!!Nemesis14 Diss!!..Just 4 Bars

[Red Tha Baron]

..key'd, actually key'd. unlike the other lying bitches out there that come wiv predetermined punches & shit.
..smh, oi!

Listen, Ya Lifes Been Ceased. You A Lame Faker
My Bars'll Have 'N' Creased Like Stuff Became Greater
All Ya Bars' Shit. So Let Me Make It Clear, You Aren't Sick
& Seems Ya Like Marine Sex, Tha Way You Were On Sharks Dick
You Gay, Okay? Thats Why Ya Best Is Just Shit
& People Only Say "N.E. Won" Is Text Messages
"N" Is Just Any Other Whack Herb Who Lacks Nerve
Bet Ya Crews Fulla "Sis-E-Men" Like Ya Name Backwordz

[[Neurologik]]

Listen, Ya Lifes Been Ceased. You A Lame Faker
My Bars'll Have 'N' Creased Like Stuff Became Greater
Nice opener, im not hooked yet but i keep readin coz i know red comes hard

All Ya Bars' Shit. So Let Me Make It Clear, You Aren't Sick
& Seems Ya Like Marine Sex, Tha Way You Were On Sharks Dick
Nice personal here, ok multi but more complex would've ruined the personal/punch

You Gay, Okay? Thats Why Ya Best Is Just Shit
& People Only Say "N.E. Won" Is Text Messages
Damn! Real nice wit the n.e.won line, very nice, probs my favourite line outta this

"N" Is Just Any Other Whack Herb Who Lacks Nerve
Bet Ya Crews Fulla "Sis-E-Men" Like Ya Name Backwordz
Typical red here, hot as fuck wordplay and the multies were hot too man


Props nice piece here. 8.5/10, you should extend this shit man

[Spine Shank]

Co-Signing.

[Nemesis14]

got a hater 2 days after i create a account, haha i fuckin love it

[[King_Mc]]

Listen, Ya Lifes Been Ceased. You A Lame Faker
My Bars'll Have 'N' Creased Like Stuff Became Greater
^ not bad w/p and multies.. pretty good for n opener

All Ya Bars' Shit. So Let Me Make It Clear, You Aren't Sick
& Seems Ya Like Marine Sex, Tha Way You Were On Sharks Dick
^ good, clean bar.. nice punch

You Gay, Okay? Thats Why Ya Best Is Just Shit
& People Only Say "N.E. Won" Is Text Messages
^ another nice bar.. w/p was ight..

"N" Is Just Any Other Whack Herb Who Lacks Nerve
Bet Ya Crews Fulla "Sis-E-Men" Like Ya Name Backwordz
^ my fav bar, solid closer

OVERALL:: good shit.. dont rly know why this was keyed in the first place but keep it up :D

[Red Tha Baron]

got a hater 2 days after i create a account, haha i fuckin love it

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3452/ohyoumadyeahfo2.gif

..i'll add more to this diss later

[Theory]

wow you think its cool to have haters?
where the fuck you grow up
haters aint good
and they hatin on you cuz ya shit sucks badly and you are too ignorant to fuckin change ya style up

[Abilities]

thats wutz good Red... btw Theory... set up the battle

[Theory]

what battle?

[~Yung_Money~]

dis was a solid diss track, but yo nemesis somebody gon come at you, dont give em props, you tear his ass wit a text of your own


All Ya Bars' Shit. So Let Me Make It Clear, You Aren't Sick
& Seems Ya Like Marine Sex, Tha Way You Were On Sharks Dick

i liked dat bar, you incorperated a simile wit a personal, i love it

[Nemesis14]

i live for haters, my haters keep me going.

but ya i already did write somethin back


and theroy, wtf is up with u, why do i have to change my style just for a fuckin site, man dont tell me what to do, this site has helped me alot, taught me that rap is not just rhyming at the end of a line, but i aint gunna change my style for u people, if it suck, w/e thats ur opinion, but dont call me ignorent, when ur being the bitch, dick riding on every1,

