$lickMex
02-28-2007, 06:30 PM
Working on this song any feedback much appreciated..N if nebody got a beat in mind for it that'd b swell..(a free one)..
Verse 1
Every time I see you I see a reflection
Ricocheting ya radiance with famine perfection
Ya eyes are like the skies they could neva tell lies
A woman like you is hard to find, I realize
But I hold my tongue back from the feelings I posses
I'm trapping the passion now my soul can't rest
But it's fine,it's aight it's just a part of life
this is what my heart desires, to find a wife
But that's future and it's so far away
I'm just dwelling in the present living for the present day
And presently right now, girl you got me spun
But I'm afraid if I tell you, you'll jus poke fun
I just listen and observe your mental mind's curve
I don't really wanna girlfriend but ya make my thoughts swerve
But now I confused I ain't sure what I really want
And when I look at you and try to chill n act nonchalant
when really all I'm thinking about is what we could be
when I'm holding you in my arms and callin ya baby
It's turning my vision hazy and my mind turns lazy
I never thought a woman, could so easily phase me
HOOK
I hold myself back, Stay Cool And Relax
But having a girl like you is what my life really lacks
me n u together is like the perfect fit
but then again all i wanna do is just quit
in the end we could just both be friends
Cuz if I tell how I feel, we might not speak again
I might cross the line,might fuck it up
But if I don't try my mind stays stuck
Verse 2
You'll prolly even hear this, but ya wont put it together
It's you I'm rapping girl floating like a feather
Floating down so slowly your smile trickles my mind
Looking into your eyes slows the hands and sands of time
It's okay, see? Just read between the lines
Your name's in this stanza I'm dropping hints and signs
You'z a real fine woman, with real fine class
this is the future girl, let go of the past
What's killing me is your boyfriend don't seem to appreciate
What-it-is about-you, that makes you so great
But whatever, I'm used to it it's my life's fuckin story
can't get a chick unless I act more like cory
And your mind never know what my passion might show
I think it's really shitty but it's the way it's got to go
haven't had a real girl since my days at ross
hope your getting the message that I'm trying to put across
I wanna tell you everything but it's something I can't do
That's why I'm taken the time, to write a song for you
HOOK
I hold myself back, Stay Cool And Relax
But having a girl like you is what my life really lacks
me n u together is like the perfect fit
but then again all i wanna do is just quit
in the end we could just both be friends
Cuz if I tell how I feel, we might not speak again
I might cross the line,might fuck it up
But if I don't try my mind stays stuck
Verse 1
Every time I see you I see a reflection
Ricocheting ya radiance with famine perfection
Ya eyes are like the skies they could neva tell lies
A woman like you is hard to find, I realize
But I hold my tongue back from the feelings I posses
I'm trapping the passion now my soul can't rest
But it's fine,it's aight it's just a part of life
this is what my heart desires, to find a wife
But that's future and it's so far away
I'm just dwelling in the present living for the present day
And presently right now, girl you got me spun
But I'm afraid if I tell you, you'll jus poke fun
I just listen and observe your mental mind's curve
I don't really wanna girlfriend but ya make my thoughts swerve
But now I confused I ain't sure what I really want
And when I look at you and try to chill n act nonchalant
when really all I'm thinking about is what we could be
when I'm holding you in my arms and callin ya baby
It's turning my vision hazy and my mind turns lazy
I never thought a woman, could so easily phase me
HOOK
I hold myself back, Stay Cool And Relax
But having a girl like you is what my life really lacks
me n u together is like the perfect fit
but then again all i wanna do is just quit
in the end we could just both be friends
Cuz if I tell how I feel, we might not speak again
I might cross the line,might fuck it up
But if I don't try my mind stays stuck
Verse 2
You'll prolly even hear this, but ya wont put it together
It's you I'm rapping girl floating like a feather
Floating down so slowly your smile trickles my mind
Looking into your eyes slows the hands and sands of time
It's okay, see? Just read between the lines
Your name's in this stanza I'm dropping hints and signs
You'z a real fine woman, with real fine class
this is the future girl, let go of the past
What's killing me is your boyfriend don't seem to appreciate
What-it-is about-you, that makes you so great
But whatever, I'm used to it it's my life's fuckin story
can't get a chick unless I act more like cory
And your mind never know what my passion might show
I think it's really shitty but it's the way it's got to go
haven't had a real girl since my days at ross
hope your getting the message that I'm trying to put across
I wanna tell you everything but it's something I can't do
That's why I'm taken the time, to write a song for you
HOOK
I hold myself back, Stay Cool And Relax
But having a girl like you is what my life really lacks
me n u together is like the perfect fit
but then again all i wanna do is just quit
in the end we could just both be friends
Cuz if I tell how I feel, we might not speak again
I might cross the line,might fuck it up
But if I don't try my mind stays stuck