WEEK 4 TEXT: KAOS (0-0) Vs Artikk Phrost (2-1)

[Shoalin]

Check In Due: Thursday, February 22, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Sunday, February 25, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Decided by Battlers


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[kaos]

check check , g'luck

[Artik Phrost]

finally..... somebody good.


how many you wanna go?

[kaos]

5-10 bars

is this the same artik phrost from rapflava ?

[Artik Phrost]

yes i am... ...are you the koas from holla-front?

5-10 is fine with me... lets give em something to remember :D

[Artik Phrost]

I got 2 for you... match me


To Think, I Idolized Kaos.. Thru The Ages He's Inspired Vets.. But Sign Up Now? Its Time To Rest../ Cuz If They've Said K "Rock Her Text"..What They Really Wondering.. Is Why You Aint Retired Yet?!!..


I'm Illy Cuz.. Juicing This Fag An Stuffin Him Wit Pink An' Frilly Stuff..
An He Can Compare Me To His Blaze..But, IF 'K Thinks He Infront OF Fire's Place'... He Must've Been Drinkin.. Wait.. He Really Was!!..

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/963/kaosvj1yj0.th.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kaosvj1yj0.jpg)

[kaos]

shit I forgot all about this



ayo......
ya weak ass lyrics is finished
materialistic like the imperial wizard clearing a serial killaz cerial dishes
fuck around -
and I'll 'Jack Phrost' without having to 'Rob the Spirit of Christmas' !
man......
you got the sloppiest structure
the reason every bone in ya body is ruptured
with pump shotties in the lobby of the naughtiest mother
bitch !!!
you coudln't be 'Sensei Chanel' (sensational) if you gave 'Perfume to a Karate Intructor' !

[Gopha]

Arktik:

To Think, I Idolized Kaos.. Thru The Ages He's Inspired Vets.. But Sign Up Now? Its Time To Rest../ Cuz If They've Said K "Rock Her Text"..What They Really Wondering.. Is Why You Aint Retired Yet?!!..
^^^ok personal...


I'm Illy Cuz.. Juicing This *Great Dancer* An Stuffin Him Wit Pink An' Frilly Stuff..
An He Can Compare Me To His Blaze..But, IF 'K Thinks He Infront OF Fire's Place'... He Must've Been Drinkin.. Wait.. He Really Was!!..
^^^basic personal, not bad but didnt do much fa me....

overall: your wording, multiez, flow are all on point, but conceptually you didnt really bring anything to tha table... no real good wordplay, clever metas etc... it seemz you just rushed this one out brutha... stay up tho, i know you can bring heat...

kaos:

ayo......
ya weak ass lyrics is finished
materialistic like the imperial wizard clearing a serial killaz cerial dishes
fuck around -
and I'll 'Jack Phrost' without having to 'Rob the Spirit of Christmas' !
^^^ok nameplay... nothin special

man.....
you got the sloppiest structure
the reason every bone in ya body is ruptured
with pump shotties in the lobby of the naughtiest mother
bitch !!!
you coudln't be 'Sensei Chanel' (sensational) if you gave 'Perfume to a Karate Intructor' !
^^^lol dope wordplay... complex but not forced, good shit homie...

overall: dat last line won you tha battle by itself... itz good to see ya back homie itz been a while.... hopefully youll hang around for a while...

much respect to both emceez....

vote- kaos

-payce

[Artik Phrost]

.....i thought there was a penalty for posting late, from now on... :? meh, either way

[Anesthetic]

Artik:
To Think, I Idolized Kaos.. Thru The Ages He's Inspired Vets.. But Sign Up Now? Its Time To Rest../ Cuz If They've Said K "Rock Her Text"..What They Really Wondering.. Is Why You Aint Retired Yet?!!..
Uhm.. This was okay... :?

I'm Illy Cuz.. Juicing This *Great Dancer* An Stuffin Him Wit Pink An' Frilly Stuff..
An He Can Compare Me To His Blaze..But, IF 'K Thinks He Infront OF Fire's Place'... He Must've Been Drinkin.. Wait.. He Really Was!!..
Errr. Another okay one.

Overall: 7/10 Your two barz weren't really centered around any hard-htting concepts. Seemed like you tried to go Personals-Only, and you didn't really rock the verse that well.

KAOS:
ayo......
ya weak ass lyrics is finished
materialistic like the imperial wizard clearing a serial killaz cerial dishes
fuck around -
and I'll 'Jack Phrost' without having to 'Rob the Spirit of Christmas' !
Nameplay, pretty good. Solid opener.

ou got the sloppiest structure
the reason every bone in ya body is ruptured
with pump shotties in the lobby of the naughtiest mother
bitch !!!
you coudln't be 'Sensei Chanel' (sensational) if you gave 'Perfume to a Karate Intructor' !


LOL...!!!! NIIIIIIIIIIIICE WORDPLAY!

Overall: 8.5/10 First bar was solid, nothing really spectacular. But the second one, LOLOL.

Overall vote: Kaos

[Artik Phrost]

nyce nameplay.....Jack Phrost.. has been used against me.. in almost every battle ive been in.. :?

i'll give him that wordplay in the second bar.. it was nyce...

[Dex Aspen]

.....i thought there was a penalty for posting late, from now on... :? meh, either way


...there was,it was locked.I was over-ruled apparently.



-{A}-:out

[Artik Phrost]

daaz ghey... but wahtever.. smh.. gotta uphold the rules for everybody

[[King_Mc]]

Punches: K
Personals: TIE
Multies: K
Metas: A
Flow: A
Wordplay: K
Creativity: K
Nameplay: K
Complexity: K
Consistency: K
Vocab: K
---> KAOS -KO-