Female....

[Artik Phrost]

yea... 2morrow evening...

[Travesty]

lol.. my bad about the gender thing... i just sort of assumed... My mistake.

[Artik Phrost]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=650337&songID=4942218

I’mma Tie Up The Little Boy, Put Him In The Closet
Playing With Them Little Toys Get That Ass Tossed Quick
Soldier Girl, You Don’t Want War
Just Window Shopping , You Aint Ready For Whats In Store


V1.
See, I told ya dad not to play with them hoes
Now some trailor trash birth a dude that tucks on the low
And how gangster is that?
I woulda been ya pops but I made ya mom suck my strap
And dude call war, insist its no beef
He know where im from, make it easier to sleep (NAPTOWN!)
How you battle hardcore? And its just for fun
I never seen anybody practicing to be a thug
Bet, you and ya goons go write up a script
Like who gone react wen the heat beside ya lips
Travesty the type to faint like a bitch
But Ion really think that was mentioned in the script
Ion talk off the mic, I smack kids
While he reaching for the waist like a little faggot
And I don’t really you, personal, Trav
But ya pic look like it was intened for a gay personal ad


HOOK x2
I’mma Tie Up The Little Boy, Put Him In The Closet
Playing With Them Little Toys Get That Ass Tossed Quick
Soldier Girl, You Don’t Want War
Just Window Shopping , You Aint Ready For Whats In Store


V2.
Yea I checked you out, but I aint think it was phat
Thought I was being punked, I aint know maculley Caulking rapped
I tear him a new hole, and naw I aint violent
Said it himself, pain aint torchure when he likes its
I may seem racist but… it’s the truth
If you wanna hang wit big niggas, here go a noose
Tie it around a branch and then go jump
Now you like ya father when he got ya moms knocked up
Extra, extra: hear him when he spits
Flow like the term “on beat” don’t exsist
He need to wake up and smell the fresh air
Dumb ass thinking medium quality gonna get him somewhere

[Travesty]

sound like you a lil pissed off..heh... Anyways.... Lets get that voting thing goin on

[Artik Phrost]

naw... thats just how i battle... all or nuffin.. lol, no beef fam!

[~Yung_Money~]

dayum, artik had a raw as track, we finna have to do a collab fa sho

flow: artik(hands down)
delivery: artik
punches: tie
emotion: artik
similes: travesty
metas: tie

overall i think dis battle is one sided, travesty came wit a good track, but didnt show enough enthusiasm into wat he was doin, and didnt sound like he had much confidence

keep it up dough and nice battle y'all

overall: artik

travesty
(check my callout i wanna battle you)

[Trigo]

flow: artik was almost always on beat... trav was off, especially the second verse... yo trav, if u look, ur second verse has an odd number of lbars, ya had 17 bars ... and thats what threw u off... cuz u finished the verse on the snare, the one on which u should hav finished the 16th bar... Ur lines were to short, u mess up at the beginning putting a 2 bars in one line space and then u continue the whole verse spitting the wrong bar at the wrong time.. look:

this is how it should go:

1,2
3,4
5,6
7,8
9,10
ecc.....

This is what you did:

1,2 and 3/4ths of 3
1/3rd of 3 and so forth... the whole time ur way off till u reach this point:

But what kinda faggot averages fifteen posts a day?//
Touch me on a collab man? That aint gon' happen//

ya see, here you put both those lines together, but they dont go together, the rime tells us that... if it was text talk, we would say that this bar has no rime (bar as in 2 lines)

when it should be:

I'mma a savage *Gosh Darnit*, cuz i toke the jays//
But what kinda faggot averages fifteen posts a day?//

Touch me on a collab man? That aint gon' happen//
Phost gettin ugly on the pad with his rappen//

Ya see, you were way off, and through out the whole verse you try to correct urself, see here:

Rollin on ya block, tuckin stolen glock//
I got roman rocks, with the golden stocks//
And i'm blowin shots, cuz i own the cops//

(text talk) You put 3 lines into one bar.. thats a no no, escpecially in audio.. It throws it all off, but ya had to cuz u were already off... you had to go back to rimeing cuz ya also had this:

Phost gettin ugly on the pad with his rappen//
Rollin on ya block, tuckin stolen glock//

and it dosnt role cuz it dosnt rime...

hope u understood what im trying to tell ya.. sry if ya didnt, my english keeps getting worse



delivery: artik
punches: tie
emotion: artik
beat: tie
metas: artik

Overall: Artik.... keep uppin ta both

[Masta-T]

Travesty


Beat:: not feelin the beat that much

Flow:: ehhh...fumble in a few places

Punches:: somethin 'bout peopel eatin snow is the only time they feel artik phrost....Cuz the only good AP, i've seen means advanced placement//....ehhh...

Personals:: what kinda faggot averages 15 posts a day...thats about it

quality:: needs help

Delivery:: pretty monotonish...need to bring ya delivery up

Overall:: keep at it playa, you'll get shit down eventually...13/20



Artik Phrost


Beat:: too slow for my taste

Delivery::...how old is you???...it sounded like you was just readin in a high pitch voice

Flow:: flow is a bit more on point than travesty

hook:: kinda annoying

Vocals:: TURN THEM SHITS UP...can barely hear ya

Personal:: But ya pic look like it was intened for a gay personal ad ....lol saw his pic & heard this..laughed a lil

Overall::...you need work too....ya both do 14/20


Official Vote:: Artik Phrost...but not by much

[Artik Phrost]

^ :-( i dont think your speakers werk.. the beat is hollow during the hook.. how cant you hear me?... and have you ever heard a street battle? people do spit that slow... anyway.. thank ya maaaaan


thats 3-0

good battle Travesty