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$killZ
02-11-2007, 06:04 PM
Give you~frustration with the~temptation i got to pull this trigger,
This is like a lyrical~vacation, A bull's head is not needed, your's will be my~decoration /

You destroyed your race's~population from too much~m.asturbation /
You'll turn back soft when parents bring up~decriminalization /

My bullets are a lethal~injection, watch em spray out in ya Fuckin~direction
/ They'll rikashade off your body, no damage done /

Emotionaly hurt cause damage was done physicaly hurt the~ho /
Quit your job, Flakes falling from the sky ill pay you 5 dollars to shovel My~snow

I just proved you lost~already,
Have you gunnin' for me like~headly!!!

You'll turn to~suicide,
Like those fuckin poor people in new orleans dying from Carbon~Monoxide /

They call me the grim reaper of rap you soul will be fuckin~torn /
This aint my fault, destructive mindstate is the way i was~born /

Never chill wit Bi's, and Gay's again, aint doin that shit~publicaly /
Ima be like them warshipers in Iraq i strap a fuckin bomb across~me /

Ya'll just talk shit yall aint bullet~proof /
I'll shoot rounds at you, watch it rickasade off the windows and put holes In the~roof /

Revealing rage during the winds of war when columbine had people using~M16's /
I reveal the emotion in these emotionaly destroyed~teens /

Looking for who raised you, your parent's will be called~upon /
The rage of anger an~illusion till the veteran's complete his~execution /

*RioTMakA'*
02-11-2007, 07:05 PM
aight first of all the punches werent all that great, ok. not great
secondly, it didnt really rhymes that well, you using big ass words but not makin'em rhyme, try doin that too. and the flow was a lil off to me, i might have read it wrong but it was kind of not going nicely when i read it

SiiNiDE
02-11-2007, 08:42 PM
Why do people insist on making new accounts to diss people? (I'm almost 100% sure this is a member)..

The ~ signs in the middle doesn't make something a multi. They have to sound the same with more than one syllable. Hence, multi-syllable-rhyming.
You Frustration / The Temptation - Not a Multi. Read over some things in the Dog training section and keep elevating, goodluck.

Grifta
02-12-2007, 02:25 AM
it was probably big_touch/lil_touch..didnt he have a beef with rage?

R@g3
02-12-2007, 01:46 PM
this nigga suck...see me in the arena.

J Day
02-12-2007, 08:04 PM
this nigga suck...see me in the arena.


^^^OH SHIT! CANT WAIT!!!!! BATTLE OF THE BUSTERS

u both fucking suck..


2/10 on this diss...would of been a 1, but i gave u a point
for doin it on rage..but this shit still stank..

$killZ
02-14-2007, 10:12 AM
who's Lil Touch and Big Touch??
What are they little brother and big brother?? :?
Ohh and i was just looking for positive feed and negetive feed, but no hate. anyway thanks for the feed back.

AKA-Ability.
02-14-2007, 01:21 PM
Well..personally the lyrics were pretty shit. You had the idea with vocab and multis but it wasn't just working....lyrical status..5/10 who you picked to diss 10/10 RAGE YOUR SOOOOOO GAYYYYYYYYYYYY

$killZ
02-14-2007, 06:34 PM
uhh ok? :roll: :?

SeRgEnT-StAtS
02-14-2007, 07:01 PM
Well..personally the lyrics were pretty shit.
^Lmao...Took Words Straight Outa My Mouth!