Week 4 Topical: Evoligion(2-1)-ChoosenOne13(2-1)*MW Playoff*

[Dex Aspen]

TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.




Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: Lowriders


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses


*WINNER OF THIS ROUND ADVANCES TO MIDDLEWEIGHT FINAL NEXT WEEK*

[The Chozen One 13]

check u drop first

[Evoligion]

Check.

[The Chozen One 13]

(Chorus)X2
Police on my trail i whip it with the lowrider/
they trying to change me into a slow rider/
many attempts to stop me but they gonna fail/
trying to stop me, how they ever gonna prevail/


the shiny red candy dripping lowrider feel like pyro when i campaign/
speeding on the highway doing 90 mph make it drop on a rampage/
police are latent as i transmit as my tires hit the street as there sible/
im cognizant of 5-0 my face is blushin red now i bounce like a dribble/
i roll up the dark tinted window of the lo lo as the po po are on pursuit/
im hasting threw traphic driving temerity as i stop my mind and speculate
i analogous music warren g but im going against him i aint gonna regulate
make a keen turn of the highway with the lo lo because the 20 inch rims/
push the gas as i pass the crooked ass cops with my bummy rich tims/
they try to set a road block but i fuck with there mind as i use the hydrolic
im a fien for classic 70' lowryders and i fiend for jail so call me a diabolic/
as i open my butterfly laborginni doors i demote out and i haste through/
i dip near the corner of the store as he gets out the car in a slow pace 2/
with the police far behind me on his feet i get my ass back in the lowryder
im floating like Ali and i flow like rakim so i guess that im a flow fighter/

(Chorus)X2
Police on my trail i whip it with the lowrider/
they trying to change me into a slow rider/
many attempts to stop me but they gonna fail/
trying to stop me, how they ever gonna prevail/


strolling down treadway RD where my inebriate cousin abides/
i park near the crummy park across the street as i run inside/
i glance outside as i head inside as 5-0 spot me in a quagmire/
i sit on the tan couch and think of a plan that doesnt backfire/
as time passes by im surprised that a thought comes to mind/
no i aint going back jail and no i aint wasting any of my time/
i put thoughts synchronously if it was a plan using my sanity/
im sitting there sad as i see my red lowryder sitting the danity/
running fast to the stairs as i stop and my my cuzin on the vigil/
as i sneak easily out the door without a peep as im very civil/
i spot my car at the end of the park where it was deployed/
"go outside" i say to my cuzin to act like a regular decoy/
the plan goes as followed as the police goes to him for ?/
i dip past the police,without a peep,as he learns his lesson/
Police on my trail not for long as i whip it with the lowryder/
now all the police trying to change me into a slowwer ryder/

[Evoligion]

I keep it gully, all clean interior, with the white leather seats,
Flick 'em , and have it dropped so low, sparks light up the street !

Raised from the hood ... chevys and rock, you know it'll spawn crooks,
Fuckin hit the switches again to 'Throw It Up' like singing Lil Jon hooks..

Gotta have the twenty two inch daytons, so i'm out to find the ones ,
and have shining light riquoshade off my spokes and straight blind the sun !

Hoes hangin on my ride, gotta have 'em thick, so I like them wit a lil wrinkle in they thighs..
The cherry red candy apple paint so fine, it'll leave a bright red twinkle in ya eyes..

Others try, but ain't causin any commotion, my shit will arrise real emotions,
See me rollin down ya block, and I throw the bitch in three wheel motion ..

Smooth as lotion , got the bitches slick and wet, but make sure the shag is clean !
pump up the volume on the fifteens, this whip is sick enough to be in lowrider magazines ..

Damn its mean, know what I mean? Lookin like Xzibit done pimped this ride,
got a fold out bar in the backseat, fully stocked and plenty of shrimp and wine !

Pull in the drive, got it on two wheels ...out on the ave, kids sweat it like they runnin track,
OH LOOK! Hes coming back, swing it side to side , like a fucking running back ..

Matter Fact,

When you see me in the street, i'm in the driver seat getting neck from broads,
and you know my whip stay bouncin ... more than big titties and check fraud ..

