Topical: B.N.G.(0-0) vs. The Chosen One 13(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: unlimited
Topic: Car Accident


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:
On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


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2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[The Chozen One 13]

since me and b.n.g r from the same crew im gonna let our crew members vote

[The Chozen One 13]

since me and b.n.g r from the same crew im gonna let our crew members vote

do u agree

here is my check

[B.N.G]

ok that would be cool :wink: gd luck homi :)
check check

[The Chozen One 13]

good luck
u go first

p.s we have until this friday take your time

[The Chozen One 13]

i will spit first

[The Chozen One 13]

Topic: car accident

(x2)Its a life defisite but if we can prevent it maybe there will be a miricle/
But we have to go deep down in out pity soul and be kind of spiritual/
With all these car accidents we can kill all the inesint people/
Kids dying cause drunk driving and the kid aint even a week old

People get paralyzed from car accidents they can scarcely walk or stand/
There palms are knumb like its snowing so they can barely feel there hand/
They able to work but it might dessemble they life and be a swelling to there glory/
Hell if They didnt endure that event They wouldn't even be here telling u there story/
Picture them in a wheel chair paralyzed for life can't ever stand again/
Going to stores having to go up ramps and following ppl trying to blend/
It's just aint working out like fat ppl eating Big amples of food and gaining weight/
They just have to get with it maintain and never quit and keep on claiming fate/
Some older people need to stop drunk driving maybe This wouldnt happen/
Cause life is not a game to be playing around with it can elevate you like rapping/
Some car accidents are life terminating leaving people families with sorrow/
Knowing that family members will be crying and still will be mad until tomarrow/

(x2)Its a life defisite but if we can prevent it maybe there will be a miricle/
But we have to go deep down in out pity soul and be kind of spiritual/
With all these car accidents we can kill all the inesint people/
Kids dying cause drunk driving and the kid aint even a week old

Dont talk on cell phones when your drive cause staying alive aint no jive/
Cause if you keep on doing it, in a grave yard at 18 is where you will reside/
Cars off the roads cause of rain, trying to excape but scurring in alot of pain/
People getting sick of accidents and it follows us like it was aiming for my brain/
1.2 million people getting killed world wide cause of damn traffic collisons/
i got a solution but i aint thinking right cause my brain and i got a acid vision/
Accidents are at a alltime high and we aint even at our prime/
It's causing to much bloodshed so i think it should be a crime/
Street Racing is incriminating and getting people pist of and demented/
If you think you have anyways to stop it then help us to prevent it/
Its fucked up seeing your boy leave the world before dawn/
And its kind of hard talking to him before he is gone/

[B.N.G]

D.X.B, da city of Carz , I didnt think once that it’ll leave ma heart with scar/
The speed cant never prove how cool u are, I just see those fools go too far/
Speed like a drunk go out bars, I was there, when ma family were fly in da sky/
I thought that I was watchin a lie in ma eye, so i stopped to try in ma cry to ask why/
Because of 2 young gayz, ma life was destroyed and I lived in a scare dayz/
But ma God helped ma family,so now I give ppl some advice in some take care wayz/

Number 1, son , don’t ever drive for fun, cuz ur car is like a gun can kill someone/
and da 2nd one, pullets need speed to run, so check the street and don’t fill in like dumb/
take care of the 3rd advice, ppl will always respect u ,if u tread em nice/
dont make ur brain from ice, cuz ppl never care about u ,even if u came from paradise/
number 4, don’t give a ride for whore, she’ll clam ur dick but she destroy u like fo-fo/
if u hit a tree u will never recall her no-mo, so stop a side then fuck cuz she can wait fo sure/
number 5, never drive when u get high, speed and weed never separate /
they are like a haters, they can lead u to bleed and leave u when u wanna wait/

6, dont let the comment make a war in ur brain, Wordz can drive u insane/
fast speed accident crash u like train, and u the one who will got the pain/

street aint for games, if u love high speed go and buy a video game/
follow those rule early to avoid the pain of blame or da lame /

[The Chozen One 13]

upping for votes

good luck

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[B.N.G]

watz happenin here, no one wanna vote :?:

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[LocoKidd]

On Topic: Tie
Depth: Chosen
Imagery: Tie
Originality: Chosen
Flow: Tie
Multis: Tie
Enjoyment: Chosen
Vocab: BNG

Overall Vote: Chosen One


1-0

[The Chozen One 13]

thanxs 1-0 upping still

[B.N.G]

Uppin'

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[The Chozen One 13]

upping dammit

[[Neurologik]]

Topical: B.N.G
On Topic: Tie, who cant stay on topic
Depth: Chozen
Imagery: Chozen painted like a picture baby
Originality: B.N.G, that adive was awsome man, gd idea
Flow: B.N.G
Multis: B.N.G
Enjoyment: Tie
Vocab: Chozen

Overall Vote: B.N.G, close battle guys, you elevatin like fuck keep it up

[The Chozen One 13]

i think the multies was tied but its your opion

1-1

[[Neurologik]]

Sorry man jus callin it how i see it

[The Chozen One 13]

ok iight

[[King_Mc]]

flow. B
multies. TIE
imagery. C
creativity. C
topic. B
vocab. C

.:OVERALL:. Chosen...

[The Chozen One 13]

2-1 my way

4-1 equals tko

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[Theory]

On Topic: Both
Depth: 13
Imagery: 13
Originality: 13
Flow: BNG
Multis: close but id have to go with 13
Enjoyment: both
Vocab: both

O/A : chozen 13

sorry BNG but Chozen edged over you

~1~

[The Chozen One 13]

3-1 my way 1 more vote equals tko

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[Shoalin]

flow: B
multies: TIE
imagery: C
creativity: C
topic: b
vocab: C
originality: B
Vote: Chozen

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