Week 4 Topical: Yung Money (0-1) - Artik Phrost (2-1)

[Dex Aspen]

TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.




Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: Jackie Robinson (first professional black baseball player)


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Artik Phrost]

.....you really expect us to research this dude?

i guess...

check

[~Yung_Money~]

check....wats good artik dis gon be a good battle

[~Yung_Money~]

hey i wanted to know if i could get a 2 day extension, because mah brother is in da hospital, and im probably not gon be online all weekend, so i wont be able to post mah verse up until monday or tuesday, i started some of it yesterday when i had some time, but den i had to leave, if i get any time throughout da weekend i can piece it together, but i dont know theirs nothing i can really do

if not i guess artik can take da win or i can post da 2 bars i got finished

i figured y'all wouldnt mind dough seeing as drops are always late every week anyway, and me and artik are cool

[Dex Aspen]

i figured y'all wouldnt mind dough seeing as drops are always late every week anyway, and me and artik are cool


...not any more.


you made your check yo,now you have all day Friday...all day Saturday...and all day Sunday until 11:59 pm.No extension because you have plenty to get it finished dude.Come on Money....you could phone this shit in tonight...it might not be a winner but at least it's in.Your other option is to PM me that you want to sign out.It will count as a loss to you and a win for your opponent but at least its not a no-show.Let me know yo.



-{A}-:out

[~Yung_Money~]

aight i got bout 40 min. til im done at work, den i gotta go to da hospital, so ill see wat i can get done

[~Yung_Money~]

quick 3 bars, didnt have any time to do dis, so i typed it quickly
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dis is written as if i were Jack Roosevelt "Jackie" Robinson the first major league black baseball player


i grip mah wood~weapon swing above~da~plate eager like i was deli~ca~tessen/eager to eat
da first hood~reppin equiped glove~n'~gate(1) rejoiced like gospel music i was givin~a~blessin/

i crusaded fo civil~rights, to relinquish mah people from da depth of pain~and~anguish/
through crowds swivel~grites(2) fo' racism extinguish similiar to Martin Luthern King's refrainful~statement/

caught in da crowd youngest~of~all~5, georgia~bred~soulja, fightin~to~stay~alive/
screamin through night loud, lungin~to~survive, forge~a~tread~dojer, writin~fo~dey~revive/



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1-total admission receipts at a sports event
2-clench together

[~Yung_Money~]

didnt want a no show, but im outta of da league after dis, at least for now

[Artik Phrost]

something quick...

I told young i'll Match given his situation...


We Get The Score Gain Cuz 'Robbin, Son' Is More Than A Ghetto's Chore Name../ Now Blacks Travels The Expressway, Seeing How He Paved The Four Lanes..

Metaphorical In A Senese.. Athletics Indeed, Is His Claim To Fame.. / 'Breaking The Color Barrier'..Back Then, Even TVs Couldnt See It In 'The Frame By Frame'..


I see Why Baseball Is His Medium.. He's Literally Been Through The Trenches.. / So Its Like Everytime He Hits The Ball.. He's Throwing Back The Attempted Stitches..


b1: he played baseball, baskest ball, track, footfall.. got 4 letters
b3: he was in the army

[Dex Aspen]

....uppin for votes


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[~Yung_Money~]

glad to see you showed artik, and thanx for da matching, it evens it out more, much appreciated

so lets get these votes poppin

[~Yung_Money~]

uppin votes

[Dex Aspen]

...uppin this for Vet votes.Spare a minute on this.



-{A}-:out

[~Yung_Money~]

uppin votes

[GTech]

Young's Verse

i grip mah wood~weapon swing above~da~plate eager like i was deli~ca~tessen/eager to eat
da first hood~reppin equiped glove~n'~gate(1) rejoiced like gospel music i was givin~a~blessin/

Nice opener, I liked how u described the baseball bat. I don’t like lines that are simplistic and straight to the point. A bit of imagery in there too.

i crusaded fo civil~rights, to relinquish mah people from da depth of pain~and~anguish/
through crowds swivel~grites(2) fo' racism extinguish similiar to Martin Luthern King's refrainful~statement/

Nice vocab on this, flow was nice too.

Caught in da crowd youngest~of~all~5, georgia~bred~soulja, fightin~to~stay~alive/
screamin through night loud, lungin~to~survive, forge~a~tread~dojer, writin~fo~dey~revive/

Not bad of multis. Nice flow to it, but not feelin it as a closer. Coulda been better

Artik

We Get The Score Gain Cuz 'Robbin, Son' Is More Than A Ghetto's Chore Name../ Now Blacks Travels The Expressway, Seeing How He Paved The Four Lanes…

Simple use of words, but decent opener… Nice wordplay

Metaphorical In A Senese.. Athletics Indeed, Is His Claim To Fame.. / 'Breaking The Color Barrier'..Back Then, Even TVs Couldnt See It In 'The Frame By Frame'...