[The Chozen One 13]

(Chorus)X2
Police on my trail i whip it with the lowrider/
they trying to change me into a slow rider/
many attempts to stop me but they gonna fail/
trying to stop me, how they ever gonna prevail/


the shiny red candy dripping lowrider feel like pyro when i campaign/
speeding on the highway doing 90 mph make it drop on a rampage/
police are latent as i transmit as my tires hit the street as there sible/
im cognizant of 5-0 my face is blushin red now i bounce like a dribble/
i roll up the dark tinted window of the lo lo as the po po are on pursuit/
im hasting threw traphic driving temerity as i stop my mind and speculate
i analogous music warren g but im going against him i aint gonna regulate
make a keen turn of the highway with the lo lo because the 20 inch rims/
push the gas as i pass the crooked ass cops with my bummy rich tims/
they try to set a road block but i fuck with there mind as i use the hydrolic
im a fien for classic 70' lowryders and i fiend for jail so call me a diabolic/
as i open my butterfly laborginni doors i demote out and i haste through/
i dip near the corner of the store as he gets out the car in a slow pace 2/
with the police far behind me on his feet i get my ass back in the lowryder
im floating like Ali and i flow like rakim so i guess that im a flow fighter/

(Chorus)X2
Police on my trail i whip it with the lowrider/
they trying to change me into a slow rider/
many attempts to stop me but they gonna fail/
trying to stop me, how they ever gonna prevail/


strolling down treadway RD where my inebriate cousin abides/
i park near the crummy park across the street as i run inside/
i glance outside as i head inside as 5-0 spot me in a quagmire/
i sit on the tan couch and think of a plan that doesnt backfire/
as time passes by im surprised that a thought comes to mind/
no i aint going back jail and no i aint wasting any of my time/
i put thoughts synchronously if it was a plan using my sanity/
im sitting there sad as i see my red lowryder sitting the danity/
running fast to the stairs as i stop and my my cuzin on the vigil/
as i sneak easily out the door without a peep as im very civil/
i spot my car at the end of the park where it was deployed/
"go outside" i say to my cuzin to act like a regular decoy/
the plan goes as followed as the police goes to him for ?/
i dip past the police,without a peep,as he learns his lesson/
Police on my trail not for long as i whip it with the lowryder/
now all the police trying to change me into a slowwer ryder/

mines is called a day with the lowrider

upping for votes

[GTech]

On Topic: TIE
Depth: TIE
Imagery: TIE
Originality: TIE
Flow: TIE
Multis: Evolgion
Enjoyment: Evolgion
Vocab: Chozen

vote: Evolgion... Evolgion culda took this even more if a better topic was chosen... Cuz i know this aint Evolgion's style.

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[The Chozen One 13]

On Topic: TIE
Depth: TIE
Imagery: TIE
Originality: TIE
Flow: TIE
Multis: Evolgion
Enjoyment: Evolgion
Vocab: Chozen

vote: Evolgion... Evolgion culda took this even more if a better topic was chosen... Cuz i know this aint Evolgion's style.

mines was way more depth than his wtf that should be a tie vote
i had 2 verses and a chorus

[The Chozen One 13]

On Topic: TIE
Depth: TIE
Imagery: TIE
Originality: TIE
Flow: TIE
Multis: Evolgion
Enjoyment: Evolgion
Vocab: Chozen

vote: Evolgion... Evolgion culda took this even more if a better topic was chosen... Cuz i know this aint Evolgion's style.

mines was way more depth than his wtf that should be a tie vote
i had 2 verses and a chorus

it's w.e though

[Xclusive!]

On Topic: TIE
Depth: ehh... i guess E
Imagery: E
Originality: E
Flow: Chozen
Multis: E...
Enjoyment: E
Vocab: E

Overall Vote: Evoligion

Kinda weak.. like G said better topic would have made it easier but..

[The Chozen One 13]

Depth: ehh... i guess E

r u kidding me do u know what depth is[/img][/code]

[Evoligion]

Chill out Chosen.


2-0 me.

[Dex Aspen]

....uppin for votes


-{A}-:out

[Dex Aspen]

....uppin for Vet votes.MW playoff.


-{A}-:out

[Quixotic]

Topic: both
Depth: Ev
Imagery: both
Originality: both
Flow: both
Multis: Ev
Enjoyment: Ev
Vocab: Chozen
Vote: Evoligion