WEEK 3 - Topical: ~Yung_Money~(0-0) vs. ARMADA(0-0)

[LocoKidd]

*DOUBLE POST*

[LocoKidd]

Check In Due: Monday, February 12, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Thursday, February 14, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: Blood On My Sword


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Dnot ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[ARMADA]

CHECK!

[~Yung_Money~]

check

im not fully active right now, because i only have access to a computer at work, but ill write something at home, and then type it quick when im at work

[ARMADA]

good to see you made it Yung...heard a bout ya computer problems, just to let you know, i'm doing the blood on my sword topic...and I will keep it under 20 lines or max 20 lines...do you mind if pics are involved?...get at me...pm or suttin

[~Yung_Money~]

naw i dont care bout pics

[~Yung_Money~]

see~*red*~images, i~relapse, on da past, *sharpening* thoughts, yet~facts/
see~dead~ligaments, thighs~collapsesd, brokens baks, so distraught, by left~in-tacts/

im *pierced* by this angering *novel*, to da tip of da *sword* satin yields i grovle/
so on memory i caudal, try to hold still un-seen like sculptured models/

dis is a war dat im fightin in, wit my self or somethin past my comp~reh~ension/
i try to break the barracade, smash dis section, dis part of my life stop~ the~tension/

even~wit~god on my side, i still cant find da power to *pull*~ away~from~evil/
im leavin~dis~rock i reside, dis island of pain full~strain~thus~fetal/

mah~trust~in~da~eagle, but it wont guide~my~peop~le, focused~on~sand/
must~bust~dis~regal, for where i ride~to~meet~you, *poking*~the~hand/




quick 5 bars i typed up on mah break, drop ya shit fam

[ARMADA]

...Blood on my sword...


Water drippin from my weapon slippin slowly to the floor
With my hands upon my head I see the blood upon my sword
Pause and reminisce this sequence of my life uncovered raw
I implore strategic tactics stone unturned no less explored
Rest inside my mental chamber seething rotten to the core
Force my enemy to witness… whispers willingly ignored
Pleads of mercy shattered faded ears sedated no remorse
As I twist the point of madness through an open corridor
Closing in the walls surround me fierce fighting for the door
Enter forced to slay a demon seething stabbing viciously
Breathless tempest ruthless centered deep in dens inequity
In agony this pain abundant stunted split like slitted wrists
Relieve my weapon of its duties ending wars a single kiss
if you ever tell your mother..........................................
.................................................. .I will fucking kill the bitch!


...ARMADA...

[~Yung_Money~]

not drop fam, glad to see u could make it


::Uppin for votes::

[LYRICS]

On Topic: a
Depth: y
Imagery: a
Originality: a
Flow: a
Multis: y
Enjoyment: a
Vocab: a

Overall Vote: i think armada got this i got more into it i think he told the story better

[~Yung_Money~]

aight honest feed, good lookin fam

1-0 armada

uppin

[LocoKidd]

On Topic: Arm
Depth: Arm
Imagery: Arm
Originality: TIE
Flow: Yung
Multis: Yung
Enjoyment: Arm
Vocab: Arm

Overall Vote: ARMADA,feels like Yung money didnt really get a grasp on the concpet,his structure was way off too. ARMADA did a good jpb overall with imagery and depth.


2-0

[~Yung_Money~]

aight, aight

i think my drop was a lil to metaphorical, i was writing about da topic through my whole drop, but indirectly, mah bad

still uppin fo votes

[GTech]

On Topic: Ar
Depth: Ar
Imagery: Ar
Originality: tie
Flow: tie
Multis: Young
Enjoyment: tie
Vocab: young

Overall Vote: Armanda.. i thought it was a close battle.. both emcees seem to be at the same level.. young maybe it's just me but Armanda stayed on topic more. he got the imagry as well which is always good in a topical.. and basically got the o/a cats.


3-0 KO