Text: Nuerologik(0-0) vs. Invincible(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

BOTH EMCEES WILL AGREE ON THE NUMBER OF BARS


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.



You are allowed to PM me your verses

[[Neurologik]]

Check

[InViNcIbLe]

Chekk...

AhA...

[[Neurologik]]

You wanna do 3-5 bars?

[InViNcIbLe]

sure..

AhA...

[[Neurologik]]

Whas with tha aha?

[InViNcIbLe]

Real Key shit...
Member Dis...
Started At 7:34...

Mite as well hand Yu Ya Death Certificate famz....

Walk wit me....



Against shady? Now U've Awaked-Da-Dead Cuz He cant C My Raps/Wraps Like I Taped-His-Head..
Hear da Hiss Of Bones Wen I Blade-Ya-Flesh Cuz " U A Pro At RappIng? " Pleez lik Bad Tailors Dis Nigga Cant Even Make-a-Thread..!//1

NO MORE F.UCKIN ROUND...

Dawg Like "Hydrants Blowing Swiftly" U Kno Da Pumps-Bust-Wit-Fashion...
J 1 oF da Best Y Ask-it?? Cuz Ya 'Garbage Lines Is Goin NOWHERE' like Dump-Trucks-In-Traffic!!

No Need 2 Bring Out da Clips I'll Beat Dis Bum-wit-my-Hands... N U Cudnt "Spit Invincible'' If U Had ya Gums-On-A-Fan!!
He Tryna Spit So Many Verses His Lungs-Gettin-Cramped Plus "its EZ 2 Put a Beat On Snare" Like I Played Drums-4-a-Band!

Ya Cudn't Cast-Pure/Casper Text If U Paid-Me-2-Ghostwrite.. J Changin-Da-Flow-Twice.. Da CumBack Yet Still Remainin-da-Most-Nice.
Like Charring Tools Dont Hate-Cuz-I-Toast-Mics N imma Show U Da "Cold Defeat" Like a Parade-On-Cold-Ice...

END IT WITH A KO CHIN CHECK..

My Flow On Point... U Make rackets. Underdog... Wow, Ur Much Worst Guess RD.. wanted to Display-Some-Shocks!!
Da Fifth-Spray-On-Ock.. N Even If U "Stole Accesories From Movie Sets" In Dis Bout U Still Wudnt Walk-Away-Wit-Some-Props...

NIKKA!!


Aint Dun dis ish in a minute... but w/e...
G'LucK.
EXPLANATIONS:
DIS NIGGA DONT KNOW HOW TO POST ISH....
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?p=374427&highlight=#374427

AhA...

[[Neurologik]]

Thought uu were banned from battlin?

{I have allowed him to drop in the league,but he's caught again he will be banned,so just drop your verese - LocoKidd}

[[Neurologik]]

Come on man, why you Laughin at me? I ain't tha one usin other peoples lyrics to win....

Bitch!


Ayo, Looks like Tha baby dog got his teeth but he usin em wrong/
Chewin others then spittin they lyrics and abusin their songs//

Come on man, Stop talkin shit and think of ya own ideas/
All ya spit is shit flow like you had verbal diarrhoea//

Noobs passed/past you, Why you in my presence/present, i gotta future what does yours behold?/
Playin wit chewtoys, Most people grew outta bitin when they were four years old//

Don't wanna battle you coz i got higher standards than that man its tha principle/
Like a boat he jus ridin on others flow, s'why he calls himself invincible//

Dont like bitin personally, proof was solid as concrete, jus admit yo cheat/
But i aint wastin ma breath, what ever floats ya boat man jus dont waste tha spit on me//


Locokidd you spelt my name wrong on both threads, its neurologik, e before the u man

[InViNcIbLe]

igght uppin...
Yo Can anyone else edit posts??
Cuz I Was finna edit sum grammar mistakes... but iono if da board
got changed or sumthing but holla..
n bump for votes

AhA...

