Topical: T-Stylez(0-0) vs. Jeebin(0-1)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due:(Thursday, Febuary 1st, 11:59 PM)
Verses Due:(Saturday, Febuary 3rd, 11:59 PM)

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: 16 Bars = 32 Lines MAXIMUM
Topic: Haunted House


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
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Enjoyment:
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Overall Vote:


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2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Jeebin]

check liek slovakia

[Jeebin]

i win no show...u can lock now

[T-Stylez]

What happend to PMing???

[T-Stylez]

In case u wanna win FAIR

Historical buildings, Antique furniture, that was where Hide-N-Seek-start
All people told me don't get into the building, but i Denied-critique-hard
Unpredictable horror things happend like ghost-reactions-and-cracking-tense
Natural actions are running but since most-my-actions-are-lacking-sense,
T-Stylez basicly froze, between the spiderwebs, old-ceilings-n-gray-vibe
Exorsist and ghostbusters calling while i have this cold-feelings-n-gay-vibe
Destruction on myself seemed the only solution cuz my mind-was-already-gone
Hesitations-stopped so i felt totally one of a kind-cuz-i'm-ready-on
On to run, Creations-dropped directly down decent like jumping-n-swinging
Urgent running made me not see all those things so i was bumping-but-bringing
Special moves unlike jeebin, And now i got out, i'll never-get-in-again
Every time someone try to diss me, i say i did clever-shit-n-act-man

[Jeebin]

yeah...i'll lt that count...cuz i wanna go

umm...gimme to sunday tho...iight?

since i gave u more time...cuz i juss got extremely busy....and wont tackle this till like saturday night...but thats past EST time

iight?

[T-Stylez]

Yeah ok i can respect it and i appreciate u still going. Thanks man

[Jeebin]

its only 88 om here...i'll put mine down before i go to sleep

[T-Stylez]

Aight well hurry than so ppl can vote :D ,... i dont wanna win cuz u do a no-show

[LocoKidd]

This is a tie beacause both of you missed a due date.


this battle wont count on your records.


*CLOSED*