[Theory]

lmfao ask everyone

i NEVER DICK RIDE
i only give em my best oppinion

ASK EVERYONE

plus you wont get good unles you expand your shit to creativity
not creativity as in ways to drink or put a bullet in a dude

crativity as in TOPICS
like
9/11
jungles
deserts
or atleast Horror-Core
cmon reppin ya hood or how much money you got is all played out shit

plus we dont know if your serious so dont talk bout money
dont up yaself for smokin weed
or drinkin beer or vodka or jack

no one cares



and rappin were your from is just..blahblahblah
no one here reallys gives a fuck were your from
weather its the same block tupac lived at or the room across from the president


we want ppl who are serious about elevating to become good and real
UNDERGROUND rappers NOT MAINSTREAM bullshit

im not sayin ya shit sucks bro
just sayin you might wanna try it someday

[Hollow]

A'ight, I'm finally gonna say it... How the fuck does anyone consider "underground" rappers better than "mainstream" rappers?

Theory... You ain't, your buddy Venomous ain't, GTech ain't, Cool C ain't, Shaolin ain't, King MC ain't, Siinide ain't, Shark ain't, Quixotic ain't, and I ain't no "better" than fuckin' Pac, BTnH, N9ne, Shady or anyone on his label, any Roc-a-fella dude, or Bad Boy artist or anything.

An' when you get down to it, how are "mainstream" rappers worse than "underground rappers"? 99.999% of your "mainstream" rappers WERE "underground" at one point, an' half of 'em STILL release underground shit. From mix-tape to independent albums. So, maybe I could be wrong, but could you please tell me how if I am?

[Theory]

because underground is more creative bro
not just rappin bout

clubs
money
gettin high
sex
dancin in a club


the only decent mainstream stuff is RNB

but i guess i should've said this last post

my oppinions
but im just backin up somethig i believe in
so yea
i never said it was better
if i did then my bad

but i FEEL underground is more talented than mainstream crap
im not sayin u.d rappers are better than tupac
tupacs the shit
he's the only real oldschool rapper i got luv for bro

easy-e is aite but i dont like his rap style
it aint ...how can i say it accuratly.... hard hitting

i mean

cruisin down the street in my 6.4
jockin the bitches, slappin the hoes

i cant see any really talent in that
to me it seems he got lucky someone liked his shit
but i coulda wrote that with a broken wrist while im sleeping

but again back then there wasnt any real rap like today
im glad we got rappers rappin like they do today


~Theory


and again oppinions

[Dex Aspen]

cruisin down the street in my 6.4
jockin the bitches, slappin the hoes


went to the park to get the scoop,
knuckleheads out there cold shootin some hoops...
a car pulls up who can it be?
a fresh El Camino rollin Kilo G...
he rolled down his window and he started to say,
"it's all about makin that GTA"..

Cause the Boys in Tha Hood are always hard,
come talkin that trash we'll pull your car...
knowin nothing in life but to be legit,
don't quote me boy cause I ain't said shit..


...the fuck you talkin about? Let me guess,according to you if it wasnt made after 1990 then it can't be "hard" right? That music right there had Al Gore's wife calling for special government hearings to get this music banned back in the day.Please.

...not hard.Pfft,you need to fucking recognize kid.


-{A}-:out

[SevenDayTheory]

Post1:

lmfao ask everyone

i NEVER DICK RIDE
i only give em my best oppinion

ASK EVERYONE

Theres no point in asking everyone, coz u been riding they dick. So course they gonna back you faggot.

plus you wont get good unles you expand your shit to creativity
not creativity as in ways to drink or put a bullet in a dude

crativity as in TOPICS
like
9/11
jungles
deserts
or atleast Horror-Core
cmon reppin ya hood or how much money you got is all played out shit

Just coz you were brought up with a wallet full of cash and a healthy family dont mean everyone was. you don't like rapping bout reppin yo hood and maken cash coz you never had to... U a shit spitter.. you rap about issues u know about like 9/11 because its easy. rappin bout you last bust and sellin J to buy a meal... if its what really happens for u, then its good. So shut you mother fucken mouth.

plus we dont know if your serious so dont talk bout money
dont up yaself for smokin weed
or drinkin beer or vodka or jack

no one cares

its bout what you care about.. I rap bout shit i care about... think bout it. whats rap? its your thoughts on paper. would u right it if u didnt care? No. So just coz you dont like it.. dont mean most dont... your a fucken bitch Theory, you make me wanna become 'SevenDay' just so I can drop the 'Theory'. Fucken disgrace to the name...

