WEEK 4 TEXT: Gopha (2-0) Vs Anesthetic (2-0) *HW title Shot*

[Shoalin]

Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Decided by Battlers


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

PS: This is the weeks premier battle, make it hot.

[Anesthetic]

8) ....5 good with you?

[Gopha]

5'z striaght...

yall shoulda saved this for a title match up or suttin, owellz *shrugz*, letz give em one to remember annie..

cheggi-chekk

[Shoalin]

THIS IS THE FIRST TITLE DECIDER
HEAVY WEIGHT TITLE HAS NOW BEGUN BEING THROWN UP.

The Winner of this can officialy become the Heavywieght champion.

[Anesthetic]

Finally...

CheKK!!
'Barrierz Cover Ya Smelly Shit' Like 'A Florists Door' So I'll '{Push G And Not Go Down}' Like 'Elevatorz Ignorin The Ground Floor'
Ya Style's-Poor, Cuz All We See Is A 'Lottery Peeting Lines' Like 'Randomly Decomposing Plantz On The Forest Floor'
{Lottery Peeting Lines/Lotta Repeating Lines}

You're A Has-Been, Bitch Name Ya Last-Win, You Just 'Repeat Simple Phrases' Like 'The Crowd On Jerry Springer'
I'll Ring-Ya, Sting-Ya, Plunging ''Blade's Inn Hymn' Like 'Vampires Being Motel Lounge Singers'
{Blades In Him/Blades Inn Hymn}
{Blade, The Vampire}

Got Head-Shots, That'll Leave Ya On Dead-Cots, Or Since You From 'Boston' Slice Up Ya Anklez, N Leave You With 'Red Sox'
As far as 'Barz', I Got 'Fed Stockz'... You 'Bound To Lose' Cuz For A While 'Geode Mia Loss' Like 'Soccer Playerz Losing Pet Rockz'
{Geode Mia Lost/G Owed Me A Loss}
{Mia = Mia Hamm}

Bitch, You're Weak! Cuz We Only 'Feel G Force' When We On 'Roller Coaster Ridez' Witcha 'Part Time Punchez' Like A 'Boxer On Hire'
So Call-Me-Sire, Like 'Old Rodentz' 'Gopha...Just Retire...'
Cuz My 'Brash' Style Will Surely Leave This Battle And This {Impolite} Like 'Setting Dwarves On Fire'!!!!
{Impolite/Imp-Alight}

I 'Do Away With Barz' Like 'Shutting Down Chocolate Factoriez' N 'Bag Smelly Shit' Like 'Teenage Boyz Gym Lockerz'
I'll 'Perform Dialysis' N 'Put The Pump To Ya Kidney' And 'Crack..?Yep, Elvis..' Like 'Telling Which Drugs Were Done By Famous Rockerz'!!!
{Crack?Yep...Elvis/Cracy Ya Pelvis}

[Gopha]

i'll CONCLUDE-THIS-PUNK-EMCEE, he always wanted to battle me...
...but YOU-CANT-FUCK-WITH-G!
so now it seemz ya 'DREAM-WORKS AGAINST YOU' like 'COMPETING AGAINST MOVIE-COMPANIES'

and itz juss startin....

leave em SICK-WITH-HESITATION, let mah FISTz-HIT-NECK-N-BREAK-HIM
so when i'm done Annie will be 'SEEING A BLACK-OUT' like he was ASSISTING-SEGREGATION
STYLE'z-BASIC like UNDERAGE DRINKING ill leave this CHILD-WASTED, predicted him? you LIED-FACE-IT
cuz when it comez to ya verse, 'EVERYONE'z GONNA WATCH ME TRUMP-IT' like 'FUCKIN MILES-DAVIS'
(trumpet)
you FORCE WORDPLAY in the WORST WAY! so against me hes gonna have FUCKIN-PROBLEM-SPITTIN
this HERB'S GAY, so sorry Annie, but we 'WONT SEE YOU PRE-VEIL' like 'MUSLIM-LAWS-FOR-WOMEN'
(prevail)

lez get a lil more personal....

NyVillian:

During Varing A lot Of Shit!, But Put Up Agiasnt Me? Imma Send‘Utu (You To); Your Death’ Like A Fuccin ‘Sumarian Apocalypse’!!!!!//12

Anesthetic:

I'll Be Like Who're '{Utu Tell Me}' Like 'We Spoke African Dialectz'!!!

