Topical: X(0-0) vs. Quitxotic(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: unlimited
Topic: In the belly of the beast..


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:
On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Quixotic]

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[Quixotic]

Down in the deep where the beast sleep and eat, No man should tred
The evil live and bred, fed the souls of those misfortunate or dead
Its choatic in the body of that of the creature that exist
Its eyes memerized by the blood of thoses on damnations list
You can here the heart beat but the beat just play in
The sound drowned out by the growl of meat-eater, so weigh in
Never should you meat this creature or the meat of your body and flesh shall be eatin
Its sinister smile, crowned by the temptation of forbidden fruits like in the Garden of Eden
But it walks and stalks it prey, even today it manifest
In the streets that we live in, true story but can you handle this
Its intoxicating allure that lure in us like canibus
Only for us to be bottled or swallowed ready to digest
It'll get you Hype like Nas and DMX in One Nine Nine Eight
But true crimes take time to solve like the drugs we take
The lives we live as kids dement us and create the images that provoke our demonic aura
Of course a prayer here and there can keep it away or the
Shadows will surround and attempt to drown you ready for eats
And you'll spend ya end time in the Belly of the Mythical beast
Its not mythical the true beast is the system that eats us alive
But I strive thru the acid, never seeing caskets cuz I will survive

[LocoKidd]

On Topic: Tie
Depth: Q
Imagery: Q
Originality: Tie
Flow: X
Multis: X
Enjoyment: Q
Vocab: Q

Overall Vote: Quixotic


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[[King_Mc]]

Topical: TIE
On Topic: Q
Depth: Q
Imagery: Q
Originality: Q
Flow: TIE
Multis: X
Enjoyment: -
Vocab: Q

Overall Vote: Quix'...

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[Cool c]

Topical: q
On Topic: both
Depth: q
Imagery: X
Originality: X
Flow: q
Multis: both
Enjoyment: both
Vocab: q

Overall Vote: over all good battle on both

Quixotic