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GTech
02-02-2007, 01:37 PM
Didn’t spend much time on this… So don’t tell me what I already know... It's not often i drop diss tracks but shit has to be said...

[GTech]:

I’ll puncture this receiver, cuz im destructively treacherous
Call me dangerous, call me affectionate
Call Touch a pussy, lemme stuff TNTs up his clit
I’ll bang your “Ex” at the CNE while I stuff her with my dick
Feed her cotton candy, that’s been dipped in garbage
I’ll rip her esophagus apart, since she touched you
I slit these targets, choke ya neck and clutch you
Reject ya bargains, fuck the alliance witchu
I used you as a shield, I live in Canada so ima getchu
Your threats? In your threads is like an infant slinging toys at me
And the time we collabed I noticed I was only bringing noise with me
Yes diss tracks are pointless, but you neva responded to my call out
I’ll leave dis kid jointless, like watching old people, ima watch dis bitch fall out
If I saved my msn convos, I’d post em’ on RD as your humiliation!!!
Dude takes these forums too seriously, like a talent show reservation
You aint making it big! Like constructing a tower made outta tooth picks
Muthafucka I’ll rip his “self-esteem” by ripping his “self-evaluating” rubrics
(Dammm!)
Touch refers me to as “The Doc” since I saved his “career” and put em’ together
Truth is… if I was the “Doc” I wulda purposely leave him dying on his stretcher
U aint “The Game” stop fronting yourself, u faggot ass 14-year-old adolescent
I’ll take blood from u and donate it, let that be your future profession…
I’ll give it to people who actually need it, instead on a wasted essence
Rejected u like a hoe that pleaded, along with ur spiritual presence
You couldn’t come/cum back if ur pussy was squirting at reverse!
I’ll leave ya at the hospital, having you flirting with the nurse
Im hurting you first, decapitating ya head, fuck your lil “homie embrace”
I aint gay muthafucka, but im stronger than YOU, I’ll take more rabies than a coyote will take
I prolly have more “personal”s on you, than the amount of PMs you have in ur box
And I’ll lay more infa ray dots on you than chicken pox
Like a dead body, you’ll get tossed right across Niagara Falls off the dock
These brawls I mock, he’d prolly crawl than walk, his raps are insults to rock
Hip-hop? He says it’s dead like the Bloods murdering a Crip
But in tha end Lil Touch’s diss tracks turns himself a hypocrite
The Diss Section was opened especially for you! So take advantage
Now he aint saying shit! Cuz RD left him with chaotic damage
Nobody but The Profiled supports you
If I had the power I would abort you…
Like parents, I’ll divorce you into pieces let the bugs eat ya decease
I’ll get fame, share with you? FUCK NO, not even spiritual monks will give u a peace/piece
Maybe one day you’ll gain access to the moderator’s section, but I doubt it
Cuz we be dissin u while u remain unnoticeably unconscious about it!
Vets, and even NOOBS be LIL TOUCH IS DISLIKED
Most hated, outdated, ya positive feed is a psyche
The Profiled, is brainwashed, but I give props to them, without a whisper
What I don’t understand is why they follow Sailor Moon’s sister?
And Touch, don’t even think King_mc has respect for you
The “respect is gone” he even disinfects the residue
King sends the link to my call out, and Touch SIGNS OFF like a coward
YES, claim u a hustla selling flour and call it white powder (coke)
I would go on, but it’s useless, this diss prolly equals all of your Justinsane tracks
And don’t be hating on dis diss cuz they all true facts…
Get your groove back, and diss me again once more
Im straight fiya homie I even left my blunts sore…

I was bored… So I wrote this up, it’s WHACK, prolly one my whackest shit eva, but I just wanted to state sum facts and come back at this pussy since he neva accepted my call out...


Lil Touch, tha facts i stated, u know what im talking about. U kno it's all true

[King_Mc]
02-02-2007, 04:35 PM
LoL.. good shit man.. liked the personals.. shuda pm'd me, i wuda put some bars down :D

but as Lil bitch wud say:

"Ur career is over"

Hollow
02-02-2007, 07:28 PM
Minimum ten times better than 90 percent of what I've seen. Real nice. Also, I could tell when you was actually gettin' in the zone with it. Everything just elevated as it worked it's way towards the end. Props.

Fav Bar:
I prolly have more “personal”s on you, than the amount of PMs you have in ur box
And I’ll lay more infa ray dots on you than chicken pox

The way you used the first line was a personal in itself. Not to mention a good word-play in each line. Nice props. Only way it woulda been better is if'd flowed more even.