[[Neurologik]]

How does tha votin happen in tha text league? Do other text league members vote or is it open to anyone?

[InViNcIbLe]

^^ Dont Know.....

UPPIN!

(I know U Niggaz B Readin Dis Shit.....)

AhA...

[[Neurologik]]

Yeah dis got more views than anythin cept the sign up thread

[>JustIN:SANE<]

every1 is waitin so move to tha back of tha line and wait like tha rest........












j/p i think they have set voters or mods vote or somehting i dunno

[InViNcIbLe]

Uppin GODDAMN

AhA...

[Jeebin]

Punches: Invincible...hearing neuro go everyline about biting was boring
Personals: Tie...the drum line was as good as all the biting lines...so tie
Multies: Invincible...his were simply more compleex and frequent
Metas: Tie...the thread line has been used, but his movie line was nice, and neuro ad some good stuff on bitin
Flow: Neurologik...i thought invincible's was too choppy at some parts
Wordplay: Invincible...simply ahd more of it, plus used it well
Creativity: Tie...neuro stetched the biting topic more than i could, and invinvible was simply creative all over the place
Nameplay: Invincible...the snare line ws nice, but neuro's invincible line was wack, made no sense
Complexity: Invincible...u can juss tell by lookin at it
Consistency: Neurologik...he was consitent with the biting topic, wat can i say
Vocab: Invincible...neuro had no vocab wat so ever

Overall Vote: Invincible...juss came harder, neuro shoulda not focused on the biting topic so much...i'm sure he coulda done better

[InViNcIbLe]

DaTS WAT IT IZ G...
1-0 UPPIN

AhA...

[Dex Aspen]

Punches:none-Vince had the soft dump truck and parade line and Logik had a couple but where just as weak.
Personals:Logik-Vince is gonna get shit on about that bitin shit as long as he spits here and needs to make up for it by coming extra crafty..which he didn't.
Multies:Vince-Logik came up real short in this catagory...basically nothing.
Metas:Vince-Logik's where very basic where Vince's took a little creativity to put em together.
Flow:none-both styles are horrible.Vince's is over-hyphnated and forced where logik's is stretched and non-exsistent.
Wordplay:Vince-Logik's just seemed more basic,although Vince's wasn't really nothing to high five your buddy's about either it just had that extra panash.
Creativity:none-I think both of these dudes wrote this in-between taking a shit and racing back to the TV because the commericals were just about over.
Nameplay:none-The Snare line was as ineffective as the invincible line.
Complexity:Vince-The complexity Vince puts into his spits destoys his flow but it was just more unique then Logik's.Both of you could benefit from a basic writing class.
Consistency:Logik-He was relentless and knew exactly what spot to exploit.Vince was all over the place and I couldn't pick up the spots where one topic turned into another.It just seemed all willy-nilly.
Vocab:none-I like an ecclectic vocab and this was void of any.

I wasn't gonna vote on this originally because of Vince's past disgressions but I also wanted to see if he could hold his own.Which he did....but then again he didn't have very much competition.Logik...your style looks good but it's very simple,cats aren't gonna go easy on you in the future just because you might be new to this...time to step up if you wanna be taken seriously as a force to be reckoned with.


Overall-Invincible



-{A}-:out

[aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE]

Against shady? Now U've Awaked-Da-Dead Cuz He cant C My Raps/Wraps Like I Taped-His-Head..
Hear da Hiss Of Bones Wen I Blade-Ya-Flesh Cuz " U A Pro At RappIng? " Pleez lik Bad Tailors Dis Nigga Cant Even Make-a-Thread..!//1

Good wordplay and punches were aight... Oringinal and fresh... Good to see.... Good opener

Dawg Like "Hydrants Blowing Swiftly" U Kno Da Pumps-Bust-Wit-Fashion...
J 1 oF da Best Y Ask-it?? Cuz Ya 'Garbage Lines Is Goin NOWHERE' like Dump-Trucks-In-Traffic!!