and rappin were your from is just..blahblahblah
no one here reallys gives a fuck were your from
weather its the same block tupac lived at or the room across from the president

you a rappin for the wrong reasons bitch... pathetic. go back and do your algerbra and become a banker like daddy... you the bitches i sell J to.. trying escap what it is they call the real world... pffft...

we want ppl who are serious about elevating to become good and real
UNDERGROUND rappers NOT MAINSTREAM bullshit

you said it urself... no one cares, so if no one cares. Drop it, dont waste your time suck jaw. Ill feed him if need be, so will many others.. ur just a douche who dont know what his on about...

im not sayin ya shit sucks bro
just sayin you might wanna try it someday
Dont get me started...


Post 2:
because underground is more creative bro
not just rappin bout

clubs
money
gettin high
sex
dancin in a club

you just a underage, rich, wanna be pot head whos still a virgin and cant dance... You diss what u aint.. so u feel better bout yourself.. weak man, fucken weak!

the only decent mainstream stuff is RNB

but i guess i should've said this last post

my oppinions
Well you know what bitch, i dont care bout your opinion...

but im just backin up somethig i believe in
so yea
i never said it was better
if i did then my bad

well maybe his just rappin what he believes in to dip shit

but i FEEL underground is more talented than mainstream crap
im not sayin u.d rappers are better than tupac
tupacs the shit
he's the only real oldschool rapper i got luv for bro

you love him ay? kinda gay dont u think... haha.. if u love him, must meen u know him well ay? Whos Chino XL?

easy-e is aite but i dont like his rap style
it aint ...how can i say it accuratly.... hard hitting

i mean

cruisin down the street in my 6.4
jockin the bitches, slappin the hoes

i cant see any really talent in that
to me it seems he got lucky someone liked his shit
but i coulda wrote that with a broken wrist while im sleeping

yeah, i can right this right now.. ur a faggot! I wrote that awake with to good hands! Your opinions are as wanted as a fark in a lift...

but again back then there wasnt any real rap like today
im glad we got rappers rappin like they do today

yeah.. man.. ur fucked... its 100% now... What is rap? Rap is expressing emotions and events. Back in the 70s and shit, if u black. You descriminated against yeah... listen to some tupac and some 50cent... compare and contrast it.. list to Jay-Z and Akon... back in the day compared to today.. same stories... different rhymes... all the same music bro... Hip-Hop...

Get educated you worthless piece of crap.


~ SevenDay, Out!

~Theory


and again oppinions

[Nemesis14]

underground has better topics yes and is more creative but, mainstream (NaS, Eminem, alot of old school rappers) rappers don't just talk about sex and drugs and shit. thier alot of good mainstream rappers, most mainstream "rap" i don't consider rap, its mostly pop, like 50, lil scrappy, lil john, thats not rap

[Red Tha Baron]

..use PMs you t.wats

[Nemesis14]

seven that was good, i enjoyed that shit hahah, LMFAO, theroy hes right, rap is what u (the person) belive is right, not wtf theroy wants, so shut ur fuckin mouth u pathetic twat waffle, no one cares what u want to see, we here to become better rappers, not to listn to ur fuckin mouth run about how much better underground is, or how much u love pac, u goat fuckin fagget

[I.K.S.R.F.O]

i agree with dex ashy

and i cant dance for shit, not even drunk so stop hatin cause all my dancing genes are pure whit devil

fuccck all the rappers since 1990 who can only rap about pussy and cash
and if i ever met fabulous ( im dont care i cant spell cause im buzd) i hit his whore ass with the first thing i could find and run before his protective team tried to shoot at me, fuckin lispin ignorant fuck......gansta ass dr seuss

sorry for the rant, but i hate the luck charm wearing faggot

[Nemesis14]

gangsta ass dr. suess lmfao

[Red Tha Baron]

..use PMs you t.wats

[Dex Aspen]

..use PMs you t.wats


lol.

