need some help

[healedbygod]

yeh if neone could go on the freestyle open mic forum n read my spits n then tell me some constructive critism to get better be much appreciated

[~Yung_Money~]

if u take some time and read da tutorals, right here in dis forum and apply it to ya text, it'll help em alot

[healedbygod]

thanx dude