Kaos

derived from a seed of eloquence . . my style develops words into the sheer form of elegance
without hesitance . . we'll see what ya really made of -
when I "Break Down Ya Calm Position (composition)" faster than "Yoga Instructors" separating the "Molecules Of An Element"

Anesthetic:

Your Verse "Stinkz On The Whole/Hole" Like A Vaginal Infestation So Without-Hesitation,
I'll Shatter "Obnoxious Calm-Positions/Composition" Like "Breaking A Rude Monk's Meditation!"

WACK ON TEXT so he JACKz CONCEPTZ and BORROWS FROM PEERz-TO-FLOW
ITZ CLEAR-YOU-BLOW!
cuz Annie has to 'USE KAOS AND VILLIAN TO WRITE' like 'SCRIPTING FOR SUPER HERO-SHOWS'

woooahhhhh

:eating:

[Gopha]

oh and does bar-by-bar breakdown votez from established vetz only sound good to you anny?

dope shit btw, good luck im glad we finally got to throw down :wink:

[Dex Aspen]

....uppin for votes


-{A}-:out

[SiiNiDE]

You fucks better appreciate this, took me half an hour lol.




'Barrierz Cover Ya Smelly Shit' Like 'A Florists Door' So I'll '{Push G And Not Go Down}' Like 'Elevatorz Ignorin The Ground Floor'
Ya Style's-Poor, Cuz All We See Is A 'Lottery Peeting Lines' Like 'Randomly Decomposing Plantz On The Forest Floor'
{Lottery Peeting Lines/Lotta Repeating Lines}
Clean wordplay, nice personal. (I've noticed alot of vets saying the same things now-a-days). Coulda been a stronger opener, but it was clean and cut.

You're A Has-Been, Bitch Name Ya Last-Win, You Just 'Repeat Simple Phrases' Like 'The Crowd On Jerry Springer'
I'll Ring-Ya, Sting-Ya, Plunging ''Blade's Inn Hymn' Like 'Vampires Being Motel Lounge Singers'
{Blades In Him/Blades Inn Hymn}
{Blade, The Vampire}
This is total filler, lol. C'mon annie, there's not even structure in that. The wordplay was ok but simple.

Got Head-Shots, That'll Leave Ya On Dead-Cots, Or Since You From 'Boston' Slice Up Ya Anklez, N Leave You With 'Red Sox'
As far as 'Barz', I Got 'Fed Stockz'... You 'Bound To Lose' Cuz For A While 'Geode Mia Loss' Like 'Soccer Playerz Losing Pet Rockz'
{Geode Mia Lost/G Owed Me A Loss}
{Mia = Mia Hamm}
Creative, but the setup bar was more of a punch than the punch itself. the geode mia wordplay was clean tho.

Bitch, You're Weak! Cuz We Only 'Feel G Force' When We On 'Roller Coaster Ridez' Witcha 'Part Time Punchez' Like A 'Boxer On Hire'
So Call-Me-Sire, Like 'Old Rodentz' 'Gopha...Just Retire...'
Cuz My 'Brash' Style Will Surely Leave This Battle And This {Impolite} Like 'Setting Dwarves On Fire'!!!!
{Impolite/Imp-Alight}
Punches/Boxers is a played concept. The punch wasn't really there either, not hard hitting. Creative, but not hard hitting. Focusing too much on wordplays.

I 'Do Away With Barz' Like 'Shutting Down Chocolate Factoriez' N 'Bag Smelly Shit' Like 'Teenage Boyz Gym Lockerz'
I'll 'Perform Dialysis' N 'Put The Pump To Ya Kidney' And 'Crack..?Yep, Elvis..' Like 'Telling Which Drugs Were Done By Famous Rockerz'!!!
{Crack?Yep...Elvis/Cracy Ya Pelvis}
Good finisher, deffinitely the most hard-hitting bar. Impeccible wordplay and creative metas. Nice punch too. Overall well-rounded bar


Gopha:
i'll CONCLUDE-THIS-PUNK-EMCEE, he always wanted to battle me...
...but YOU-CANT-FUCK-WITH-G!
so now it seemz ya 'DREAM-WORKS AGAINST YOU' like 'COMPETING AGAINST MOVIE-COMPANIES'
Conclude is used in the wrong context, thought I'd point that out :P.. Anyway..
Nice personal, I'm-NOT-A-FAN-OF-THIS-THO. Good bar, alright multies. Pretty solid opener