...your not actually expecting feedback for a diss are you? I'm not gonna fill up my PM box with mindless banter when it's way more convienent to just freepost in your thread.Actually the spit was only so-so..except for where you flipped his name around.I had to check mine real quick so you couldn't pull that shit on me.lol.

...stay up yo.



-{A}-:out

[Hollow]

because underground is more creative bro
not just rappin bout

clubs
money
gettin high
sex
dancin in a club

Okay, okay, okay... Now, I get what you're sayin... You're talkin' more about sell-outs than jus' mainstream. I get that, too. I'll agree on that front. But, there are a decent (not a LOT, but not too FEW, neither) number o' mainstreamers that don't sell-out to the industry jus' for the money. But, then again, half the peoples' dreams here is to get above this bullshit we're wastin' time with, take this music shit serious an' make money off of it. Honestly, if that's your dream, then "sellin'-out" is somethin' your gonna have to come face-to-face with. An', to be honest, that's the only way you're really gonna have that fortune an' fame life... Or, at least that's MY opinion.


easy-e is aite but i dont like his rap style
it aint ...how can i say it accuratly.... hard hitting

i mean

cruisin down the street in my 6.4
jockin the bitches, slappin the hoes

i cant see any really talent in that
to me it seems he got lucky someone liked his shit
but i coulda wrote that with a broken wrist while im sleeping
A'ight, I kinda agree. Not much overall "talent" in that. But, it wasn't about hella talent back then. The thing E, NWA, etc.-actually, nearly every west-coaster except Dre, Snoop an' Pac-were raised on platforms for, was because they were actually (even if it was exaggerated) was livin' that life. Yea, the glorified it an' marketted it like some Hollywood shit sometimes, but gettin' down to it, it was how they lived.

Now days, there's not just a handful o' people doin' that shit an' talkin' abotu it. So, now, you gotta rely more on skills an' talent. That's my opinion, too; but, I'd almost say that's fact. heh...

[Hollow]

Cause the Boys in Tha Hood are always hard,
come talkin that trash we'll pull your car...
I dunno... I know about an' old sayin' "pull your card." Like, "Keep it up an' I'ma pull your card, boy." Basically, "Keep it up, an' I'ma smash you." I've heard it before (an' actually had a few talks wit' a dude in jail about it. I've heard from a couple people that *that* was what he was sayin'.

That music right there had Al Gore's wife calling for special government hearings to get this music banned back in the day.Please.

...not hard.Pfft,you need to fucking recognize kid.

(Feels awkward backin' Theory up, but what needs done, needs done)... Ain't a need to recognize shit. It didn't almost get banned 'cause it was so hard. It almost got banned 'cause it was the first time people were tryin' to market "thug life." Music had been mostly positive vibes until a few dudes from CPT an' other state slums came about talkin' an' uppin' on what they had to do in life. All'a sudden, you got a genre in music poppin' up about drugs, bitches an' cop killin'. THAT'S what almost got it banned. Not "bein' hard." Bein' the FIRST. That's why it was the FIRST to almost get banned.

Oh, by the way, let's also step AHEAD o' the '90's too... That "banning" shit's not just about E. Ice T, Cube, all the way to Eminem have had the government on their backs about their music.

An', before you step on my toes over some false shit, no, I'm not "on Theory's dick" about none o' this an' I ain't tryin' some "net-beef" shit on you, neither. I'm jus' not gonna lie about the fact that E wasn't hella skilled. He was jus' the monarch o' this gangsta-rap shit an' that's what caused his problems.

But, like Theory said... This is jus' my opinion.

[Hollow]

Post1:

lmfao ask everyone

i NEVER DICK RIDE
i only give em my best oppinion

ASK EVERYONE

Theres no point in asking everyone, coz u been riding they dick. So course they gonna back you faggot.
Well, I thought he was ridin' Venomous jus' 'cause he was beefin' wit' me. But, if he's ridin' everyone, why'd he not ride me. Why'd he not ride browntown? How, if he's tellin' these people how much they suck, is he ridin' everyone?


plus you wont get good unles you expand your shit to creativity
not creativity as in ways to drink or put a bullet in a dude

crativity as in TOPICS
like
9/11
jungles
deserts
or atleast Horror-Core
cmon reppin ya hood or how much money you got is all played out shit

Just coz you were brought up with a wallet full of cash and a healthy family dont mean everyone was. you don't like rapping bout reppin yo hood and maken cash coz you never had to... U a shit spitter.. you rap about issues u know about like 9/11 because its easy. rappin bout you last bust and sellin J to buy a meal... if its what really happens for u, then its good. So shut you mother fucken mouth.