LOL good worplay... Original and fresh again...

No Need 2 Bring Out da Clips I'll Beat Dis Bum-wit-my-Hands... N U Cudnt "Spit Invincible'' If U Had ya Gums-On-A-Fan!!
He Tryna Spit So Many Verses His Lungs-Gettin-Cramped Plus "its EZ 2 Put a Beat On Snare" Like I Played Drums-4-a-Band!

LOL Good nameplay... On your name? WTF? Again fresh and original and an alright hitter....

Ya Cudn't Cast-Pure/Casper Text If U Paid-Me-2-Ghostwrite.. J Changin-Da-Flow-Twice.. Da CumBack Yet Still Remainin-da-Most-Nice.
Like Charring Tools Dont Hate-Cuz-I-Toast-Mics N imma Show U Da "Cold Defeat" Like a Parade-On-Cold-Ice...

Great closer... Sen lines like this but you made it fresh and original... Good punch but lacked a hard hit....

My Flow On Point... U Make rackets. Underdog... Wow, Ur Much Worst Guess RD.. wanted to Display-Some-Shocks!!
Da Fifth-Spray-On-Ock.. N Even If U "Stole Accesories From Movie Sets" In Dis Bout U Still Wudnt Walk-Away-Wit-Some-Props...

Aight closer but not hard hitting and line was played... Good closer but ...(hangs) didn't work for you, Didn't feel the suspence...

Overall, You had a good verse all round with a good attempt to cover all cats, liked your originality in your wordplay and punches... However... Your verse started strong and ended a lot weaker....

Overall 9/10




Ayo, Looks like Tha baby dog got his teeth but he usin em wrong/
Chewin others then spittin they lyrics and abusin their songs//

?? Punch... Wordplay present but not Great....

Come on man, Stop talkin shit and think of ya own ideas/
All ya spit is shit flow like you had verbal diarrhoea//

Ok punch but delivery sucked... Great chance for a hard hitting punch with fantastic wordplay here and you just passed it up

Noobs passed/past you, Why you in my presence/present, i gotta future what does yours behold?/
Playin wit chewtoys, Most people grew outta bitin when they were four years old//

Good attempt at wordplay here but again had a lot of room for advancement... Lacking

Don't wanna battle you coz i got higher standards than that man its tha principle/
Like a boat he jus ridin on others flow, s'why he calls himself invincible//

Ok punch but nothing miraculous, seen a lot better punches and wordplay on biters....

Dont like bitin personally, proof was solid as concrete, jus admit yo cheat/
But i aint wastin ma breath, what ever floats ya boat man jus dont waste tha spit on me//

?? Punch? Again your punch was aight but lacked anything special... Weak Closer

Overall, Your verse was very simple, simple punches, simple wordplay and not a lot of it did deliver as well as you could have made it... A good attempt at originality but sadly lacked in all aspects... Expected a lot better from you in a tourney but guess I was wrong...

Overall 6/10


Punches: Neuro - Actually hit hard
Personals: Neuro - Better by far
Multies: Neuro - Nice consistency
Metas: NONE - NONE
Flow: TIE - Felt both
Wordplay: Neuro - What can I say...
Creativity: Neuro - By Longshots
Nameplay: Neuro - ON HIMSELF!!!??? WTF???
Complexity: Neuro - By Longshots
Consistency: Neuro - Despite the lack at the end of his verse
Vocab: NONE - NONE



OVERALL VOTE - Invincible

REASON

For harder hitting punches, originality, complexity and a domination of ALL CATEGORIES.... NISM?

P.S - Judging by his verse, This was a VERY unfair match as skills were entirely too far apart...








*edit-name change

[aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE]

^^^^

SHIT CANT EDIT!!!!

Replace Neuro with Invincible

O/A Vote Invincible... PS SOMEONE EDIT THAT POST FOR ME

[InViNcIbLe]

3-0 KO ]
G'Battle famz

AhA...