leave em SICK-WITH-HESITATION, let mah FISTz-HIT-NECK-N-BREAK-HIM
so when i'm done Annie will be 'SEEING A BLACK-OUT' like he was ASSISTING-SEGREGATION
Nice punch/multies/meta. Overall clean, solid bar. Very nice
STYLE'z-BASIC like UNDERAGE DRINKING ill leave this CHILD-WASTED, predicted him? you LIED-FACE-IT
cuz when it comez to ya verse, 'EVERYONE'z GONNA WATCH ME TRUMP-IT' like 'FUCKIN MILES-DAVIS'
(trumpet)
Great wordplay, Child wasted/Underage drinking I've heard tho. Nice punch, clean and to the point.
you FORCE WORDPLAY in the WORST WAY! so against me hes gonna have FUCKIN-PROBLEM-SPITTIN
this HERB'S GAY, so sorry Annie, but we 'WONT SEE YOU PRE-VEIL' like 'MUSLIM-LAWS-FOR-WOMEN'
(prevail)
the structure kind of fell off, the rhymescheme seemed all over the place. Nice wordplay, nothing too spectacular. Ok punch.
WACK ON TEXT so he JACKz CONCEPTZ and BORROWS FROM PEERz-TO-FLOW
ITZ CLEAR-YOU-BLOW!
cuz Annie has to 'USE KAOS AND VILLIAN TO WRITE' like 'SCRIPTING FOR SUPER HERO-SHOWS'
JESUS! Sick, Sick personal. The wordplay/Metas were potent. Best bar of the battle. Deff. a good finisher.
Punches: Gopha.. Annie had some, but I felt he fell off a few times
Personals: Gopha.. Last bar killed it. Tho annie had some nice ones.
Multies: Gopha.. Tho his always seem forced, he pulls em off.
Metas: Tie
Flow: Tie.. Tho annie could of edged it a bit
Wordplay: Annie
Creativity: Both were sick.
Nameplay: Annie.. Maybe I missed one, but all I saw was "Geode Mia Loss"
Complexity: Annie.. His wordplay helped in this
Consistency: Gopha, both could've come harder imo. But Go stayed consistant.
Vocab: Tie
O/A: When I read Gopha's finisher I thought he had it from there. But then I read them both a few times and things didn't seem so one-sided. Annie's was much more complex, but his punches just didn't hit as hard. Gopha was more consistant and harder punches so I gotta say Gopha.
Sick, Sick battle. Fucking clash of the titans.

[Anesthetic]

Good battle G. One-Nill.

[Ahh Swoop Pen]

Punches: Annie had more to me .. instead of filler 1st lines
Personals:Gopha ... all over him
Multies:Gopha .. clearly
Metas: Annie .. cuz he had way more per line and that last from gopha was'nt that coo compared to his other bars
Flow:Gopha
Wordplay: Gopha edged it to me made more sense both ways (anni lost it wit that crack ya pelvis line) crack? yep pelvis seemed hella forced
Creativity:Tie ... lets leave it at that
Nameplay:Annie
Complexity: Annie
Consistency:Annie .. like i said, he had more per line at alot of catagories
Vote = extremely close it was kinda hard to tell so i had to read each bar a few times ... this was a gr8 battle tho .. i'd like to see yall go at it again sometime ...

- Anethetic -

[Anesthetic]

One-One. I'm glad this battle happened.

[[Neurologik]]

'Barrierz Cover Ya Smelly Shit' Like 'A Florists Door' So I'll '{Push G And Not Go Down}' Like 'Elevatorz Ignorin The Ground Floor'
Ya Style's-Poor, Cuz All We See Is A 'Lottery Peeting Lines' Like 'Randomly Decomposing Plantz On The Forest Floor'
Wordplay was nice in this, punch well executed and gd multies, Nice opener

You're A Has-Been, Bitch Name Ya Last-Win, You Just 'Repeat Simple Phrases' Like 'The Crowd On Jerry Springer'
I'll Ring-Ya, Sting-Ya, Plunging ''Blade's Inn Hymn' Like 'Vampires Being Motel Lounge Singers'
First line was better punch, agreein wit siinide seemed like filler, ok wordplay lil forced, gd multies

Got Head-Shots, That'll Leave Ya On Dead-Cots, Or Since You From 'Boston' Slice Up Ya Anklez, N Leave You With 'Red Sox'
As far as 'Barz', I Got 'Fed Stockz'... You 'Bound To Lose' Cuz For A While 'Geode Mia Loss' Like 'Soccer Playerz Losing Pet Rockz'
Man, the red sox line was real hot man, creative as fuck, was feelin that shit, ok wordplay punch nicely done and multies still holdin up well

Bitch, You're Weak! Cuz We Only 'Feel G Force' When We On 'Roller Coaster Ridez' Witcha 'Part Time Punchez' Like A 'Boxer On Hire'
So Call-Me-Sire, Like 'Old Rodentz' 'Gopha...Just Retire...'
Cuz My 'Brash' Style Will Surely Leave This Battle And This {Impolite} Like 'Setting Dwarves On Fire'!!!!
Was an ok bar, boxer-punch played but you gave it a gd spin, liked that.

