BROWNSTOWN

[Da Kid D Nice]

ayo browstown u a clown bound to get spit on
ur town brown cuz downtown wea u get shit on

shits full, i dump it till da clip gon
u a bitch nigga, neva get no play like a skipped song

[Nemesis14]

yo needs to be long, if it was longer it would be better
4/10

[Hollow]

Really, I didn't think it was that impressive. 3/10

Fav. Bar: (God-damn! The VARIETY and CHOICES!!!!)
ayo browstown u a clown bound to get spit on
ur town brown cuz downtown wea u get shit on

--Simple reason: It was better than the other one.

Elevation Tip:
--Better personals, and nameplay. It's a diss... diss this kid.
--Make it more complex than 2 + 2 (an' I don't mean 2 x 2, neither)
--Make it a verse worth readin'.

Umm... I don't even know what else to say about that one.

[brown town sd living]

only thing full of shit is u



scratch the surface u only got to the mantle, i showed u before i was too much to handle
ill blow ur shit like i was blowin out ur candle, listen while ur flow get dismantled

once wasnt enough, why? is life treatin u rough with the money n soccer mom u got
brush ur teeth cause the shit u be spittin came out like rot