WEEK 4 TEXT: DiMe(1-1) Vs ARMADA(1-0)

[Shoalin]

Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Decided by Battlers


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[DiMe™]

-ChecK-

3 Bars Is Pritty Much All I Got Time For These Days Dude....

[ARMADA]

^^its good....CHECK!

[ARMADA]

ight...


Blood Up Fools....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
im stompin this-bitch-coughin, wit blood on his-lips-frothin, im "dropping-a-dime-quicker" than poverty-coke-sniffers
like goin for-broke-bitches " he struggles to-cope-figures " I rip-and-dispose-digits like cellular-phone-message
[ fingers and numbers as in Dime ]

defected his-heart-sicker, than solidiers insane-tickers, implode and his-brain-shifted like skeleton grave-diggers
get buhried in drain-systems "his terminal veins-slitted" like trainin him-pain-fitted, and left his remains-splitted
[ train in ]

D sell a rate slow-shifter, sent Fifty to blow-bigger "try making a name hittem" and dropem like Game spittin
on Holla day cross bitches"i slay him like-Snows-midgets"... I mean what the fucks a Dime bitch! when I left you wit-no-senses
[ decelerate...his sig>Game always drops names …holiday X-miss…7dwarfs think ]



...ARMADA...

[Shoalin]

im goin to destroy who ever locked these early.

DIMES VERSE

Come with played shit, kid get ya Own-Sound, kids are just bored by this Known-Clown
So he drop and only get a “Boo An Z” like people were dissin his Home-Town
[Boo N.Z, New Zealand, thats where he from]

I’ll have armada Bruised-An-Battered, leave him outlined in red like his avvy after his blood Oozed-And-Splattered
I saw this match and was Amused-And-Flattered, cause Shoa knew my punches’ll have this dumb shits head Confused-Then-Shattered


Claim to spit fire? Nah your Style-Blows, it’s all wack multi’s with no punches and mild-flows
So I’ll have these bars “Expose Young A” and I aint talking bout removing child-clothes

[ARMADA]

raised

[XREAPERX]

haha. shiit. nice battle.

Punches: DiMe - Easy. much Harder
Personals: ARMADA there was just more of them from ARMADA
Multies: DiMe
Metas: DiMe
Flow: ARMADA becauze of the constant rhyming
Wordplay: ARMADA
Creativity: ARMADA
Nameplay: TIE
Complexity: hmmm ARMADA
Consistency: DiMe, Armada went off becauze there was so much rhyming yu had to think of new shit.
Vocab: DiMe
Enjoyment: DiMe

A/O - DiMe...much more enjoyable, very close battle tho

[DiMe™]

Thanks For Voting.....

1-0


Uppin

[~Yung_Money~]

Punches: dime
Personals: dime
Multies: armada
Metas: dime
Flow: armada
Wordplay: armada
Creativity: dime
Nameplay: armada
Complexity: dime
Consistency: dime
Vocab: dime
Enjoyment: dime

overall: dime

close battle, both came wit ill verses no doubt


peep mine and artik's topical battle, we need votes

[[King_Mc]]

Punches: D
Personals: A
Multies: TIE
Metas: D
Flow: D
Wordplay: A
Creativity: TIE
Nameplay: A
Complexity: A
Consistency: D
Vocab: D
Enjoyment: D

overall: was gonna say a tie but DIME just took it

3-0 KO

[Gopha]

Armada:

im stompin this-bitch-coughin, wit blood on his-lips-frothin, im "dropping-a-dime-quicker" than poverty-coke-sniffers
like goin for-broke-bitches " he struggles to-cope-figures " I rip-and-dispose-digits like cellular-phone-message
[ fingers and numbers as in Dime ]
^^^flow wuz nice, but tha punch wasnt too hard tho...

defected his-heart-sicker, than solidiers insane-tickers, implode and his-brain-shifted like skeleton grave-diggers
get buhried in drain-systems "his terminal veins-slitted" like trainin him-pain-fitted, and left his remains-splitted
[ train in ]
^^^again multiez flow all workin, but tha punch wuz lackin...

D sell a rate slow-shifter, sent Fifty to blow-bigger "try making a name hittem" and dropem like Game spittin
on Holla day cross bitches"i slay him like-Snows-midgets"... I mean what the fucks a Dime bitch! when I left you wit-no-senses
^^^eh ok... sense/centz kinda played tho...

overall: flow and multiez were good, focus a lil more on wordplay and punchez tho are youll be there in no time....

dime:

Come with played shit, kid get ya Own-Sound, kids are just bored by this Known-Clown
So he drop and only get a “Boo An Z” like people were dissin his Home-Town
[Boo N.Z, New Zealand, thats where he from]
^^^str8 nameplay...

I’ll have armada Bruised-An-Battered, leave him outlined in red like his avvy after his blood Oozed-And-Splattered
I saw this match and was Amused-And-Flattered, cause Shoa knew my punches’ll have this dumb shits head Confused-Then-Shattered
^^^sorta felt like filler...

Claim to spit fire? Nah your Style-Blows, it’s all wack multi’s with no punches and mild-flows
So I’ll have these bars “Expose Young A” and I aint talking bout removing child-clothes
^^^again pretty good nameplay...

overall: pretty good, relied a little on nameplayz but did what was needed to get tha job done.... coulda thrown in a lil more in tha second bar too.. lookz like youve got most of ya shit down tho homie....

much respect

vote: dime

i know this is over already, but i figured id drop some feed... *shrugz*...

-payce

[DiMe™]

Yeh the bar by bar breakdown is much aprecciatted Gopha....


4-0....


Mods Close This Please....


Nice Drop Armada