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[Shoalin]

Yu Expect To Take Weak Shots an I Aint FIGHTING-BACK My Bullets "FLUID HYMNS" When The LIGHTER-CLAP
You No Showed Its Now Become a "PRICELESS-FACT" that Jus Like "Un Skilled Hungarian Cities" RISCES-WHACK!!

Ill have RICE TURN WITH THE NINE an like CRONIC BACK PAIN i BURN THROUGH HIS SPINE
as for Competition? THe Family Laughed when They "HEARD YU Were MINE" Cause My Keys beat Your Writtens, Im Better Then Yu "WHERE IN YOUR PRIME"

HOF From Beating Newbs? i fucking "RIP YU PHONIES" My Dope Bar'sll be Like "ANIME MARATHONS" Theyll "GETCHU OD'd"
Yu Runnin Ya Mouth Say Yu HIT ME OH PLEASE all Yu Are Is Stretched Flow, With The Same Concepts Jus DIFFERENT MULTI'S

holmes i fuckin ROCK THE FIFTH So Old Man STOP YA SHIT
yur whack shit diss i will Not Get Hit cause i aint talkin No "Lust FOR CARS" When i say He Love "COPPING WHIPS"

1. FLEW AT HIM= FLUID HYMNS. RISCES is in hungry, DER
2.simple shit.
3. Getchu is a anime cartoon.
4. simple


KEYSTYLED YU OLD ASSED HOMO.
cant be botherd at fucking 4 AM
4 bars in 13 mins flat.

[Dex Aspen]

...I wonder who this is aboot? It's one of the older members...hmmm?



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[SiiNiDE]

Not bad, Dude. I like the multis, nice ones. The wordplay is good for keystyle.

And it's about young rice / 1 gmc

[Shoalin]

ahhahah.......... do you have to be realy whack to get replys in disses?

[Dex Aspen]

ahhahah.......... do you have to be realy whack to get replys in disses?


apparently....lol



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[Anesthetic]

Good job. :shock: I like the ending.

'YOU OLD AS HOMO. 4 BARS IN 13 MINUTES FLAT'

[Shoalin]

dont hate annie.... i thought yu where the cool one.....

[!FEren]

Not bad, Dude. I like the multis, nice ones. The wordplay is good for keystyle.

^^ agreed..

pretty niice for a keystyle

[Hollow]

Overall, I thought it was one of the better disses I've seen here.

Fav. Bar:
Ill have RICE TURN WITH THE NINE an like CRONIC BACK PAIN i BURN THROUGH HIS SPINE
as for Competition? THe Family Laughed when They "HEARD YU Were MINE" Cause My Keys beat Your Writtens, Im Better Then Yu "WHERE IN YOUR PRIME

First part reminds me of a bar I used on another site:
I'm too hot to handle, leakin' heat like a cracked furance/
So I'll stick heat through your spine, put you on some back burners/

Nice word-plays and personals.


Elevation Tips:
--I've seen it happen here more than anywhere else, but typin' half of your verse (even if it's just the multis) in caps is really a newbie trait that ain't necessary for any reason. Looks a lot better.
--Only real other tip I can give (besides just keep it up to elevate naturally) is bring a full verse just to kill him more. Ain't really that important, but it does make you work more--in turn, just that much more practice/experience/elevation you get.

[Shoalin]

Chea, i mean like, all i need is 4 bars to kill his like 15 he has done so far.
so i didnt bother with more :D

[~Yung_Money~]

nice shit, pretty good diss, who is young rice

[NewEmcee]

I think this needs to be closed due to pwnage....but i will leave it open... :lol:

[Anesthetic]

dont hate annie.... i thought yu where the cool one.....

Shoa. That wasn't me being sarcastic. I was being totally serious. I DID like the ending. :shock:

[Shoalin]

AHHAHAHAAH.............. your so crazy like ants wearing greeen hats

[Muphaser]

Not bad as you typed it in under 5 min, doggy.

[DiMe™]

Hip-Hop-Is-Dead 8)


:lol:

The First Two Bars Are The Best.....

They Really Hit Hard, The Others Were Good But Yeh The Main Punches Where First Two Bars.....

[1-G_MC]

you're such a good friend to dikride like that :D

[DiMe™]

hahaha.....


Young Rice....

I Was Merely Agreeing With Shoalin....
I Was Not Saying That I Personally Murdered You So Dont Get It Twisted
And Start This "I Was Once Considered Sick" Bullshit As Your Arrogance Will Be Wasted
Because I Do Not Like To Keep Shitty No Reason Beef Going An I Dont Hold Grudges


But It's Whatever.....

[1-G_MC]

OKAY 8)

[Anesthetic]

And Start This "I Was Once Considered Sick" Bullshit

Emphasis on the Once Considered part.

[Shoalin]

ahaha werd.

[1-G_MC]

you guyz r really hilarious..... :roll:

[Shoalin]

yes rice.......... :D

[1-G_MC]

meh we'll see what's funny soon enough 8)

[Anesthetic]

meh we'll see what's funny soon enough 8)

I know dude. I can't wait to see your verse. I need a good chuckle. :lol:

[1-G_MC]

:roll: :lol:

[Dex Aspen]

hey Rice...why haven't you signed up for the Text League yet :?: You seem to have alot of spare time on your hands here...how about puttin that to good use :?:



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[1-G_MC]

one step ahead of that thought :idea:

[Mr. Zero]

nice diss. maybe we'll have a worth while beef

[Muphaser]

Where the UMF have you been Zero?

[dannyruxspin]

nice diss....

are we reading the same text?

[EyEcRu:ST]

aight for a key...check ya pms in a min

[Shoalin]

locked.... i decided this beef aint worth it..... but incase of a rainy day.... im shore you will seee the 223 bars out of 400 i had saved for SiN, Ju and Rice.....



for now..... LOCKED!