He needs to shut his mouth an' you needa open your eyes... HE'S RIGHT! You don't get better if you don't expand an' learn more. An', as far as sellin' J's goes, that don't change the fact that this is about music, an' you don't get more musical or lyrical skill if you don't practice new shit! Use your head, dawg. Think.


plus we dont know if your serious so dont talk bout money
dont up yaself for smokin weed
or drinkin beer or vodka or jack

no one cares

its bout what you care about.. I rap bout shit i care about... think bout it. whats rap? its your thoughts on paper. would u right it if u didnt care? No. So just coz you dont like it.. dont mean most dont... your a fucken bitch Theory, you make me wanna become 'SevenDay' just so I can drop the 'Theory'. Fucken disgrace to the name...
If the only thing that's important is what YOU think about your shit and what YOU care about, then why in the blazin' fuckin' hell are you here in the first place? The fact that you're even HERE shows that you give a fuck what other people think about your shit an' that you wanna improve it 'cause you want other people to like it. So that comment was jus' some bullshit li'l kid tryin' to run his mouth without any reason to back it up. If you don't care about what we think about your shit, get the fuck outta here an' leave us be.


and rappin were your from is just..blahblahblah
no one here reallys gives a fuck were your from
weather its the same block tupac lived at or the room across from the president

you a rappin for the wrong reasons bitch... pathetic. go back and do your algerbra and become a banker like daddy... you the bitches i sell J to.. trying escap what it is they call the real world... pffft... Okay, I disagree with what he said... But, you just wrote some retarded shit that really didn't have nothin' to do with what he said, so just shut the fuck up. He didn't say he wasn't to "escape" shit. He said he's tired o' people reppin' about where they're from on here.

The fuckin' facts are this: Murder, drug sells, assaults, rapes, poverty, starvation, oppression, abuse of power... that happens everywhere. So, when you're writin' some shit on the computer, no one gives a fuck if you're goin' through it in Compton or fuckin' Boston. If you wanna talk to people who CARE where you're from, go to a dating chatroom.



we want ppl who are serious about elevating to become good and real
UNDERGROUND rappers NOT MAINSTREAM bullshit

you said it urself... no one cares, so if no one cares. Drop it, dont waste your time suck jaw. Ill feed him if need be, so will many others.. ur just a douche who dont know what his on about...

im not sayin ya shit sucks bro
just sayin you might wanna try it someday
Dont get me started...
Sounds like you already started... Though you're not really on a roll, you're jus' spinnin' tires through some ignorant shit.


Now, after that, you decided to rip up his entire second post with some more nonsense bullshit that wasted everyone's time. But... There's one more little thing I wanna make a note about...


my oppinions
Well you know what bitch, i dont care bout your opinion...
Yes, you do. Whether you're smart enough to know it or not, the time you took to read through all his shit proves that you give a fuck what his opinion is an' obviously was determined to hear it, sense you had to choice to skip over it... So don't put some bullshit out there for us to read, okay? We're smart enough to know the difference.

Now with that said, I did care about what you said. I find it very fuckin' interesting to know why the fuck someone (who's obviously a dumb-fuck) has the urge to call ANYONE else out on anything... So, I was VERY interested to read this shit. Kinda disappointed, though....

[Dex Aspen]

Cause the Boys in Tha Hood are always hard,
come talkin that trash we'll pull your car...
I dunno... I know about an' old sayin' "pull your card." Like, "Keep it up an' I'ma pull your card, boy." Basically, "Keep it up, an' I'ma smash you." I've heard it before (an' actually had a few talks wit' a dude in jail about it. I've heard from a couple people that *that* was what he was sayin'.

That music right there had Al Gore's wife calling for special government hearings to get this music banned back in the day.Please.

...not hard.Pfft,you need to fucking recognize kid.

