writing problems??

[mello2]

hey i work really hard on rapping and trying to elevate and shit...but i have a major problem on writing about things, like im worried about the rhyme sounding corny or is off flow...i dont know like where to start, i read the stickys, and wrote notes but it helps if i get advice from u guys..?

[mello2]

got any tips??!

[~Yung_Money~]

jus try writing and posting it up in da open mic, it would help heads to better give u specific advice on things to work on, dont worry about it being good or not, we all need to start somewhere

[EyEcRu:ST]

Learn from feed

[brown town sd living]

exactly wat they said....... u dont know till u try it...... u aint goin to get clowned on or n e thing like that ull just get advice

work on it cuz i doubt anybody joins n theyre perfect or havent worked on their stuff

[mello2]

thanks i just posted one in the open mic column, its not good but i just wanna get better, thanks for the comments, it helped