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Dex Aspen
02-20-2007, 09:54 AM
TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.




Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: George W. Bush and Tony Blair


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

LYRICS
02-20-2007, 10:17 AM
check :D

ARMADA
02-20-2007, 04:45 PM
CHECK!

im thinkin 20-25 lines, what you thinkin,

LYRICS
02-21-2007, 12:30 AM
ok sure ill have them up soon as possible

LYRICS
02-22-2007, 11:41 AM
ok ive finished my bars just want to drop them round the same time as you

ARMADA
02-22-2007, 08:39 PM
^^cool...mines done, when you wanna drop...

LYRICS
02-23-2007, 12:19 AM
*Edit* *DO NOT VOTE ON THIS POST,SCROLL DOWN FOR CORRECT POST*


cool ill drop now
Both with grey hair and cheesy smiles, bush as dumb as napolean dynamite /
Bomb the wrong troops and loves war, him tryna spell is like watchin spongebob tryna fight /
blair just follows trends, scared of stopping the use of guns, just gives chavs free money /
always helps bush out, desperate to get labour out of debt money to him is sweet bee honey /
Both out there for exposure, they lie too much about important things like the newspaper /
don’t listen to us they just ignore, Stupid shits think no other view is greater No views greater /
They probably both had there elections rigged, people exploded in fury like mine fields /
Like thiefs they steal from our wallets, No peace to come no firing line deals /
Blair making me pay tax, keep the closest eyes on us like were just an examination /
leaves us with doubt, confident nothing will happen in war too much of an high Expectation /
Bush so boring in speeches put a kid to sleep, natural disaster dosnt dare to go near /
New Orleans still lying in a wreck, letting people lose family members who are so dear /
But together they act like nothings wrong, they have the intellect of joey and chandler /
look like monkeys ruining countries, probably throw fits behind scenes like adam sandler /
Leaving the world in turmoil, blame it all on terrorists and bein childish like celebrities /
On there yachts while soldiers are dying senselessly, Going to war for the wrong priorities /
pain they bring to peoples faces they just cant see, go around blind as a bat /
Soak up raise on holiday, soldiers at war dead lost at sea like there as respected as much as a hat /
They bring the reasons for every countries deterioration, blow things up like a birthday celebration /
payin blair to help him out leads to destruction, all this don’t even deserve to be on probation /
What can we do there reign of terror is gonna last, even after there gone like the holocaust /
Blair in number 10 bush in the white house, Through there mind and feeling no Sorrow past /
Both us and uk are split up into sections, lower middle and high class leavin me in lower /
they cant cope, Everyone knows how bad there running the countries even when were sober /
Fuck the elections they wont work, just look at how stupid they are they give us no positivity /
Everythings how they want it if its different they don’t like, They gave every country no originality /
may leave us in pain, But positive there reign will soon be over the candle is almost at its end /
Theres one thing that im worried about , When they leave who will start this mend /
But surely they cant be worse than this pair, stupid sweaty pricks that ruin there nations /
Blair in debt and bush wasting money, Everything they left are left into depreciation /
They say the youth is the future, but they don’t want us to take control /
2012 Olympics is all that blair did, They say there helping like the faking saying there on patrol /
Bush is so stupid he put eminem on the terrorist list, he is no good at analysis /
They think how to make more money, charge us to much for everything call the bailiffs /
Here are some more things, I might not care but others do that they destroy the environment /
Smoke clouds in the air choking the earth, They cant see anything wrong its all transparent /
Death is near them I can feel it, When they die I hope they don’t rest in peace /
Maybe another assassination I don’t know, when they die well have the best ever feast /
When I think of good things cant think of any, They just made a dumb ass education system /
feel like can blame them for the weather, there rules and regulations gives me calculation symptom /
it seems like we were used by them as experiments, and we was made to look like a fool /
Money invested in the wrong things, Fund raises wouldn’t even let me have a mic at school /
There wives act like wags just spend money, war for oil and wad’s without proof its actually there /
No peace just destroyin peoples homes, Why do we bother telling them do they actually care /
Look at them see the darkness in there eyes, evil laughter and no remorse /
New hope from there extermination, Need to get pass this need to recourse /
know there wrong but wont admit, Bush and blair need to learn to be more open minded /
there ideas were no were near perfection, Cant see the pain on the streets must be blinded /
dream of a decision not with war declared, No fresh new campaigns like they’ve died of exhaustion /
Have they left us in immoral depression, Ill do anything to kill them no matter of proportion /


*EDIT* *DO NOT VOTE ON THIS POST,SCROLL DOWN FOR CORRECT POST*

LYRICS
02-23-2007, 12:28 AM
crap i just realised that he said 20-25 lines and i did 25 bars :shock:

LYRICS
02-23-2007, 12:40 AM
ok i got rid of some lines but cant edit over the last post so forget that one

cool ill drop now
Both with grey hair and cheesy smiles, bush as dumb as napolean dynamite /
Bomb the wrong troops and loves war, him tryna spell is like watchin spongebob tryna fight /
blair just follows trends, scared of stopping the use of guns, just gives chavs free money /
always helps bush out, desperate to get labour out of debt money to him is sweet bee honey /
Both out there for exposure, they lie too much about important things like the newspaper /
don’t listen to us they just ignore, Stupid shits think no other view is greater No views greater /
Blair making me pay tax, keep the closest eyes on us like were just an examination /
leaves us with doubt, confident nothing will happen in war too much of an high Expectation /
Leaving the world in turmoil, blame it all on terrorists and bein childish like celebrities /
On there yachts while soldiers are dying senselessly, Going to war for the wrong priorities /
They bring the reasons for every countries deterioration, blow things up like a birthday celebration /
payin blair to help him out leads to destruction, all this don’t even deserve to be on probation /
What can we do there reign of terror is gonna last, even after there gone like the holocaust /
Blair in number 10 bush in the white house, Through there mind and feeling no Sorrow past /
Fuck the elections they wont work, just look at how stupid they are they give us no positivity /
Everythings how they want it if its different they don’t like, They gave every country no originality /
Bush is so stupid he put eminem on the terrorist list, he is no good at analysis /
They think how to make more money, charge us to much for everything call the bailiffs /
Here are some more things, I might not care but others do that they destroy the environment /
Smoke clouds in the air choking the earth, They cant see anything wrong its all transparent /
Look at them see the darkness in there eyes, evil laughter and no remorse /
New hope from there extermination, Need to get pass this need to recourse /
know there wrong but wont admit, Bush and blair need to learn to be more open minded /
there ideas were no were near perfection, Cant see the pain on the streets must be blinded /
dream of a decision not with war declared, No fresh new campaigns like they’ve died of exhaustion /
Have they left us in immoral depression, Ill do anything to kill them no matter of proportion /

ARMADA
02-23-2007, 12:49 AM
...BUSH "N" BLARE...


blare (blâr).
v., blared, blar·ing, blares.
v.intr.
To sound loudly and stridently: a stereo blaring in the next apartment.
1.To cause to sound loudly and stridently: Don't blare the stereo.
2.To proclaim loudly and flamboyantly: headlines blaring the scandal
1.A loud, strident noise.
2.Flamboyance.
http://www.answers.com/blare

BLAIR...
blare of confidence asunder gale voices reign the floor
caverns fall an echo rumbles pale faces strain applause
Mr speaker calls for silence violence permeates the air
As the base of wars incursion sits upon serrated chairs
sedated peers an accusation, calls of calm Borated fear
mass hysteria infectious scripted text who sane in here
noose appears anticipation verdict hanging by a thread
blaring headlines validation as the war comes to a head
death collateral sensation mass destruction letters bled
set precedence intent and some things better left unsaid
impair a different drum beat, with no evidence of threat
reckless secular rebellion crooked smile on broken sets
no reception from the public so instead he calls a friend

BUSH...
at the root the core is rotten venom seeds are sown thick
slither wordsmiths antiquated as the truth begins to hiss
tongue is twisted inundated sermon preacher anarchist
spinning medical professions askin bush to take the piss
make a wish a bid for freedom local push a cracker whip
losin traction weight of burden seems to slipin oil slicks
in con senses see intensions playin Texas holdem quick
a joker list is paid in blood and met a sin to counter fits
as rubber checks in billions instilling crude abortionists
an orphanage of innocence in prison eager elect tricks
the house of power moves corrected now its better late
then never left to simmer as a women cleans his plate
as this tiger is left toothless……… in a vegetated state

bush1 (bush)
n.
1.A low shrub with many branches.
2.A thick growth of shrubs; a thicket.
3.a.Land covered with dense vegetation or undergrowth.
b.Land remote from settlement: the Australian bush.
4.a.A shaggy mass, as of hair.
b.Vulgar Slang. A growth of pubic hair.
http://www.answers.com/topic/bush

ARMADA
02-25-2007, 07:42 PM
ready for votes

GTech
02-25-2007, 07:56 PM
On Topic: TIE
Depth: Armada
Imagery: Armada
Originality: Armada
Flow: Armada (more consistant... LYRICS was horrible in the begining, but after that it was better.. But Armada's flow throughout the whole drop was clean for me..)
Multis: Armada
Enjoyment: Armada
Vocab: Armada

O/a vote: Armada..dam nice verse Armada, shit was dope

Dex Aspen
02-25-2007, 11:55 PM
....uppin for votes


-{A}-:out

ARMADA
02-27-2007, 06:29 PM
Raised [0-1]

ARMADA
03-01-2007, 02:57 AM
to the top

[King_Mc]
03-01-2007, 05:10 AM
On Topic: TIE
Depth: A
Imagery: A
Originality: A
Flow: A
Multis: A
Enjoyment: A
Vocab: A

OVERALL---> ARMADA

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DiMe™
03-02-2007, 07:20 PM
Nice Verses From Both....

On Topic - TIE
Depth - Armada
Flow - Armada
Multies - Armada
Imagery - Armada
Originality - TIE
Vocabulary - Armada
Enjoyment - TIE

Overall Vote = Armada


Nice Shit Man....


Guess Thats The K.O

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