Elevation tip:
--Only thing I can really suggest is more complex rhymes (i.e. more syllables in your end-bar rhymes). That'd be icin' for the cake.


Very nice, man. Keep it up.

GTech
02-02-2007, 08:43 PM
]but as Lil bitch wud say:

"Ur career is over"

lol :P yes he is done... and a collab woulda been nice, but i wanted to handle his pussy ass alone :D and i think i did.. dissin RD as a whole signifies his effort of giving up... he's prolly gonna be banned soon...

and Hollow i feel u, yes my flow was off... and my complexity on this wasn't at level.. usually it is.. but thx for tha feed and tha tip.

UPPING

Nemesis14
02-02-2007, 11:08 PM
sick purly sick, lil touch is owned, lil.......... he raped u...........verbally

Theory
02-02-2007, 11:23 PM
^^^ i have to cosign



little time my ass
my finger nearly broke from scrolling down soo long

lol

Game Shark
02-03-2007, 01:52 AM
U did good we should do a gang up dis on him like he did justinsane, and yur wrong tha profiled is over I can't access r forum he terminated it or at least me but anyway it feels good 2 rap without a traitor supporting my everymve like I needed him 2

Oh and touch that crippled guy I hit with tha steel chair that was u

Quixotic
02-03-2007, 08:03 AM
Man this good. Told you I learn new things everyday, I didn't kno Touch and Shark was beefin. Yep looks like the bridge is finally over.

R@g3
02-03-2007, 08:58 AM
shit was hot tech keep flowin.

YouNgWuN
02-03-2007, 10:30 AM
diss shyt was hott. he needed 2 get dissed. fuck his ass. Profiled is Officially over.. R.i.HELL Touch. fuck ya bitch ass *pours out tha liquor*
I'ma mutha fuckin Free Agent!!

Lyrical Homicide
02-03-2007, 10:35 AM
Haha i liked this one it was pretty emotion filled an i can tell that this lil touch mate is over with. looks like everyone on this thread hates him.

Quixotic
02-03-2007, 10:49 AM
Didn't read Touch's diss til after this...man...I wonder how he will handle this without a crew to back him up?? OH WELL!! ONCE AGAIN NICE WORK G TECH!!

Liked this part most:
Yes diss tracks are pointless, but you neva responded to my call out
I’ll leave dis kid jointless, like watching old people, ima watch dis bitch fall out
If I saved my msn convos, I’d post em’ on RD as your humiliation!!!
Dude takes these forums too seriously, like a talent show reservation

Game Shark
02-03-2007, 11:45 AM
2 what was tha profiled pm me 2 do tha we were yur life support dising lil bitch himself

EAST COAST!

~Yung_Money~
02-03-2007, 02:48 PM
nice shit man, i was feelin it, how come your friend lil touch hasnt come and replied to this wonderful work of art

Theory
02-03-2007, 02:58 PM
lol he got scared





!!WESTCOAST!!
^just felt like sayin that :P

~Yung_Money~
02-03-2007, 03:07 PM
lol he got scared





!!WESTCOAST!!
^just felt like sayin that :P

Hell yeah ::West Coast:: stand da fuck up Compton representin

""money steps up to the mic for a minute""

, first off id like to take a shot out at my homies in Inglewood, my nikkas over on Santana Blocc, Nutty Blocc, Grape Street, Maye Ave., Cypress St., my boys in Greenleaf, Longbeach, Alondra

wat it is to my nikkas LIl Tye, DZL, azules bandidos, shawtyT, and all da rest of my loco cuzzos rip raggin on da south side peace


""money walks down from the stage with a forty and a blunt throwin up da dub while California applauds him""

Theory
02-03-2007, 03:13 PM
as you can tell in my sig im from FRESNO!
central CALI

'steps up to the mic'

ehem

id like to thank every single one of my fans
my family and homies
also my previous girlfriends for givin me confidence

and thanks to my hater ive grown to know how to take beef
and dont get 6 feet deep in that shit anymore

'steps down shoutin ''WESTCOAST IS BACK''


lol

GTech
02-03-2007, 10:57 PM
wtf is this? lol this ABOUT ME KILLEN LIL TOUCH...


UPPIN ON MORE FEED, PROPS TO THA ONES I ALREADY GOT

WEST-COAST!!!

Shoalin
02-03-2007, 11:40 PM
fuck i love when 13 year old white kids from road island think there gansta'z an say shit they herd on a GAME or 50 song, its fucking hilarious.



sory G-Tech but i have to lock this, shit talkin by certain wannabee's got outta hand.

*LOCKED*