Text: Red Tha Baron(1-0) vs. Shoalin(0-1)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:(Thursday, Febuary 1st, 11:59 PM)
Verses Due:(Saturday, Febuary 3rd, 11:59 PM)

BOTH EMCEES WILL AGREE ON THE NUMBER OF BARS

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Don't ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Red Tha Baron]

..chekk

[Shoalin]

fan fucking tastic.
im thinkin i should actualy write down shit, but meh.... itll be funny when these kids get to brag bout woopin my ass....



i say.... 3 bars
check

[Red Tha Baron]

..wish i spent more time on the latter bars, oh well

Find Greatness? Ya Lack A Route To There...Shoa Off His Rocker Like Old Men Braggin Bout They Chairs
Now This F.a.g Is Outted, Scared...
This Gay Be Slow. Ya Get Embarrassed Daily, Shoa. Like What O'Reilly Did To That Tragic Clown, Colbert
Yes, Its Pronounced Col-Bare. Colbert Works 4 The Daily Show. Heres Tha Vid Also (http://colbertondemand.com/specials/Colbert_On_OReilly)

Watch This Whack Sell Out Get Carved! Seriously, This Lad Wails, He Aint Hard!
This Cheap Fuc.ker 6 Feet Under...
Ya Whored. So I Say "Shoa! Stop Or Get Merk'd On The Boards!" Like Danity Kanes Track Fell Off The Charts
Showstopper get merked on the boards(billboards/forums)

Ya Done Kid, I Run This. Bullets'll Plummet To Ya Stomach. I've Had It! & Judgin By Ya Avy, Bet Ya Hurtin Rabbits.
When It Comes 2 Our Bars, People Less Concerned Wiv Shoa's & Want Somethin Red Like Good Learnin Habits
less concerned with shows & want somethin read

:arrow:

[Shoalin]

Fuck It Ill Key This SHit Quick help Red "CALL IT A NIGHT!" Till He Will Regret Signing Up For This Shit "ALL of HIS LIFE"
I B 1 Killa and 1 steel "Ballin On Knifes" Yu "Pop Kin" So My Punches Gotta Be Like"AA GuNNers In WW2" An leave Red
..."Falling
..... From
...... Hieghts"!!!!!!!!!!!


Basic Anatomy of Red's bars Yu google "FIND N He USING IT" I "Drop like i clock terds" 15 Mins The "TIME i DO THIS SHIT"
Shoa's Prone To Liftup n "LINE AN SHOOT THE CLIP" In which My Words'll "SWIRL AN DOWN RED" LIKE "WINE-ENTHUSIASTS"

Your Shots Be Searchin But i Will "NOT BE FOUND" You Beat Me Eyes Closed? Only If Yu Jerk me Off after i KNOCK YOU OUT!
My Hits Aint "Rattlin ya Change" When I Say They "ROCK Ya POUNDS" Now Watch Me "THROW OUT THA RED CARD" LIKE SOCCER-FOULS




BAR Explnations
1. Popkin was the aussie aa gunna who killed the red baron, and POP KIN/ Pop kine (kine was also my old RD bro) Kin is like brother or family.
2. this is so simple.
3. he british, brits curency is pounds. old name cardinul



THE 15 MINUTE KILLER HAS RETURNED!!!!!

[LocoKidd]

Punches: Shaolin..hit harder,and more clean
Personals: Tie..both had some hot ones
Multies: Shoalin..his were better quality
Metas: Red Tha Baron
Flow: Shaolin..The multies helped out and less strectched bars
Wordplay: Red Tha Baron..had more
Creativity: Shoalin..he had some really fresh shit here
Nameplay: Red Tha Baron..liked the last bar's nameplay,had some other nice ones
Complexity: Red Tha Baron..Shao's came off as too simple
Consistency: Shoalin..Red kept fallin off and on
Vocab: Tie

Overall Vote: Shoalin..REAL close battle.

[Shoalin]

Oh shit. sick.


uppin mo votez.

[DiMe™]

Nice Bars From Both....


Here's How I Saw It.....



Punches: Shoalin [Punches Were Personal An Hit Hard, Not Saying Red's Werent There But I Was Really Feeling Shoa's]
Personals: Shoalin [Had Really Nice Ones, Personal In Every Bar.... Red Only Had The One Bout Shoa's Avy]
Multies: Shoalin [His Were Longer An Had A Really Clean Flow To All Of Them, Red's Were Good But I Think He Needed More]
Metas: TIEFlow: Red The Baron [He Juss Edged This Over Shoa, Neither Had Wowing Flow But Both Were Pritty Consistent]
Wordplay: Red The Baron [Last 2 Bars Were Real Nice In This Department]
Creativity: Shoalin [Reall Nice Concepts In His Bars, Red Had Good Stuff To But Yeh, Shoa Was Sick]
Nameplay: TIE [Ima Say TIE Cause Red Had 3 Plays But They Were All Shoa/Show, An Shoalin Only Had One But It WAs A Good Punch Aswell, So Yeh Quality Over Qauntity In My Opinion]
Complexity: Red The Baron [Shoalins Lines Were Pritty Simple With The Way They Were Worded, But It Helped Deliver His Punches Nicely]
Consistency: Shoalin [Red Had Some Good Concepts But Some Of His Stuff Let Him Down A Lil, Shoalin Was Consistently Attacking]
Vocab: Red That Baron [Shoalin Was REal Simple In The WAy He Worded Things, But His Simplicity In The Vocab Helped His Punches To Be Delivered]

Overall Vote: Shoalin



Real Nice Battle

[Shoalin]

lol. 2-0. upin the finito.

[Red Tha Baron]

..cool, but im beggin the next voter to look hard for my multies

[GTech]

Basically co-sign tha mentioned votes....

Punches: Shoa... hit harder, and i wasn't feelin Red's much as Shoa's...
Personals: Shoa
Multies: Red, u didn't really have any, i saw some of em', but Shoa was cleaner and was "better quality" like Loco mentioned
Metas: Shoa
Flow: TIE
Wordplay: Red
Creativity: Shoa
Nameplay: Red
Complexity: Red
Consistency: Shoa
Vocab: TIE

o/a vote: Shoalin

[Shoalin]

3-0 KO.



*LOCKED*

SHOALIN WINS!!!!!!!! 8)