I 'Do Away With Barz' Like 'Shutting Down Chocolate Factoriez' N 'Bag Smelly Shit' Like 'Teenage Boyz Gym Lockerz'
I'll 'Perform Dialysis' N 'Put The Pump To Ya Kidney' And 'Crack..?Yep, Elvis..' Like 'Telling Which Drugs Were Done By Famous Rockerz'!!!
Haha nice, took me while to get the crack..? Yep, Elvis part but now i got it, nice finisher nice multies, cleanest wordplay of ya lot and overall a nice verse.

__________________________________________________ _____


i'll CONCLUDE-THIS-PUNK-EMCEE, he always wanted to battle me...
...but YOU-CANT-FUCK-WITH-G!
so now it seemz ya 'DREAM-WORKS AGAINST YOU' like 'COMPETING AGAINST MOVIE-COMPANIES'
Pretty gd opener, was feelin the dreamworks real clean not forced at all. Not very gd multies.

leave em SICK-WITH-HESITATION, let mah FISTz-HIT-NECK-N-BREAK-HIM
so when i'm done Annie will be 'SEEING A BLACK-OUT' like he was ASSISTING-SEGREGATION
Ok punch, a lot cleaner multies on this bar, this flowed real well

STYLE'z-BASIC like UNDERAGE DRINKING ill leave this CHILD-WASTED, predicted him? you LIED-FACE-IT
cuz when it comez to ya verse, 'EVERYONE'z GONNA WATCH ME TRUMP-IT' like 'FUCKIN MILES-DAVIS'
Multies real clean in this, First line punch *child wasted* part was sick man feelin that, second punch wasnt as strong but still nicely executed.

you FORCE WORDPLAY in the WORST WAY! so against me hes gonna have FUCKIN-PROBLEM-SPITTIN
this HERB'S GAY, so sorry Annie, but we 'WONT SEE YOU PRE-VEIL' like 'MUSLIM-LAWS-FOR-WOMEN'
This bar was ya weakest in my eyes, nothin special here, wordplay seemed a lil forced wit the punch and the multi, bad bar to be honest.

WACK ON TEXT so he JACKz CONCEPTZ and BORROWS FROM PEERz-TO-FLOW
ITZ CLEAR-YOU-BLOW!
cuz Annie has to 'USE KAOS AND VILLIAN TO WRITE' like 'SCRIPTING FOR SUPER HERO-SHOWS'
Holy shit, easily best bar of the whole battle, noth closers were mad but dis edged it, nice work here.

__________________________________________________ _____


CaTs

Punches: Annie, stayed more consistent with better punches
Personals: Gophas, last bar, siick
Multies: Annie, gopha yours seemed forced sometimes
Metas: Tie
Flow: I'd say annie, but it was real close so i leave it at a tie
Wordplay: Annie hands down
Creativity: Annie
Nameplay: i Didnt see any cept annies 'Feel G Force' wasnt bad so annie gets it
Complexity: Close, but annie
Consistency:After readin this thru a few times im givin this to gopha
Vocab: Tied up here
O/A: Anesthetic killed this man, butit was close as fuck, definetely needs to be a re-match here. I love readin both of y'all stuff, siick evertime, keep doin ya thing

P'z

[SiiNiDE]

2-1 Annie.

[~Yung_Money~]

i would love to break dis down, but im workin on some tracks

Punches: Annie
Personals: Annie
Multies: Annie
Metas: tie
Flow: Gopha
Wordplay: Annie
Creativity: tie
Nameplay: Annie, i liked dat ground floor line
Complexity: Annie
Consistency: Gopha
Vocab: Gopha
Similes: Gopha

overall: i think Annie took it, but this was a close battle, definately a good choice for the Heavy Weight Title

[DiMe™]

Sick Battle, Sick Shit From Both....



