Topical: Grifta(0-0) vs. Artik Phrost(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: unlimited
Topic: Sea of blood..


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:
On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Artik Phrost]

check mate

[Grifta]

ok check, no crew votes,

you spit first...

[Grifta]

wait, ignore the fact that i said u spit first...whoever spit first.

[Grifta]

aight ima spit now, dont expect to win, the topic was annoying lol, thought topical would be easier..

[Grifta]

aight,

yea,

its like a sea of blood and the fountains a man with a lost-head
its consuming the world its enough to turn arctic phrost-red
people are still running but you cant hide they get exhausted
people have fled, but the blood shed its you dead or somebody in your-stead

lost in the sea of blood, with a plain face and a forgotten-name
like its no longer "Rest In Peace" its now become "Rot-In-Pain"
its like murder is a blessing, no longer getting shot-in-shame
its like too much death and hostility make u wanna put a glock-to-ya-brain

haha..yea

[Grifta]

its past friday 11:59pm :shock: i win?

[SiiNiDE]

its past friday 11:59pm :shock: i win?

Timezones are different, it's only 8 34 here.

[Grifta]

aight

[Artik Phrost]

Topic: Sea Of Blood


Change In The Front pt. 2
by: Artik Phrost


...Paralyctic Catacombs Slow My Mind's Waves
I Watch, Dazed.. As The Blood Gurggles From Earth's Viens
...To Be Heard: PAIN. Lost In A Sea Of Ignorance
Many Soldiers Brave, Yet Looking Down The Abyss We Fearing It
...As The Bullet Fly Past, I Gasp, For Hope?--Pass
I Can't Swim.. So I Have To Drown In The Tears Fallen.. Last

*...'The Soldier Faints An' Awakes In A Time Before'...*

...My Throat Was Parched An Body.. Beaten- Arched
Over A Stone Tablet Drenched With Remnants Of Hearts
...Uncertainty Lingered As My Conscious Swayed Like A Lullaby
I Felt Like Joker: Half Heaven.. An' The Pain Of A Million Swords On The Otherside
...As I Looked Up A Man In Tribal Dressed Hovered Near
A Smile And Screamin Holler Escaped As He Gave My Flesh A Shear
...Body Numbed, I Felt The Stinging In The Chunk Lying Next To Me
A Tennis Ball Size, I Weakly Reached For It And Etched To Breathe
...Another Mate, Endoured The Same Haneous Torchure
Letting It Known It Burns Under A Blue Sun, My Soul's Scorcher
...Little Time Passed Before Needles Could Be Felt
Cross Hatching My Nerves, Fastening A Leathery Something, Like A Belt
...To My Body, His Chunk Of Flesh Was Sowed, Peferct Form
And The Crowd Yell Out And Celebrated As If It Were The Perfect Norm
...We Were told to Join the Other Warriors Carrying Wounds Identical
True Savages, Birth Into This World Chewing And Gnawing The Umbiblical
...Grimey Faces, Painted With Tribal Honor Bearing Seeds OF Love
Chanted As We Stood Upon Them: We've Sown A Part Of Us In You So, You Shall Die In A 'Sea Of Blood'

*...'The Soldier Wakes Up And Looks Around'...*

...I Can't Swim, Ineed But I Realized A Key Fact, An Epiphany
I Shall Not Perish Alone, Without Comfort Depite My Empty Plees
...These Men Are My Brothers, We Fight For Our Mother.. Land You See
And We Are Fighting In A 'Sea Of Blood', We Are All Part Of This Family

[The Chozen One 13]

On Topic:Tie
Depth: Artik Phrost
Imagery:Artik Phrost
Originality:Artik Phrost
Flow:Grifta
Multis:Tie (both came hard)
Enjoyment:Grifta
Vocab:Artik Phrost

Overall Vote:Artik Phrost

[Jeebin]

On Topic: Tie..both on topic pretty much whole way
Depth: Artik Phrost...u can see he put a story kind of behind it with the soldier and everything
Imagery: Artik Phrost...u get a better picture in yur head wit his verss
Originality: Artik Phrost...very gothic type and original
Flow: Grifta...Artik was a lil choppy, some lines were juss too long
Multis: Grifta...Artik didn't have many, but grifta almost lost it with that last line, too many syllables
Enjoyment: Artik Phrost...some of the best imagery i've felt in a while
Vocab: Artik Phrost...i don't think Grifta knows some of them words

Overall Vote: Artik Phrost...grifta wasn't ready for the topic i would say

[Grifta]

yea i was writing for other battles and had a bit of writers block for this, i dont like these topics, ill probably just stick to text..

[LocoKidd]

On Topic:Tie
Depth: Artik Phrost,felt she had more of a grasp on the topic
Multis:Tie
Imagery:Artik Phrost,grifta's was too simple
Originality:Artik Phrost
Flow:Grifta
Vocab:Artik Phrost

Overall Vote:Artik Phrost


3-0 K.O., Artik Phrost Wins


*CLOSED*