Nice bar. Nothing to really hate on this one.

I see Why Baseball Is His Medium.. He's Literally Been Through The trench.. / So Its Like Everytime He Hits The Ball.. He's Throwing Back The Attempted Stitches..

Bettter closer than Young’s, ended it nicely. Nice shit

CATS

On Topic: TIE
Depth: TIE
Imagery: TIE (kept switching to either young or ARtik, couldnt' decide)
Originality: TIE
Flow: TIE
Multis: Artik (saw some from Young, but Artik was cleaner and more consistant)
Enjoyment: TIE
Vocab: Young_Money

Overall Vote: Artik Phrost. I liked her lines, it edged the enjoyment by a bit. Cuz she some what had a lil punches in them. Hard battle to judge.

[[King_Mc]]

On Topic: A
Depth: A
Imagery: A
Originality: Y
Flow: A
Multis: Y
Enjoyment: A
Vocab: TIE

Overall Vote: Artik

2-0

[~Yung_Money~]

aight 2-0 artik uppin, i would like everybody to look real close to the verses dough, cuz dis is a close battle

[Cage]

Yung -
i grip mah wood~weapon swing above~da~plate eager like i was deli~ca~tessen/eager to eat
da first hood~reppin equiped glove~n'~gate(1) rejoiced like gospel music i was givin~a~blessin/

^^ Dope opener, had everything in it... decent imagery

i crusaded fo civil~rights, to relinquish mah people from da depth of pain~and~anguish/
through crowds swivel~grites(2) fo' racism extinguish similiar to Martin Luthern King's refrainful~statement/

^^ Vocab was there, liked the martin luther king line, dope multiez too

Caught in da crowd youngest~of~all~5, georgia~bred~soulja, fightin~to~stay~alive/
screamin through night loud, lungin~to~survive, forge~a~tread~dojer, writin~fo~dey~revive/

^^ Pretty nice ending

Artik -
We Get The Score Gain Cuz 'Robbin, Son' Is More Than A Ghetto's Chore Name../ Now Blacks Travels The Expressway, Seeing How He Paved The Four Lanes…

^^ not a bad opener... decent wordplay, not much imagery but still pretty nice

Metaphorical In A Senese.. Athletics Indeed, Is His Claim To Fame.. / 'Breaking The Color Barrier'..Back Then, Even TVs Couldnt See It In 'The Frame By Frame'...

^^ Pretty dope - had everything in it

I see Why Baseball Is His Medium.. He's Literally Been Through The trench.. / So Its Like Everytime He Hits The Ball.. He's Throwing Back The Attempted Stitches..

^^ Decent ending... nice word usage...

On Topic: Both stayed on topic, give thiz a tie
Depth: Hmmm... Both had some pretty deep lines, gotta say thiz is a Tie also
Imagery: Yung... both had some decent imagery, coulda been better but... Yung took it in my opinion, more complex shit, the luther king line was ill shit son.
Originality: Both had some original ass lines, only fair to give this a Tie
Flow: God damn, hmmmm - i was gettin a bit lost in both verses, but once i re-read they flowed nicely... Tie
Multis: Yung... He had sometimes 3 diff sets of multies at a time in one bar... both came pretty decent here but Yung took it
Enjoyment: Tie, i mean i DID enjoy both of them - but id still rather read a battle verse than a topical... BUT i enjoyed them both the same
Vocab: Yung - Hands down took this category - Got quite a head on your shoulderz, pretty damn smart... Good word usage, couldnt have chosen better vocab
O/A - Yung, he just hadda more complex verse, i mean i was feelin both but, I just cant kick yungs style... feelin' it to the fullest, Artik y' shit was fresh too...

[da.south]

Yung -
i grip mah wood~weapon swing above~da~plate eager like i was deli~ca~tessen/eager to eat
da first hood~reppin equiped glove~n'~gate(1) rejoiced like gospel music i was givin~a~blessin/

^^ Dope opener, had everything in it... decent imagery

i crusaded fo civil~rights, to relinquish mah people from da depth of pain~and~anguish/
through crowds swivel~grites(2) fo' racism extinguish similiar to Martin Luthern King's refrainful~statement/

^^ Vocab was there, liked the martin luther king line, dope multiez too

Caught in da crowd youngest~of~all~5, georgia~bred~soulja, fightin~to~stay~alive/
screamin through night loud, lungin~to~survive, forge~a~tread~dojer, writin~fo~dey~revive/

^^ Pretty nice ending

Artik -
We Get The Score Gain Cuz 'Robbin, Son' Is More Than A Ghetto's Chore Name../ Now Blacks Travels The Expressway, Seeing How He Paved The Four Lanes…

^^ not a bad opener... decent wordplay, not much imagery but still pretty nice

Metaphorical In A Senese.. Athletics Indeed, Is His Claim To Fame.. / 'Breaking The Color Barrier'..Back Then, Even TVs Couldnt See It In 'The Frame By Frame'...