'Barrierz Cover Ya Smelly Shit' Like 'A Florists Door' So I'll '{Push G And Not Go Down}' Like 'Elevatorz Ignorin The Ground Floor'
Ya Style's-Poor, Cuz All We See Is A 'Lottery Peeting Lines' Like 'Randomly Decomposing Plantz On The Forest Floor'
Nice Opener, the "push g an not go down" is sick, the wordplay is clean and the punch was alright, Definatly not feeling hte multis though

You're A Has-Been, Bitch Name Ya Last-Win, You Just 'Repeat Simple Phrases' Like 'The Crowd On Jerry Springer'
I'll Ring-Ya, Sting-Ya, Plunging ''Blade's Inn Hymn' Like 'Vampires Being Motel Lounge Singers'
The multi's are to basic, wordplay is aight and the punch is decent, this is your simplest bar, was still alright though

Got Head-Shots, That'll Leave Ya On Dead-Cots, Or Since You From 'Boston' Slice Up Ya Anklez, N Leave You With 'Red Sox'
As far as 'Barz', I Got 'Fed Stockz'... You 'Bound To Lose' Cuz For A While 'Geode Mia Loss' Like 'Soccer Playerz Losing Pet Rockz'
Nice bar, Multis are on point except for the last one, Wordplay was sick as and the red socks punch was good, Definatly a solid hit.

Bitch, You're Weak! Cuz We Only 'Feel G Force' When We On 'Roller Coaster Ridez' Witcha 'Part Time Punchez' Like A 'Boxer On Hire'
So Call-Me-Sire, Like 'Old Rodentz' 'Gopha...Just Retire...'
Cuz My 'Brash' Style Will Surely Leave This Battle And This {Impolite} Like 'Setting Dwarves On Fire'!!!!
Multis arnt that clean, first line is more of a punch, Imp/Dwarve concept i've seen a couple times now but the wordplay is un-faultable, Nice bar

I 'Do Away With Barz' Like 'Shutting Down Chocolate Factoriez' N 'Bag Smelly Shit' Like 'Teenage Boyz Gym Lockerz'
I'll 'Perform Dialysis' N 'Put The Pump To Ya Kidney' And 'Crack..?Yep, Elvis..' Like 'Telling Which Drugs Were Done By Famous Rockerz'!!!
Nice Closer, the wordplay was clean, although i can see how people would think its off if they spit kinda slow, Punch was nice and multies are decent. Solid Bar To End A Sick Verse With.


Annie Overall = Punches were good, nuthing major KO type but still solid hits, Multies were decent, fell off in areas, Flow was pritty good through out, The Wordplay Was Sick, i dunno if you concentrated on that or wether it just came with the punches but it was sick, Definatly A Verse Worthy Of A Heavyweight Title Shot
__________________________________________________ _____


i'll CONCLUDE-THIS-PUNK-EMCEE, he always wanted to battle me...
...but YOU-CANT-FUCK-WITH-G!
so now it seemz ya 'DREAM-WORKS AGAINST YOU' like 'COMPETING AGAINST MOVIE-COMPANIES'
Multies are off on this bar but the punch makes up for it, the first line is kinda filler but the punch in the 2nd line is solid, Concept is Dope, Good Opener

leave em SICK-WITH-HESITATION, let mah FISTz-HIT-NECK-N-BREAK-HIM
so when i'm done Annie will be 'SEEING A BLACK-OUT' like he was ASSISTING-SEGREGATION
Multies are better on this one, Flow is real clean and the punch is nice, Solid Hit

STYLE'z-BASIC like UNDERAGE DRINKING ill leave this CHILD-WASTED, predicted him? you LIED-FACE-IT
cuz when it comez to ya verse, 'EVERYONE'z GONNA WATCH ME TRUMP-IT' like 'FUCKIN MILES-DAVIS'
This is nice, Multis are cleanest of the battle so far, the wordplay was nice, punch is real good, seen that child wasted concept before but this bar was sick.

you FORCE WORDPLAY in the WORST WAY! so against me hes gonna have FUCKIN-PROBLEM-SPITTIN
this HERB'S GAY, so sorry Annie, but we 'WONT SEE YOU PRE-VEIL' like 'MUSLIM-LAWS-FOR-WOMEN'
Ehhh definatly not your best bar, multies is off, flow is decent though, wordplays nice but the punch is kinda off

WACK ON TEXT so he JACKz CONCEPTZ and BORROWS FROM PEERz-TO-FLOW
ITZ CLEAR-YOU-BLOW!
cuz Annie has to 'USE KAOS AND VILLIAN TO WRITE' like 'SCRIPTING FOR SUPER HERO-SHOWS'
Damm, Best Bar Of The Battle, punch was a KO hit IMO, multis were clean and the personal is Sick, Definatly saved the best for last


Gopha Overall = Punches are crazy as always, Personal in the last bar made all others in the battle irrelevant, really clean multies in the 3rd and 5th bar, overall multies were solid, wordplay was pritty good, Flow was good the whole way through, Great Shit, Definatly deserved first shot at the title

