Text: Abilities(0-0) vs. Grifta(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 OM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

BOTH EMCEES WILL AGREE ON THE NUMBER OF BARS


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.



You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Grifta]

ahh this is my opinion, just see if u agree

- no crew votes

- 4 bars (short and sweet)

let us know what you think.

[Abilities]

^^^ thats good...

[Grifta]

aight its all good then

[Grifta]

aight, man this text leagues already pissin me off! lol

yo, yo,

leave battling to professionals mister* your rhymes are inadequate
my rhymes just flow outta me just like a fucking flaccid bladder-get

your rhymes are defective and flawed like you've already been defeated
you claim that your abilities but i believe your just conceited**

see these rhymes will leave you speechless like you choked-on-penis
its like pleasuring Einstein, when he says he "Strokes-Off-Genius"***

now your nothing but a voter, i can tell by checking-your-posts
people read your rhymes and be like "None Of The Above" im decking-your-votes


*his msn is mr professional
**Dictionary meaning for "conceited": having an excessively favorable opinion of one's abilities, appearance, etc.
***his signature says ".Stroke Of Genius"

[Abilities]

To me he's not the real thing like butter to parkay, somemone should juss tell him that he's sick in the wrong way... n' he scared to come out, I'm juss givin em small play... so I'm not reppin a house in Hogwarts, when I tell you "Gryffindor's all day"

4 bars (short and sweet)

Punch hit u 1 time n' u'll be left with more than 3 scars... get hit wit a "scratched whip" like dudes who key cars, try n' score wit me, ya corpse get beat dawg... but buying a "single pack of kit-kats" only time u'll get 4 short and sweet bars...

yea multis has always been my weak spot

Now how u gon admit to ya weakness? well I guess you can learn from me like students to teachers, so take notes on these multies n' don't hand blank sheets in, or else thats "one cat you'll never get" like trying to own pumas that ain't sneakers...




only dropped 3 cuz ur bars are short... if u want me to drop a 4th one tho juss pm me

[Grifta]

na 3's fine.

[Grifta]

uppin for votes.

[Dex Aspen]

you need to break that habit of uppin shit in here,it will get voted on...


Punches: both were seriously lacking any real cruelity,seemed kinda ameturish and something you would hear on Blue's Clue's.The one good punch was Abilities..

"but buying a "single pack of kit-kats" only time u'll get 4 short and sweet bars... "

vote-Abilities

Personals:This wasn't really close.Grifta was tidy and neat and got straight to the point.Where Ab's kinda danced around and didn't seem to go anywhere.

vote-Grifta

Multies:Seriously lacking from both particpants.Grifta had none and Ab's bars are to stretched to call any of his multi's.

vote-none

Metas:Both did ok in this portion.Nothing spectactular or a "slam dunk".

vote-Grifta

Flow:Ab's...your bars are to stretched for your flow to be consistant.Grifta's was choppy in spots but kept the bars short to give it better tempo.

vote-Grifta

Wordplay:A lot of filler words from Ab's and kinda simplistic.Grifta's lacked emotion but was more consistant

vote-Grifta

Creativity:Grifta's was predictable but enjoyable were Ab's seemed to slop some mess together.Take more time Ab's...this is a contest not a keystyle.

vote-Grifta

Nameplay:Grifta was the only one who came with any.

" see these rhymes will leave you speechless like you choked-on-penis
its like pleasuring Einstein, when he says he "Strokes-Off-Genius"*** "

vote-Grifta

Complexity:I think with some real competition both of you would have been mopped up in this catagory.I was real disappointed from both efforts.Gotta give this one to Grifta on the sole basis that his spit seemed more polished.

vote-Grifta

Consistency:The strecthed bars comes back to haunt Ab's in this catagory also.The lack of flow mixed with punches did you in.

vote-Grifta

Vocab:Ab's had one word...Gryffindor,otherwise everything was "Hop On Pop" simple.Grifta had the word flaccid and seemed have a little more depth.

vote-Grifta

Although my voting was lopsided neither person really seem to want it.I was disappointed with both entries and hope the next time they decide to put more thought and effort into it.I hope this wasn't your guy's "A" game because you will get stomped by the stiffer competition.


