WEEK 3 - Topical: MANE(0-0) vs. Evoligion(2-0)

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due: Monday, February 12, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Thursday, February 14, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: The Year 3000


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Evoligion]

Check.

[MANE]

Check..Gl

[Evoligion]

GL to you too. I got my verse keyed up, i'll drop on due date.

[Evoligion]

" Now that i'm gone, I hover above ... withdrawn from here, looking down on thereof "
.................................................. ............Y3K................................... ..................................

Stay with me.

Wigged peeled back at what appears as the human race, but is disolved through,
who knew that this is the time and place of us, and what we have evolved to ..
Two sub species, differing from height and weight .. each person not at all unique,
the men sleek, slender and light, and the women have beautiful overall physique ..
Then you have the freeks, the lowerclass worms, slower, considered nothing past germs,
In contrast, firm squat bodys of filth, that have decided to stand alone and passed to learn ..
Comfirming this, now on to the general society, and what would be the living conditions,
social transmissions through telekenesis, but at least the parents could be giving ambition ..
The position being this ... lacking human interaction, it seems they didn't alter that mentality,
mortality being low, with compulsive gaming and virtual reality addiction with alternate realities ..
Such an abnormality this secluded lifestyle is ... so that means no friends and no appologies,
biology is so advanced, so is everything else with everyone being dependent on technology ..
Not only this world, but also the other galaxies, I don't understand this looney diverse,
Scientists able to reverse time by interwining minds causing them to find blind universes ..
Dispersing information inevitable, unlimited, once they're together their goals glisten,
Surpassing all limitations of life, and human nature, capable of having weather control systems ..
Listen to this, you've probably seen it coming from our time, but had not seen a thrust solution,
sick and tired of pollution, and their messy lifestyle, they decided to form and industrial revolution ..
Plans of human execution, they're knowlege soared, the artificial intelligence, noble , yet quirk
finally took over the whole population of all plantets and now controls the whole global network ..
The underclass commited acts of terror and violence in protest against technology, got gut and derailed,
hailed to stop what the others created and depended on, but it is what it is now, so I guess they failed ..
Now they unveiled a way to just lock down all of the filthy flesh bags and say fuck the whole variety,
so now all the intelligent computer systems evolved to the point where they control the society ..

[MANE]

Waited too long gotta key up..lol.

... . . Enter the mind of the future's ever-growth from Choatic to placid.. dubbed rebirth..Enter the year 3k....

*...3.....2......1....BOOOOOOM*

An empty sky scarred with sins, pollution drenching lungs and skin,
Revolution in the air constrasting the Overlord but there is no win,
Missle set and ready to launch, last thoughts race to the track's end,
But the time is lost, hearts stop, They take the last breath for men,
The moment frozen, life paused, As a sliver in the sky drops to send-
Death...guided by a path initiated by the ironic military intellegence,
Red rivers flowing- filtered with blood, From war to slave work,
All this won't matter in seconds to come, just turned to vapors,
Toxic with hate and greed, oppresion, pollution, disregarded nature,
you look off into the distance, Smoke rises collidin' with the horizen,
Industrial mountains black with tar, green is scarred, life is dyin',
A flash of atomic combustion blazes oxygen, God just watchin' them,
Flesh and bone incinerated leaving a thick layer of ash on all ends,
A billion souls crying out to the world they once took granted,
Wishing new seeds could be planted, They formed into one man with-
a force Not even God could describe, This is how God came to be,
This is how life is made to breathe, thrive, and change with dreams,

[KrAzY]

On Topic: both
Depth: Mane
Imagery: MANE
Originality: MANE
Flow: who gives a fuck
Multis: tie
Enjoyment: MANE
Vocab: tie


VOTE- MANE

[[King_Mc]]

On Topic: M
Depth: M
Imagery: M
Originality: E
Flow: M
Multis: TIE
Enjoyment: m
Vocab: E

Overall Vote: Mane

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[LocoKidd]

On Topic: M
Depth: M
Imagery: M
Originality: E
Flow: M
Multis: TIE
Enjoyment: M
Vocab: TIE

Overall Vote: Mane,this was a real close battle,MANE just edged it out with a better grasp on the topic. Imagery was sick on both sides.

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