__________________________________________________ _____


Punches: Gopha, annie had punches but Gopha upheld his reputation as king of punches IMO
Personals: Gopha, Last bar just wipped the floor with everything else, Sick shit
Multies: Gopha, both had some clean bars but in others the multies just werent happening, G's 3rd and 5th bar allowe dhim to just edge this cat
Metas: TIE
Flow: Gopha, his was reall easy to follow, Annie's was nice but with some of the wordplay you had to speed up for it to be clean so that threw the tempo out a lil bit
Wordplay: Annie, shit was crazy
Creativity: Annie
Nameplay: Annie, had the "Geode Mia Lost" and "Feel G Force"
Complexity: Annie, was close but annie edged it
Consistency: Gopha, was consistently dishing out punches, crazy shit
Vocab: TIE

Overall Vote = GOPHA

Just edged it.... Both came sick and i wish good luck to whoever steps up as a challenger next time round.....

[Dex Aspen]

Votes 3-2:Anesthetic


...uppin for votes on the HW title.

[The Chozen One 13]

Punches: Gopha
Personals:Gopha
Multies:Annie
Metas: TIE
Flow: Gopha,
Wordplay: Annie
Creativity: Annie
Nameplay: Annie
Complexity: Annie
Consistency: Gopha
Vocab: Gopha

Overall Vote = Annie

[Gopha]

^^^i appreciate tha vote holmez but like i said before id really appreciate if we could get bar by bar breakdownz... ill let yung money and ahh swoop slide but from now on bar by bar breakdown vet votez only thankyou... drop a link if you want me to hit ya stuff up too cuz i realize itz a lotta work thankz...

-payce

[Shoalin]

Punches: Gopha
Personals: Gopha
Multies: Gopha
Metas: TIE
Flow: Gopha
Wordplay: Annie
Creativity: Annie
Nameplay: Annie
Complexity: Annie
Consistency: Gopha
Vocab: - slick from both
O/V= GoPHa

sorry i couldnt break down, not enough time.
4-3

[XREAPERX]

Punches: Gopha
Personals: Gopha
Multies: Gopha
Metas: TIE
Flow: Gopha
Wordplay: Annie
Creativity: Annie
Nameplay: Annie
Complexity: Annie
Consistency: Gopha
Vocab: - slick from both
O/V= GoPHa

sorry i couldnt break down, not enough time.
4-3

Co-Sign....Sick BAttle.

4-4 i beleive

[Dex Aspen]

XREAPERX's vote doesn't count.

Votes 4-3:Annie



-{A}-:out

[Anesthetic]

4-3 Upping.

[Nemesis14]

Punches: Gopha, annie had em to but gopha it harder
Personals: Gopha dude killed with that last bar
Multies:gopha, i saw alot more i guess, but i did see annies to
Metas: Annie
Flow: Tie
Wordplay: definatly annie
Creativity: tie both was sick
Nameplay: tie i didnt really catch any
Complexity: tie
Consistency: id say gopha cuz he kept with it
Vocab: Annie

O/A GOPHA

the guy was sick with punches and personals which to me are the most important parts of battling

[Anesthetic]

Bar-by-Bar breakdowns.

[Red Tha Baron]

'Barrierz Cover Ya Smelly Shit' Like 'A Florists Door' So I'll '{Push G And Not Go Down}' Like 'Elevatorz Ignorin The Ground Floor'
Ya Style's-Poor, Cuz All We See Is A 'Lottery Peeting Lines' Like 'Randomly Decomposing Plantz On The Forest Floor'
{Lottery Peeting Lines/Lotta Repeating Lines}
the florist thing was weak, but that elevator punch was a dope ass nameplay. the wordplay in the last line was nice, but the use of lottery for random wasnt super clean to me. but still a nice punch...but the only real multie was ground floor/styles poor...& you rhymed floor wiv floor homie...

You're A Has-Been, Bitch Name Ya Last-Win, You Just 'Repeat Simple Phrases' Like 'The Crowd On Jerry Springer'
I'll Ring-Ya, Sting-Ya, Plunging ''Blade's Inn Hymn' Like 'Vampires Being Motel Lounge Singers'
repeat simple lines like the springer audience....thats jus corny.. i get the connection cos they always sayin shit like "Jerry, Jerry" or "take it off"...but that was weak still. the last wordplay was good & creative tho...but still, shit multies really

