WEEK 4 TEXT: Severe (0-0) Vs Antic (2-1)

[Shoalin]

Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Decided by Battlers


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Antic]

Check...

3 bars sound good?

[::Severe::]

yep what i was thinkin, check

[Antic]

Quick Key.....


“Melancoly”? Yup! Cuz Like Gallagher I’ll Sledge Hammer This ‘Sad Dog’…
Back Off!
‘Quarter This Dick’ Till Ya Just A “Nicholson” Like I ‘Cut Tha “Jack” Off’!!//
{Melancoly=Mellon Collie, Nicholson=Nickel Son-first name is Jack}

Concepts? Pfft…Like Pimpless Societies Kid Got No “Machinations”!!
That’s A Shame Bitch!
Ya ‘Lines Point Straight To Shit’, Way I Leave Ya Sliced From Back To Anus!!//
{Machinations=Mack In Nations}

Change Prognosis: Just To “Cancer”, Way I’ve ‘Bottled Your Sickness’!
Kid’s Ripped!
Biznitch! Hip Hop? Quit It! Ya ‘Flow’s Shit’ Like Usin’ Ya Ass To Piss With!!//
{Cancer=Can Sir}

[::Severe::]

Beat Me? God Damn-He's-Praying.... Ima Slam-N-Slay-Him N Leave Antic-Praying.. Get Votes?
He Is Going To Need Frantic-Swaying.. Coz S Stays In Front Of A Like Hispanic-Sayings!!! (ese / SA)

This Boy Should Watch My Techs-Blaze.. Watch Yaself Coz I Deck-Fakes ..Severe The Type To Wreck-"A"
..He Don't Have A Chance Coz He's Wack -And Tick- (Antic) Has Been Shit Since The End Of The Last Decade!!! (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_tick)

Yu Thought I Wasn't Prepared? That's Dumb You Best Be Betting-I'm-Ready.. You Telling Me My Tech-Isn't-Deadly..
And I'll Let Shots Blast At This Kid's Cranium..... N Only Have Half Of His Head Showing Like Getting-A-Semi!!

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The Tick Was A Program From The 90's Probably Only The Older Cats Will Have Heard Of It

Semi - A Semi Boner Not Quite There...

[Nemesis14]

Punches: S
Personals: S
Multies: S
Metas: A
Flow: S
Wordplay: A
Creativity: A
Nameplay:S
Complexity: A (but in a bad way)
Consistency: S
Vocab: tie

O/A: Severe

nice battle yo

[LYRICS]

Punches: s
Personals: tie
Multies: s
Metas: s
Flow: a
Wordplay: s
Creativity: s
Nameplay: s
Complexity: s
Consistency: s
Vocab: tie
overall: severe seen better from antic and i think severe came stronger

[Antic]

wow...haven't disagreed wit voting in a long time, but whatevs....nice drop severe.

[Red Tha Baron]

..LMFAO at this

Punches: a
Personals: s
Multies: a, Sev's was stretched and still didnt have that many
Metas: A!!!!
Flow: a
Wordplay: A!!!!!!!
Creativity: A easily
Nameplay: s
Complexity: a
Consistency: a
Vocab: tie
overall: Antic, he had a punch in each bloody line. sev only had one in each bar. antic was able to keep a good amount of mutlies wiv a great flow...you guys prolly didnt understand Antics wordplay.....smh at this

[Xclusive!]

Punches: An
Personals: Sev
Multies: Sev
Metas: An
Flow: An
Wordplay: An
Creativity: An
Nameplay: Sev
Complexity: Sev
Consistency: An
Vocab: An

.:Overall:.Antic

-Sorry Severe You Had A Real Good Verse But I Just Think Antic Took This One, He Had Better Metas... That Jack Nichloson Line Was Fire It Really Pushed Me Towards Antic

[[King_Mc]]

Punches: A
Personals: S
Multies: TIE
Metas: A
Flow: A
Wordplay: A
Creativity: A
Nameplay: S
Complexity: TIE
Consistency: A
Vocab: S

---> ANTIC

[Dex Aspen]

Votes 3-2:Antic

....uppin.


-{A}-:out

[sharpshooter]

damnnn, this is childs play, u dont vote 4 sumthin jus cause u cant understand it... talkin straight, antic ur verse was nice.. and i understood all ur punches but to me the whole thing was like tryin to read another language.. and readin it out loud i have 2 disagree with the others i thought the flow was non-existant. tight verse still, clever lines, crazy metaphors and a couple of good punches. severe, not a bad verse either, the style was much clearer, read out loud the flow was better.. although the punches were slightly more basic it was cool cause i didnt have 2 keep pausing to work out wat the line was implying.. the S before A line and Antics Quarter this Dick line were the best two. and heres my cats.

Punches: Tie - neither made me laugh
Personals: None
Multies: Tie - Antic had more Severes were better
Metas: Antic - complex as fuck though
Flow: Severe
Wordplay: Tie - both very good
Creativity: Antic
Nameplay: Severe - easily
Complexity: Antic
Consistency: Severe
Vocab: Antic
Enjoyment: Severe

Vote: Severe

tight battle.

[Game Shark]

Punches: Severe
Personals: None
Multies: Tie - Antic was not making much sense
Metas: Antic
Flow: Severe
Wordplay: It was there
Creativity: Antic
Nameplay: Severe
Consistency: Severe
Enjoyment: Severe

OA Severe close battle but severe edged it out

[Dex Aspen]

Votes 4-3:Severe


...uppin.




-{A}-:out

[T-Stylez]

i fully agree with king

Punches: A
Personals: S
Multies: TIE
Metas: A
Flow: A
Wordplay: A
Creativity: A
Nameplay: S
Complexity: TIE
Consistency: A
Vocab: S

---> ANTIC

[Antic]

4-4 good, close battle...

[Antic]

4-4 good, close battle...

[Shoalin]

Punches: A
Personals: S
Multies: -
Metas: A
Flow: A
Wordplay: A
Creativity: A
Nameplay: S
Complexity: -
Consistency: A
Vocab: S

AND THE WINNER IS : ANTIC
5-4 CLOSED ANTIC IS THE VICTOR! :D