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LocoKidd
02-11-2007, 07:31 AM
Check In Due: Monday, February 12th, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Thursday, February 15th, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

BOTH EMCEES WILL AGREE ON THE NUMBER OF BARS

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Don't ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

KrAzY
02-11-2007, 09:52 AM
check.. 5 barz good?

Anesthetic
02-12-2007, 02:41 PM
5 Barz is perfect.

Swoosh.

KrAzY
02-15-2007, 10:53 AM
ahh shit.. due tonight.. gl..

Anesthetic
02-15-2007, 02:42 PM
"....I Remember When... I Remember, I Remember, When I Lost My Mind.... There Was Something So Special About That Day...."

CheKK!!

An's Breakin-Blockz, Defeatin' Guyz Who Excel In Takin-C.ockz, A Punch'll Leave Ya Face Wit A 'Deep Space' Like 'Where Star Trek Was Takin-Spock'
Making-Dropz That'll Break-Him Off' And Leave His Verse '{Gneiss Lee DeComposed}' Like 'Martial Artists Breaking-Rockz'!!!!
{Gneiss Lee Decomposed/Nicely Decomposed}
:shocked!:

My Punchez? Ya Can't See-These, Leave Ya 'Smoked' Like Weed-Leavez, With A Barrel Called The 'BlockBuster' Like 'A Movie Release'
I'll 'Leave His Hide Wrapped Around A Tree' Like 'Indian Teepees' When I 'Stomp Krazy' Like 'Shattering Gnarls Barkley CD's'!!!
I'm A Practiced-Vet That'll Snap-Ya-Neck, Grab-Respect, And Stomp Like 'An Angry Chiropractor' Till 'The Alignment Of Ya Back-Is-Wrecked'
So The Crowd'll See Ya Fractured-Neck And Say 'Annie Ur Sick!!' I'll Be Like Who're '{Utu Tell Me}' Like 'We Spoke African Dialectz'!!!
{Utu/You to}
:silly:

Ya Verbz Like 'Defunct Erasers' Not 'Gettin Rid Of Most-Linez' But The Crowd Treatz Mine Like 'Explosions At Coal Refineries'....They 'Toast Mine'
So I Can Boast-Fine With Most-Rhymez Cuz It 'Ain't Apparent When {Isle} Go Down' Like 'Atlantis' Eroding Coastline'!
{Isle/I'll}

Ya 'Scriptz Fall Short' Like 'Midgetz Dropping Biblez', So Drop That Act Bitch Cuz Like 'Angry Bird-Feederz' I'll 'Knock You Off Ya Perch'
Cuz I'll Jump-You, Stomp-You, Kick Once More Just To Slump-You, Then When You Die, I'll '{Dumb Pue}' Like 'Where Retardz Sit In Church'!!!
{Dumb Pue/Dump You}
:eating:

!....Come Now Now Who Do You... Who Do You, Who Do You, Who You Think You Are.... Heh Heh Heh, Bless Your Soul....!




==========
Gneiss - A Type Of Rock
Lee - Bruce Lee
Utu - East African Tribe

KrAzY
02-15-2007, 02:44 PM
hahhah...time for a show :popcorn:

:eating:

beat me? im bout to grab-n-choke..my 'verses couldnt-be-owned' if you had 'pink-slips to my raps-n-quotes'
ya 'weak-hits coudlnt be spread' 'passin-a-note'..this kid takes more 'wood-to-the-dome' than 'easton trucks' deliverin 'bats-to-the-coast'*
post much? i dont even have half-of-ya-posts.. ha.. imma laugh-n-boast cuz even wit 10 posts id still smash-this-joke
ya ass-is-toast, watch as i slash-his-throat..trust this kids 'been a dick' rider since 'roman' times i 'askd-the-pope'(current roman pope benedict XVI/been a dick )
at-last-we-post.. n put an impact-to-this-thread, krazy 'take ya name' n leave ya 'lackin-ya-meds', the way im 'stealin ya sleep' its like im 'jackin-ya-bed', my 'punches hit you after i kill you 'like im smackin-the-dead..**
foot to the back-of-ya-head cops distrubed-to-find, ya when i 'wrap ya teeth around the side walk' and 'curb-ya-mind', you dumb-fuck, face looks like its been num-chucked, all 'lumped-up' like 'werds-for-blinds', ya look like a charcater out of a book from rl stine..(rl sinte wrote goose bumps monsters faces... fucked up.. lumped up words brail for blinds)
at this time, imma Destroy Obliterate Eliminate basically just wreck-ya-herd, like im 'bustin lcds' no way to 'project-ya-werds', ya girl aint lookin for a baby retart thats why her eggs reject-ya-sperm, like a 'disturbed botanist' im havin fun when i disect-this-herb..(botanist are plant scientist)

:snipersmile: :scatter:
*explanation florida suncoast dome easton trucks wood bats delivering them baseball field hense takin wood to the dome.. ask if you dont understand..
**anesthetic his name is a medicine that makes you sleep, im taking it leaving him lacking his meds.. so that follows into the next line stealin ya sleep medicine that makes you sleep

KrAzY
02-15-2007, 02:50 PM
forgot to bold the D.O.E. in the last line.. but yall get it his herd crew..