Got Head-Shots, That'll Leave Ya On Dead-Cots, Or Since You From 'Boston' Slice Up Ya Anklez, N Leave You With 'Red Sox'
As far as 'Barz', I Got 'Fed Stockz'... You 'Bound To Lose' Cuz For A While 'Geode Mia Loss' Like 'Soccer Playerz Losing Pet Rockz'
first line had multies, short ones tho...i've heard the red sox concept used before...but its still a nice punch...the wordplay & nameplay in the last line was good, but forced grammatically...ya get me? still a dope punchline

Bitch, You're Weak! Cuz We Only 'Feel G Force' When We On 'Roller Coaster Ridez' Witcha 'Part Time Punchez' Like A 'Boxer On Hire'
So Call-Me-Sire, Like 'Old Rodentz' 'Gopha...Just Retire...'
Cuz My 'Brash' Style Will Surely Leave This Battle And This {Impolite} Like 'Setting Dwarves On Fire'!!!!
roller coaster thing wasnt nice cos of the wording...boxer/punches is played IMO...wordplay was nice, neva heard it before...but yea, still no multies on tha real


I 'Do Away With Barz' Like 'Shutting Down Chocolate Factoriez' N 'Bag Smelly Shit' Like 'Teenage Boyz Gym Lockerz'
I'll 'Perform Dialysis' N 'Put The Pump To Ya Kidney' And 'Crack..?Yep, Elvis..' Like 'Telling Which Drugs Were Done By Famous Rockerz'!!!
locker/rocker......not a multie...weak...but the first line was nice. & the last line had a dope ass punch. good shit.


i'll CONCLUDE-THIS-PUNK-EMCEE, he always wanted to battle me...
...but YOU-CANT-FUCK-WITH-G!
so now it seemz ya 'DREAM-WORKS AGAINST YOU' like 'COMPETING AGAINST MOVIE-COMPANIES'
dope multies & flow...dope wordplay & punch here also


leave em SICK-WITH-HESITATION, let mah FISTz-HIT-NECK-N-BREAK-HIM
so when i'm done Annie will be 'SEEING A BLACK-OUT' like he was ASSISTING-SEGREGATION
nice flow & mutlies again...wordplay was sick as fuck. it was perfect grammar wise, & very hard hitting

STYLE'z-BASIC like UNDERAGE DRINKING ill leave this CHILD-WASTED, predicted him? you LIED-FACE-IT
cuz when it comez to ya verse, 'EVERYONE'z GONNA WATCH ME TRUMP-IT' like 'FUCKIN MILES-DAVIS'
flow & multies on point...wordplay is nice, not great tho...good punchline still


you FORCE WORDPLAY in the WORST WAY! so against me hes gonna have FUCKIN-PROBLEM-SPITTIN
this HERB'S GAY, so sorry Annie, but we 'WONT SEE YOU PRE-VEIL' like 'MUSLIM-LAWS-FOR-WOMEN'
haha...nice punchline here, liked it alot. and good mutlies & flow again

lez get a lil more personal....


WACK ON TEXT so he JACKz CONCEPTZ and BORROWS FROM PEERz-TO-FLOW
ITZ CLEAR-YOU-BLOW!
cuz Annie has to 'USE KAOS AND VILLIAN TO WRITE' like 'SCRIPTING FOR SUPER HERO-SHOWS'
do i have to say it?....disgusting bar here

:eating:

Punches: G, his were just too much. altho he only had 1 to each bar, none ever fell short. some of Annies were weak or the 1st line punch was shit...
Personals: G, that last bar was dope
Multies: G, did annie really have any?????NO
Metas: Tied
Flow: G, no contest IMO
Wordplay: A, good shit from you
Creativity: Tied, both came up wiv shit i neva saw before
Nameplay: A, that elevator thing was nice
Complexity: A, deep into the wordplay
Consistency: G, cos none if his punches were filler (some of Annies were abit)
Vocab: Tied, .....
O/A: Gopha, came wiv a dope flow & multies, crazy personal on him in the last bar & some heavy ass punches. this was a very close clash.[/quote]

[Anesthetic]

4-4

[quiet$torm]

didnt gopha win? i mean if yall want bar for bar....then alot of those votes should be erased then..........

[quiet$torm]

didnt gopha win? how yall just go erase nemisis vote? i mean if yall want bar for bar....then alot of those votes should be erased then.......... It should be 3-1 going gopha way then............

[SiiNiDE]

Gopha asked for bar-by-bar. When it gets this close, it's nice to have a break down vote to show the quality of the verses so you know it's a real vote.

