Topical: Cool c(0-0) vs. Jeebin(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars:unlimited
Topic:A troubled past.


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:
On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Cool c]

check

[Jeebin]

wow...i ended up wit cool c

not fair for someone juss gettin back in to the rhythm of things

[Cool c]

quick key
COOL C

It all started when I was born, to the light, New to this fight we called life/ My expectation center my deliberation to run the hesitation begun/
And now im One entering a world that’s crack, and my first word was crack/ My start of a trouble world was back/I was reborn as a infant/
My infinity divinity was sentence, because all the trouble I past/ I got one chance to get it right and last/
Or turn mommies little baby to some body who blast more then battles/ Outlast last any Cat who followed, 1 chance to shine and the world is my Apollo/
I swallow all my fears bottle up all my tears/ my trouble past double back the pain I casted/
From osh-ba-gosh to old navy I was a cold baby/ my souls “Navy” blue see that maybe you could save me dude/
My rain of terror reap the reaper I had deadly arms/ cause heavy harm watchin dudes drop to the death like saddam in his prime/
The dominance is mine, my prominence design /I turned a battle to a cold war with a ink blot sign/
I watch a man murder more ink then jeebin with a ink pen confide to index finger/ I am (destruction) and watch this trouble I past linger/ in the atmosphere like sounds of a bad singer/
GROWN UP
I brake bricks over the seas getting cheddar better the a lock smith im molding them keys/
Fbi was over my set like Cleareese I tried to go Sypher filter/ but end up like Hannibal lector, lock up with no key a can of FAVA beans/ (got to see the movie to understand the wordplay is sick)
Committed crimes admit fines I admit that the crack was mine/ I felt like a van go painting my time began to melting now/
I enter lock down my mind clock stop now/ the feel of [Cold bars like Heresy I Kiss] my mother good bye style/
Looking for a any Kat with Sherlock homes clues to bust out/ my decision infatuated my faith I say this isn’t fox there was no Prison Break/ (prison break a show on fox)
This wasn’t fake im challenge my fate/ im trouble past became more then a mind state/
My mind sated weather I can better myself or seal a deal with a guy name Satin in CB3(Cell block 3)/
I couldn’t the reaper got the best of me/ reborn for the third time is the best for me as I came back more then a man but in sprit controlling the Presidents Destiny//

[Jeebin]

i kinna wrote it like a song...for audio...
so its exactly a vesrse long...quick key...
16 lines/8 bars...w.e. u wanna call it

the worst days of my life, brought back-to-reality/so much wrong, all came to attack-my-mentality/
the things that happen, made me pack-my-morality/to still be here to say it, i don't lack-in-vitality/

started out easy, juss a niggerish kid in high-school/i was smart enough to not get caught, and defy-rules/
i dealt drugs, rob ladies and had em sayin "goodbye-jewel"/had the crew on my shoulders, so they imply-"cool"/

all that dealin, soon led to the worst thing on-my-mind/started slayin niggas like i was genghis khan-combined/
next thing you know, like terrorist imma "hassan"-to-find/got things to held to contract, so withdrawn-and-signed/

the worst thing was this, i was not-to-calm/blackmailed to the wall, started reading lots-of-psalms/
had the gun in my hand, felt i did not-have-palms/so it was the craziest day, the day i shot-my-mom/

[Jeebin]

so how we gonna find out if someone won?

people gonna vote...or is there gonna be a "team"

[Cool c]

we need votes over here

[Jeebin]

yeah...this is pretty bad....

no votes yet...

[The Chozen One 13]

On Topic:Tie(who wouldnt be on topic)
Depth:Cool C
Imagery:Jeebin
Originality:Tie(kind of the same)
Flow:Jeebin
Multis:Tie(both came hard)
Enjoyment:Cool C
Vocab:Cool C

Close battle but O/A:Cool C

[[Neurologik]]

On Topic: Tie, i agree wit chozen
Depth: Jeebin
Imagery: Close but Jeebin took dis for me
Originality: Cool C
Flow: Tie, both went off at places but close cat
Multis: Both of you did well here but Jeebin
Enjoyment: Cool C
Vocab: Close again but Cool C

Overall Vote: Tie, sorry guys i couldnt pic a winner here both real gd verses

[[King_Mc]]

flow. J
multies. J
imagery. TIE
topic. C
vocab. J
enjoyment. TIE
creativity. TIE

OVERALL...Jeebin

2-2 i guess...

[Jeebin]

yup 2-2...that means its first to 5 now

nice battle btw Cool c

[MANE]

Topical: Tie
On Topic: Loco
Depth: Cool
Imagery: Cool
Originality: Cool
Flow: Loco
Multis: Loco
Enjoyment: Cool
Vocab: Cool

Overall Vote: Cool

[Jeebin]

yo MANE the battle was between me and Cool c...u sure u werent on a nother battle

[johnny 5]

flow. J
multies. J
imagery. TIE
topic. C
vocab. J
enjoyment. TIE
creativity. TIE

OVERALL...Jeebin

[MANE]

Topical: Tie
On Topic: Jeebin
Depth: Jeebin
Imagery: Cool
Originality: Cool
Flow: Jeebin
Multis: Jeebin
Enjoyment: Cool
Vocab: Cool

Overall Vote: Cool

That's my bad..It is for this battle. And i looked over both verses again and stand by my votes. 1

[Jeebin]

so its 3-3

dang so close

its gonna come down to who ever gets the last vote

[Cool c]

lets get some votes

[Dex Aspen]

On Topic:tie-this wasn't difficult.
Depth:Cool-He just put alot more imagination into it.
Imagery:Cool-C painted a mural where it seemed like Jeeb's threw a sketch down on a napkin.
Originality:tie-both were enjoyable.
Flow:Jeebin-I don't know what the hell Cool had cookin here,his whole structure is fucked so I couldn't find the flow.
Multis:Cool-Jeeb's had quality but Cool had quality and quanity.
Enjoyment:Cool-Jeebin's was way to short.
Vocab:tie-both were extremly simple,seemed more focused on wordplay then the difficulty or originality of the vocabulary aspect.


Overall:Cool C

-{A}-:out

[Cool c]

4-3 cool c

[Jeebin]

4-3

i still have a small chance of hope

[LocoKidd]

On Topic: Tie
Depth:Cool,felt he had more of a grasp on the topic
Imagery:Cool,won this category easy
Originality: Tie
Flow:Jeebin
Multis:Cool
Enjoyment:Cool,had the longevity
Vocab: Tie


Overall:Cool C

5-2,Cool C wins.

*CLOSED*