VOTE UP..nice battle :vamp:

Anesthetic
02-15-2007, 02:51 PM
LoL, good post. 8)

Ahh Swoop Pen
02-15-2007, 03:14 PM
punches = annie, more consistant to me and hit a we bit harder
personals = i seen none . but i really dont know yall that much
metaphors = annie hit a bit harder but it was close .. im feel'n that bat line tho
mutlies = krazy .. he had more and inners too , but it was close too
nameplay = annie 's .. only one i seen
wordplay = annie
complexity = annie a little more
creativity = annie ROFL THAT UTU line /chiropractor line
consitstancy = annie
flow= irrelevant at this point
structure = irrelevant at this point
vocab = irrelevant at this point
CUZ

vote = Anesthetic

good battle tho can yall return the favor here .. we need vet votes
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=46640&highlight=

Anesthetic
02-15-2007, 03:20 PM
One - Nill. Upping.

KrAzY
02-15-2007, 03:26 PM
hahah.. where was his nameplay?..
at-last-we-post.. n put an impact-to-this-thread, krazy 'take ya name' n leave ya 'lackin-ya-meds', the way im 'stealin ya sleep' its like im 'jackin-ya-bed', my 'punches hit you after i kill you 'like im smackin-the-dead..**

but i guess thats to complex for you oh wait he got that to..silly vote.. but yeah from now on.. make sure you read the verses.. befor eyou vote.. dont dr..

Ahh Swoop Pen
02-15-2007, 03:30 PM
lol i ment to put you in the 1st place

Anesthetic
02-15-2007, 03:31 PM
'Stomp Krazy' Like 'Shattering Gnarls Barkley CD's'!!!

Double entendre with the Name and Wordplay. Check and Mate. Lets not sway votes.

KrAzY
02-15-2007, 03:35 PM
sway votes?... umm.. check and mate.. aka swaying votes..???

KrAzY
02-15-2007, 03:36 PM
it was a good battle man but from now on respectd votes only.. no beef with ya..

Ahh Swoop Pen
02-15-2007, 03:38 PM
i never heard of it and i googled to find it and there nothing is come'n up so i didnt consiter it nameplay

i google it like 80 different ways ... should hav showed a link or something

Ahh Swoop Pen
02-15-2007, 03:41 PM
nvm i just found it


Artist Information
Gnarls Barkley is the remarkable collaboration between DJ/producer/mash-up king Danger Mouse and psychedelic soul crooner/MC Cee-Lo, of the Atlanta hip-hop group Goodie Mob. Both refreshingly outre and delightfully accessible in the manner of Outkast's best work, the duo's first single, "Crazy," was a huge hit in the U.K. before being released state-side to similar fanfare. Gnarls Barkley's 2006 debut, ST. ELSEWHERE, also contains a truly bizarre reworking of the Violent Femmes' "Gone Daddy Gone," which perfectly exemplifies the duo's creativity and originality.


my bad for all the freeposts .. but it was irrelevant to the fact that annie won in my oppinion

Gopha
02-15-2007, 03:53 PM
^^^you would have to have lived in a bomb shelter for tha past year to not have heard Crazy by gnarlz barkley lolz...

and goddamn yo, everyonez stealin mah smilie deez dayzz...

:eating:

LocoKidd
02-15-2007, 04:13 PM
^^^you would have to have lived in a bomb shelter for tha past year to not have heard Crazy by gnarlz barkley lolz...



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LYRICS
02-16-2007, 02:29 PM
Punches:
Personals: a
Multies: k
Metas: tie
Flow: tie
Wordplay: a
Creativity: a
Nameplay: a
Complexity: k
Consistency: a
Vocab: k
enjoyment k


Overall Vote: annie just

Anesthetic
02-16-2007, 02:43 PM
Two-Nill.

[King_Mc]
02-16-2007, 02:54 PM
Punches: A
Personals:
Multies: K
Metas: A
Flow: TIE
Wordplay: A
Creativity: TIE
Nameplay: A
Complexity: TIE
Consistency: A
Vocab: K

Overall Vote: Annie

-KO-

[King_Mc]
02-16-2007, 02:54 PM
^PERSONALS-- Annie (my bad)

Cool c
02-16-2007, 03:02 PM
Punches:Annie
Personals:Tie
Multies: Krazy
Metas: Annie
Flow: Krazy
Wordplay: TIe
Creativity: TIE
Nameplay: Annie
Complexity: tie
Consistency: Krazy
Vocab: TIe
enjoyment Tie

_BREAK DOWN_
Nice battle
they both came with a different style Krazy came old school, how we used to battle so it throw you off. From the new Bar phaze we got going on. On the site.

Krazy came by Line for Line(old school)
Annie used the Bar for Bar (new school)

the only you will understand his verse you would have to did it yourself such as me. But I like both and I will call this a-


-TIE- Respected Vet Vote

LocoKidd
02-16-2007, 03:17 PM
TKO Annie Wins.


Well fought battle from both textcees.


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