[Gopha]

didnt gopha win? how yall just go erase nemisis vote? i mean if yall want bar for bar....then alot of those votes should be erased then.......... It should be 3-1 going gopha way then............
^^yeah i did ask for break downz only :?, but i decided to let it slide at first for a little, just cuz id hate to see such a dope battle get overshadowed by a dumb voting dispute....

however, if we're gonna discount nemisis now for not breakin it down, id like to have Chosen 13's vote discounted too thankz, as i requested before here:
^^^i appreciate tha vote holmez but like i said before id really appreciate if we could get bar by bar breakdownz... ill let yung money and ahh swoop slide but from now on bar by bar breakdown vet votez only thankyou... drop a link if you want me to hit ya stuff up too cuz i realize itz a lotta work thankz...

mod?

[Nemesis14]

Yo u want bar by bar god damn ok here it is


Barrierz Cover Ya Smelly Shit' Like 'A Florists Door' So I'll '{Push G And Not Go Down}' Like 'Elevatorz Ignorin The Ground Floor'
Ya Style's-Poor, Cuz All We See Is A 'Lottery Peeting Lines' Like 'Randomly Decomposing Plantz On The Forest Floor'

Nice bar kept with it really well

You're A Has-Been, Bitch Name Ya Last-Win, You Just 'Repeat Simple Phrases' Like 'The Crowd On Jerry Springer'
I'll Ring-Ya, Sting-Ya, Plunging ''Blade's Inn Hymn' Like 'Vampires Being Motel Lounge Singers'

I found the punchline weak on this

Got Head-Shots, That'll Leave Ya On Dead-Cots, Or Since You From 'Boston' Slice Up Ya Anklez, N Leave You With 'Red Sox'
As far as 'Barz', I Got 'Fed Stockz'... You 'Bound To Lose' Cuz For A While 'Geode Mia Loss' Like 'Soccer Playerz Losing Pet Rockz'

This my fav bar the red sox line is sick as fuck

Bitch, You're Weak! Cuz We Only 'Feel G Force' When We On 'Roller Coaster Ridez' Witcha 'Part Time Punchez' Like A 'Boxer On Hire'
So Call-Me-Sire, Like 'Old Rodentz' 'Gopha...Just Retire...'
Cuz My 'Brash' Style Will Surely Leave This Battle And This {Impolite} Like 'Setting Dwarves On Fire'!!!!

Punch was good

I 'Do Away With Barz' Like 'Shutting Down Chocolate Factoriez' N 'Bag Smelly Shit' Like 'Teenage Boyz Gym Lockerz'
I'll 'Perform Dialysis' N 'Put The Pump To Ya Kidney' And 'Crack..?Yep, Elvis..' Like 'Telling Which Drugs Were Done By Famous Rockerz'!!!

Godd punch glow was good 2







'll CONCLUDE-THIS-PUNK-EMCEE, he always wanted to battle me...
...but YOU-CANT-FUCK-WITH-G!
so now it seemz ya 'DREAM-WORKS AGAINST YOU' like 'COMPETING AGAINST MOVIE-COMPANIES'

punch is good and good personal

leave em SICK-WITH-HESITATION, let mah FISTz-HIT-NECK-N-BREAK-HIM
so when i'm done Annie will be 'SEEING A BLACK-OUT' like he was ASSISTING-SEGREGATION

punch…. Sick and again personals

STYLE'z-BASIC like UNDERAGE DRINKING ill leave this CHILD-WASTED, predicted him? you LIED-FACE-IT
cuz when it comez to ya verse, 'EVERYONE'z GONNA WATCH ME TRUMP-IT' like 'FUCKIN MILES-DAVIS'

Week bar

you FORCE WORDPLAY in the WORST WAY! so against me hes gonna have FUCKIN-PROBLEM-SPITTIN
this HERB'S GAY, so sorry Annie, but we 'WONT SEE YOU PRE-VEIL' like 'MUSLIM-LAWS-FOR-WOMEN'

this was a awesome punch, and he still hittin him with personals

WACK ON TEXT so he JACKz CONCEPTZ and BORROWS FROM PEERz-TO-FLOW
ITZ CLEAR-YOU-BLOW!
cuz Annie has to 'USE KAOS AND VILLIAN TO WRITE' like 'SCRIPTING FOR SUPER HERO-SHOWS'

And the infamous bar bum bum bum ANNIE YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT lmao j/p annie but yo this is a sick bar yo ( ill be expecting a diss cuz he gunna hate on me now lol)

O/A Gopha like i said he kept it smooth and he hit hard yo gopha is the HW champ



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[Shoalin]

GOPHA IS THE HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPION OF RAPDOGS TEXT LEAGUE


CONGRATULATIONZ :drinking: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday:

5-4 Win
~CLOSED~