Topical: Rocladii(0-0) vs. Nuerologik(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:Wednesday,11:59 PM
Verses Due:Friday,11:59 PM

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: unlimited
Topic: Everyone on the planet has disapeared.


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:
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Overall Vote:


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2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[[Neurologik]]

Check

[Rocladii]

checkiity check..HONESTLY imma try nd get it up by 2morrow but im in da process of movin so if i dont show up can u please gimme til SUNDAY NIGHT..gotta get the net nd stuff ho0ked @ da otha place..but iima try my best 2 make deadline

[[Neurologik]]

Raindrops are fallin, waterin fields without purpose to grow food/
Omniscient beings condemn us, For the first time on earth theres no feuds//
Combat ceased, winds flow through roads that were once crowded with noise/
Lonely man stands weak, his normal day gone and his life is destroyed//
Aboriginals to Zulus, who knew that we were so close to the apocalypse/
Decrepit landscape not another livin soul from here to the acropolis//
Its illogical, one man stands alone survivor of tha supposed rapture/
Is this an Illusion? real world end? Or jus a dream that my mind captured//

[Rocladii]

Straiight KEY!!!...


Mindz blocked calling for mom, wait a few secondz, but i grew impatient
carried myself to the top of the stairs, no answer just added to my aggravation
stampeded down the steps,2 my astonishments the whole floor was dark
looked around to my momz room, and through a crack i noticed a spark
of liight flickering like a lightening bug, so i slowly opened the door
noticed newspapers and a journal scattered across the bed and the floor
glanced at her writing, it stopped dead sentence,she'd never done that be4
ran to the window,figured she left,but her car was parked still in the driveway
glanced over at the highway,but every car was still in it's own mindstate
That's when I got worried, put on my jacket nd my shoes,left in a hurry
walked to a few neighbors,but no answers,my mind began 2 be buried
It went crazy with thoughts and I just simple came to end with the note
that my mom was a person of folk,this was all just a joke
in my mind I remembered the quote, thevery last thing she said
"If I was to be gone 2morrow Promise you'd still Keep moving ahead"
Gone, did she leave me?? maybe I was just 2 much for her 2 handle
who would I run to, dad was MIA, the thought of him I burned liike a candle
I shed a few tears, but i was upset, nobody's eyes on me if i flew off the handle
I mean I've been hurt so much why would mom leave me 2 be dismantled
I ran down the street to the corner store, i could find info from Mr. Joe
Any question you'd ver have that needs an answer he always knows
his mind was like Gold, a huge story that was truly untold
but when i reached Mr. Joe's it was empty there was no truth to unfold
but I noticed the same flickering that I seen in my momz bedroom
and i presumed that whatever happened to my mom I had to assume
that they were missing for a reason looked up 2 da sky 2 speak 2 jesus
I got on my knees and begged please"Can u tell me what the need is
You've taken the world and left me abandoned liike a crakhead's fetus
and i pleaded, that he would send me a sign that wasnt deceicing
be4 i could even finish receivin a message, i heard whistling in the air
and i glanced around, ran to where it was coming from 2 be dared
i admit i was scared, but while running i heard a bunch of laughs and giggles
everything overpowerd me in size and i completely felt so little
trees, plants, and clouds began to talk as i ran down the street in the middle
they spoke "You're wondering where everyone isz well they have all been raptured
nd for those who've rejected jesus have been caught and captured
The reason why you're still here is because you've been the 1 to be left undecided
You've done tight and wrong but we acknowledge your hiding"
I stopped and dropped in the street took my confiding and remembered my being phony
I surrendered because i remembered the skeletons in the closet liike humans being bony
and since I was all alone with no one to save me, THEY DISAPPEARED, i knew how it felt 2 be lonely
I noticed my living room through tiny slits in my eyes,and i jus couldnt understand
why messages were constantly sent thru dreams and nightmares, i lo0ked down 2 the burning of the blunt still in my hand

KEYED easii LMAO...aint do dis in a minute dayum

[[Neurologik]]

Nice verse rocladii

[[Neurologik]]

Uppin for some votes :mad:

[[King_Mc]]

Topical: R
On Topic: TIE
Depth: R
Imagery: R
Originality: TIE
Flow: S
Multis: R
Enjoyment: R
Vocab: R

OVERALL...Rocladii

[The Chozen One 13]

On Topic:Tie
Depth:R
Imagery:R
Originality:Tie
Flow:N
Multis:N
Enjoyment:R
Vocab:Tie

O/A:Rocladii

[Cool c]

On Topic:Tie
Depth:Roc
Imagery:Roc
Originality:Tie
Flow:N
Multis:N
Enjoyment:Roc
Vocab:Tie

Vote=
Rocladii (she came like a beast on this one best one)

[Dex Aspen]

KO

...thread closed.



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