(Feels awkward backin' Theory up, but what needs done, needs done)... Ain't a need to recognize shit. It didn't almost get banned 'cause it was so hard. It almost got banned 'cause it was the first time people were tryin' to market "thug life." Music had been mostly positive vibes until a few dudes from CPT an' other state slums came about talkin' an' uppin' on what they had to do in life. All'a sudden, you got a genre in music poppin' up about drugs, bitches an' cop killin'. THAT'S what almost got it banned. Not "bein' hard." Bein' the FIRST. That's why it was the FIRST to almost get banned.

Oh, by the way, let's also step AHEAD o' the '90's too... That "banning" shit's not just about E. Ice T, Cube, all the way to Eminem have had the government on their backs about their music.

An', before you step on my toes over some false shit, no, I'm not "on Theory's dick" about none o' this an' I ain't tryin' some "net-beef" shit on you, neither. I'm jus' not gonna lie about the fact that E wasn't hella skilled. He was jus' the monarch o' this gangsta-rap shit an' that's what caused his problems.

But, like Theory said... This is jus' my opinion.



...first off I ment "card"...apparently I forgot a letter.Thank you Captian Spellcheck.lol.


Second...Gangster rap was well established by the time N.W.A came around with the likes of Ice T,Too Short,DJ Qwik,Paris,D.O.C,Gheto Boys,blah blah blah....it was the extremity (or "hard") of the lyrics they were using that shined the light brighest on them.I'm sure the name "Niggas With Attitude" helped fuel that fire also,but they were far from the first.

...as for the "riding Theory's dick" thing...What you do with other people's dick's is none of my business.I can guarentee you that when I debate something,that phrase has never been used by me...I like to think of myself as a little bit more intelligent then that then to tell someone something so...grade school lunchtable-ish.


1 more thing....if your gonna argue,take it to the debate forum where you can put all that useless information to good use insted of wasting it here in the diss forum...damn kid,didn't your momma teach you nuttin?



-{A}-:out

[Grifta]

Dex is right, Theory..."don't quote me boy cause I ain't said shit" haha see he knows ur saying shit about him haha

[Hollow]

...first off I ment "card"...apparently I forgot a letter.Thank you Captian Spellcheck.lol.
So, THAT'S what the 'S' on my chest stands for... Hmm... Naw, but I was actually askin' as much as I was statin' the fact--it'd work pretty well as "car" or "card," so I was kinda clarifyin' too.



Second...Gangster rap was well established by the time N.W.A came around with the likes of Ice T,Too Short,DJ Qwik,Paris,D.O.C,Gheto Boys,blah blah blah....it was the extremity (or "hard") of the lyrics they were using that shined the light brighest on them.I'm sure the name "Niggas With Attitude" helped fuel that fire also,but they were far from the first.
I'm not meaning it didn't exist at ALL, but he's essentially considered the god-father and founder for a reason. Well, maybe I should say the founder of "main-stream" gangsta rap? I mean, none of those you named off (save numero uno) do I really consider REAL "main-stream." *shrugs*


...as for the "riding Theory's dick" thing...What you do with other people's dick's is none of my business.I can guarentee you that when I debate something,that phrase has never been used by me...I like to think of myself as a little bit more intelligent then that then to tell someone something so...grade school lunchtable-ish.
Yea, that's nice an' all, but the phrase is used more than damn near any other fuckin' term in existance on this page, so I was savin' myself from the almost gauranteed comment -- if not from you, then from someone else. That's all.


1 more thing....if your gonna argue,take it to the debate forum where you can put all that useless information to good use insted of wasting it here in the diss forum...damn kid,didn't your momma teach you nuttin?
Honestly, I ain't feelin' the urge to create any damn debate on some other forum. Someone else posted up their opinion, so I used the simple REPLY button to reply my opnion back to them. Way I see it, if people don't want to read it, it's not wastin' to much more of their life to move their scroll-bar down a couple more centimeters.

[Theory]

lol i forgot about this



nemasis
im done ''beefin with you''

but this still doesnt explain how '' i '' think '' i '' own everybody
but w/e :roll:

lol damn i forgot about this shit...wow that would be hard but yea
lol