Overall-Grifta





-{A}-:out

[aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE]

leave battling to professionals mister* your rhymes are inadequate
my rhymes just flow outta me just like a fucking flaccid bladder-get

I like the worplay here but the punch/wordplay could've been executed a lot better because the punch didn't hit that hard...

your rhymes are defective and flawed like you've already been defeated
you claim that your abilities but i believe your just conceited**

Again, good worplay but the punch just falls short... Filler made it seem forced...

see these rhymes will leave you speechless like you choked-on-penis
its like pleasuring Einstein, when he says he "Strokes-Off-Genius"***

Last line was a hard hitter but the filler killed it... Drop those fillers!!!

now your nothing but a voter, i can tell by checking-your-posts
people read your rhymes and be like "None Of The Above" im decking-your-votes

Again good wordplay and punch was aight but not hard hitting enough for a closer

Overall your verse lacked in hard hitting punches and even your wordplay was forced + the fillers really killed the overall strength of your bars... It seemed like all you were concerned with was forcing those multis in - Judging by your post -

Overall 7/10 - Barely -






Abilities

To me he's not the real thing like butter to parkay, somemone should juss tell him that he's sick in the wrong way... n' he scared to come out, I'm juss givin em small play... so I'm not reppin a house in Hogwarts, when I tell you "Gryffindor's all day"

Nice, creative, original and aight punch.... Great opener....

Punch hit u 1 time n' u'll be left with more than 3 scars... get hit wit a "scratched whip" like dudes who key cars, try n' score wit me, ya corpse get beat dawg... but buying a "single pack of kit-kats" only time u'll get 4 short and sweet bars...

Again nice, creative and original and a good personal....

Now how u gon admit to ya weakness? well I guess you can learn from me like students to teachers, so take notes on these multies n' don't hand blank sheets in, or else thats "one cat you'll never get" like trying to own pumas that ain't sneakers...

Good wordplay but played on lots... Decent closer....

Overall nice verse... Came in strong... Hit hard and multis and flow were decent but could've blended better... Punches are what wins a battle and you delivered on that front nearly taking all cats....

Overall 8.9/10

Punches: Abilities
Personals: Abilities
Multies: Abilities
Metas: None
Flow: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Creativity: Abilities
Nameplay: Grifta
Complexity: Abilities
Consistency: Abilities
Vocab: TIE


Overall vote - Abilities

REASON

Abilities lines were not forced, flowed good and hit hard... Griftas lines were forced... Full of fillers and didn't hit hard...

-aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE-

[Grifta]

..aight thanks guys, 1-1 uppin

[[King_Mc]]

Punches: G
Personals: TIE
Multies: G
Metas: TIE
Flow: G
Wordplay: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Nameplay: G
Complexity: A
Consistency: G
Vocab: A

OVERALL----> Grifta

[Cool c]

Punches: Abilities
Personals: Abilities
Multies: Abilities
Metas: None
Flow: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Creativity: Abilities
Nameplay: Grifta
Complexity: Abilities
Consistency: Abilities
Vocab: TIE

vote=
Abilities

[Grifta]

haha 2-2 uppin'

[LocoKidd]

Punches: Abilities..more creative
Personals: Abilities..'griffindor line was dope'
Multies: Abilities..had more
Metas: Grifta
Flow: Grifta...bars less strecthed
Wordplay: Abilities
Creativity: Abilities
Nameplay: Abilities
Complexity: Abilities
Consistency: Grifta
Vocab: --


Overall- Abilities

3-2

[Trigo]

Punches: abilities
Personals: abilities... his were better.. playing on what u said
Multies: abilities..
Metas: abilities
Flow: grifta... whats ta say
Wordplay: none had any
Creativity: abilites... grifta, urs was to plain
Nameplay: none
Complexity: abilites
Consistency: abilities
Vocab: tie... nuthing special from both

Overall Vote: abilities... he just came harder with punches and metz

[LocoKidd]

uppin for one last vote

[Artik Phrost]

Punches: ab
Personals: ab
Multies: ab
Metas: ab
Flow: tie
Wordplay: ab
Creativity: ab
Nameplay: ab
Complexity: eh
Consistency: ab
Vocab: eh


V/ Abilities

yep... harder punches