^^ Pretty dope - had everything in it

I see Why Baseball Is His Medium.. He's Literally Been Through The trench.. / So Its Like Everytime He Hits The Ball.. He's Throwing Back The Attempted Stitches..

^^ Decent ending... nice word usage...

On Topic: Both stayed on topic, give thiz a tie
Depth: Hmmm... Both had some pretty deep lines, gotta say thiz is a Tie also
Imagery: Yung... both had some decent imagery, coulda been better but... Yung took it in my opinion, more complex shit, the luther king line was ill shit son.
Originality: Both had some original ass lines, only fair to give this a Tie
Flow: God damn, hmmmm - i was gettin a bit lost in both verses, but once i re-read they flowed nicely... Tie
Multis: Yung... He had sometimes 3 diff sets of multies at a time in one bar... both came pretty decent here but Yung took it
Enjoyment: Tie, i mean i DID enjoy both of them - but id still rather read a battle verse than a topical... BUT i enjoyed them both the same
Vocab: Yung - Hands down took this category - Got quite a head on your shoulderz, pretty damn smart... Good word usage, couldnt have chosen better vocab
O/A - Yung, he just hadda more complex verse, i mean i was feelin both but, I just cant kick yungs style... feelin' it to the fullest, Artik y' shit was fresh too...
This isnt a co-sign vote it would be ridiculous for me to type the sign ish cuz i feel the same way :wink:
OVR=Young

[~Yung_Money~]

dont know if south's vote counts cuz he didnt explain

2-2 uppin

[Dex Aspen]

da.south's vote does not count.




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[~Yung_Money~]

aight 2-1 uppin

[DiMe™]

Pritty Nice,
Shame About the length of them though cause neither really got to tell a story....

On Topic - TIE
Depth - TIE
Imagery - Artik [Not alot from either but he took this, Just]
Flow - TIE [Both were good here]
Multies - Young [I think you tried a lil too hard on this though]
Originality - TIE
Vocabulary - TIE
Enjoyment - Artik

Overall Vote = Artik Phrost

Artik = 2 Cats
Young = 1 Cat

The rest of the cats were tie'd

real close battle,

3-1

[~Yung_Money~]

aight koo
3-1 artik

uppin for votes

[DiLLi R]

On Topic: TIE
Depth: TIE
Imagery: Yung
Originality: Yung
Flow: Yung
Multis: Yung
Enjoyment: Yung
Vocab: Yung

no hate to Artik though, because he did have some good rhymes in there.

Overall Vote: Yung_Money

p3ac3

[da.south]

On Topic: Tie
Imagery: Yung
Originality: Tie
Multis: Artik
Enjoyment: Tie
Vocab: Yung

OVR =Yung

[~Yung_Money~]

aight 3-3 uppin

and for y'all artik, is a girl

lol

[lil R@#$YHME yo]

aight yo its a rap niggas watch this

yo ching chong chinese ppl r wack

NIGGA

[~Yung_Money~]

get da fuck outta of our thread, dis is a league battle, and i aint chinese

[Xclusive!]

On Topic: Both.. but Artik more
Depth: Artik, better consistency in vocab and went farther into ir
Imagery: Artik, just used more imagery and i could actually picture as i was reading
Originality: Young, just a verse i hadn't seen anything like it in a while
Flow: Young, his flowed better and was easier to read
Multis: TIE
Enjoyment: Artik
Vocab: Artik, again she just had more vocab and more imagery which contributed to it

Overall Vote: Artik Phrost

nice battle, liked both verse artik just went depper into it and had more vocab

[GTech]

4-3... Let's end this week already :(
ANd vote up in my battle with Antic!

[Nemesis14]

On Topic: G-tech
Depth: G-tech
Imagery: Artik
Originality: G-tech
Flow: Artik
Multis: Artik
Enjoyment: G-tech
Vocab: G-tech

O/A G-tech

[Dex Aspen]

On Topic: G-tech
Depth: G-tech
Imagery: Artik
Originality: G-tech
Flow: Artik
Multis: Artik
Enjoyment: G-tech
Vocab: G-tech

O/A G-tech



...yeah...this vote is not gonna count for obvious reasons.Try again Nemesis.This thread is Yung Money vs. Artik Phrost.Make sure you read the verses first before you vote huh?

lol



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[Nemesis14]

shit man im dumb i though this was techs battle lmao, but yo all the tech are spose to be money so

O/A money sorry for that people

thx armada

[Grifta]

On Topic: Artik
Depth: Artik
Imagery: Tie
Originality: Artik
Flow: Tie
Multis: Yung
Enjoyment: Artik
Vocab: Artik

Overall: Artik

alright battle, good verse from artik..

5-4 artik wins. close this and get the next week going.

[~Yung_Money~]

aight 4-5 is dis battle over yet?