mello2
02-13-2007, 09:49 PM
i close my eyes. i control my destiny
my life is a crime scene, a true mystery//
my misery,a light at the end of a tunnel
gettin in trouble, welcome to my concrete jungle//
this games like math and so i hate subtractin
faces of my friends lye dead in these caskets//
this happens so rapid, a crisis so tragic
ur show is over but these cats keep on clappin//
i live with no regrets, no remorse to what ive done
im going crazy like those war vets from vietnam//
im working my ass off, time to blast off
leave u motionless like a wax doll//
ill isolate you like a man in a cubicle
cops find you dead at home then go to your funeral//
i dont know, i just started to rap and im really having flowing problems..i dont know, can you guys send me some feedback on what i can do better and what was wrong with my rap...
my life is a crime scene, a true mystery//
my misery,a light at the end of a tunnel
gettin in trouble, welcome to my concrete jungle//
this games like math and so i hate subtractin
faces of my friends lye dead in these caskets//
this happens so rapid, a crisis so tragic
ur show is over but these cats keep on clappin//
i live with no regrets, no remorse to what ive done
im going crazy like those war vets from vietnam//
im working my ass off, time to blast off
leave u motionless like a wax doll//
ill isolate you like a man in a cubicle
cops find you dead at home then go to your funeral//
i dont know, i just started to rap and im really having flowing problems..i dont know, can you guys send me some feedback on what i can do better and what was wrong with my rap...