Topical: Evoligion(0-0) vs. kingbrown(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: unlimited
Topic: Burried alive..


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:
On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
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Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


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2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[kingbrown]

check...I guess....so I got two battlez loco? its coo, I just gotta hustle-topicals always take me longer...we'll see if homehoi checks in..

[LocoKidd]

ya,he got till midnight to check.

[Evoligion]

Check.

[Evoligion]

Heres an intro and a keyed 14 lines. Its all I could do, i'm working mad overtime right now.


Falling through this hole and its far from shallow,
Trying to catch myself as I fall past these shadows.
How though? I never had this planned,
No clue where it ends, or even began.

My conciousnous kicks in and my head pops up, i'm coughing,
no clue where I am so i frantically scratch at the top of the coffin.
Lost and confused, fearing death as my nails rip off at the flesh,
whats next, no fresh air, I start dry heaving .. losing my breath.
Slam my head back down its cracked now, i'm seriously fucked,
this sucks, its just my luck, ending up here, mysteriously stuck.
Eyes struck by a bright light, my mom will mourn my loss I know it,
should of just tryed to sit back and relax, didn't help i'm claustrofobic.
I'm floating now , hear flowing sounds, don't know whats going down,
see growing frowns, I look around and see i'm at my showing now.
Everyone down on their luck, sad with their feelings split and tore,
never knew I had this much love for me, watching tears hit the floor.
No more! when suddenly its all eyes on me, everyone with fine smirks,
I Snap back to reality when my alarm goes off and its time for work.

[Evoligion]

You showing kid?

[Jeebin]

E wins....kingbrown no show..
juss tryna help Loco move this along...

u can lock this one

[LocoKidd]

E wins due to no show


*CLOSED*