Week 5 Topical: DiLLi R (0-0) vs Dime (0-0)

[Dex Aspen]

TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.




Check In Due: Monday, March 12th, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Wednesday, March 14, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic:Your the assassian who finally kills James Bond 007


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[DiMe™]

-ChecK-

Decent Topic Dex, Good Shit.....










..And So The Topical Journey Begins..

[DiLLi R]

Nice Subject, Dex. You Guys Always Have Great Ones.

Check.

^^Co-Sign:

"..And So The Topical Journey Begins.."

--{{P3AC3}}--

[DiLLi R]

Can I Just, Like, Drop My Verse Right Now?

Cuz I'ma Do It..K?





Taking After A Book, Not Original, But Look,
I Can Win, Unlike Them I'm In, With The Look,
Of A Killer. A Fucking Darkness Inspired Emcee,
With A Knife, Cuz My Clip Has Fucking Fired Empty.
And, Plus, The Knife Is The One Used By Lucifer,
Used By Me To Fuck The British Up With Their Truce To Her.
007. Hah! Bring Him Down To "Double Oh! Sick",
Like A Proper British Heaving On The Carpet Of His Bitch,*
I Get "A Twitch..In My Left Eye", Lucifer Hopes I Don't Give It Away,
I'm At A "Royal(e) Casino", With "Blood Down My Cheek" Givin' The Play.**
If I Win, Which I Will, I'll Heave His Head Into The Queen's Bed,
Whoops! Wrong Movie, Forget What I Just Said.***
Oh, Wait A Tick, Watch That Car Comin' In,
Fucking New Technology Should Be A Sin.
Resort To The Old Ways, Show Him The "(W)Hole Of The Chair",
Let Him Scream Out In Agony From The "(W)Hole Of The Tear".****
Boom! Shit! He Knows That I'm There, I Can Still Hear The Bullet,
Ripping Past My Ear, Uncontrollably Fast Like A Fish Sliding Down A Gullet.
He's Dead. For Even Trying To Hit That Shit On Ta Me,
But, Yet, I Feel That That's A Only A Bit Of His Modesty,
But Honestly, I Can Feel It In My Bones That I Shall Take Him Down.
And Like A Housewife In A Cookoff, I'm Bakin' Now.
He's Conceited, He Kills Before He Even Thinks,
But I'm Of The Word Of Thoughtful Tap-Water, Practically Stealin' Sinks.
Okay. He's Gone To Bed. My Final Hour Of Honour Is At Hand,
He Stabs Me As I'm Closer, But I Will Still Reprimand.
I'm Bleeding, But On Top Of Him, Smothering His Last Breaths,
This Is MY Moment Of Glory, I'll Be The One To Stroke His Last Death.
I Stab Him In His Glory*****, His Gasps Of Pain Are Over.
Here's Another Triumph For The Sins Against Jehovah.

*---"Oh! Oh!" Like A Proper British Who Is Surprised.
**---Casino Royale..The Bad Guy Had Something Wrong With His Eye. It Bled When He Twitched. And It Twitched When He Bluffed (aka Play).
***---The Godfather.
****---The Torture Scene In Casino Royale, The Hole In The Chair, With The Balled Up Rope.
*****---His Sexual Organ.

--{{P3AC3}}--

[DiLLi R]

Is This Gonna Be A No-Show Or Something? Is Dime Gonna Show???

Uppin' Your Topical, Dime.

--{{P3AC3}}--

[DiMe™]

Nah I Dont No-Show....


It'll Be Up Soon....
I'll Write Some Bars Up Now.....


..Sorry Bout The Wait..

[DiMe™]

..First Topcial So Lets See How It Goes..


...And So The Idea Is Pitched...


Kill 007? Should I really assassinate this acknowledged hero?
Must admit I was confused at 1st, the answers now clear though
Told myself I’d have to be insane to try it so I skipped the pills
Now I’m crouching in the shadows of a car park, equipped to kill
With the voices in my head, contemplating what many have tried before me
Thinking of how people will retell his last moments, his final story
Thinking of how many generations to come will adore me
Suddenly stop thinking, Mind fixed on the thought of such glory


The front doors open, streaming light shows him split the crowd
Amazed at the amount of security, think I even said shit aloud
He’s never been a big fan of protection, I guess tonight was the exemption
But it’s too late to back out now, its gone past the point of redemption
It has to be done, this is only the first time the “bullets gone get bitten”
The time has arrived, I’m now ready to upset Britain
Stride with confidence, no longer confused as I leave the hiding spot
Is James Bond really human? I guess this’ll be the deciding shot


It was different then how I pictured, just one remarking shot
Straight to the face, left him lying in that parking lot
Heard the crowds screams, piercing the night air
As they stood staring at his body laying right there
The press capture every moment, flashes blinding
Guards bring me to ground, cuts on my body but I’m not minding
Cause I’ve done what I wanted, accomplished the goal
I’ll be off to jail shortly, and I’m not expecting parole





Vote Up People

[DiLLi R]

Good Drop, Dime...That Was Nice. More Straightforward Than Mine. Damn. I Don't Think That I'll Win, But Uppin' Votes Anyhow.

--{{P3AC3}}--

(May The Best Man Win)

(No Hard Feelings If You [Or I] Win, Right?)

[DiLLi R]

Uppin' Some Good Votes On This Please!!!

--{{P3AC3}}--

[GTech]

On Topic: TIE (both held it down)
Depth: TIE (Hard to judge)
Imagery: TIE
Originality: Im gonna have to say none. I thought both coulda been a bit more creative on how they killed him.
Flow: TIE
Multis: Dime (Didnt' see much, but saw a couple from Dime)
Enjoyment: TIE
Vocab: Dime (Both came out simple, but delivered the topic well.. But Dime edged it for me with a bit more complexity)

Overall Vote: Dime.. Close battle. DiLLi matched up with Dime on most of the cats, but Dime edged it out with tha other cats alone. I wished yall coulda made James Bond's death a bit more creative.
Dime pretty nice for a first Topical, keep at it. Same with DiLLi.

peece

[KasuaL]

On Topic: Tie
Depth: ...Tie?
Imagery: DiLLi R
Originality: DiMe™ (cuz DiLLi R used the movie shit)
Flow: Tie
Multis: Tie
Enjoyment: DiMe™
Vocab: DiMe™

Overall: DiMe™ took the categories

Good topic and good drops from both emcee's, DiMe™ came out on top because I thought his verse was more straight forward and honestly, I enjoyed it more.

2-0 DiMe™

[DiMe™]

Thanks For Voting...

And Yeh GTech i agree, i wanted to do some weird style of death but i ran out of time and had a mental block in my Religion class so yeh....


But yeh 2-0....

..Good Drop Dilli, Nice Battle..

[The Chozen One 13]

On Topic: TIE
Depth: TIE
Imagery: TIE
Originality: dilli
Flow: TIE
Multis: Dime
Enjoyment: TIE
Vocab: Dime

Overall Vote: Dime.

[Xclusive!]

On Topic: Dime
Depth: Dill
Imagery: Dill - Dill's imagery was ill i could picture exactly what he was saying
Originality: Dill
Flow: Dime- it was just a bit easier to comprehend and read
Multis: Tie
Enjoyment: Dill
Vocab: Dill - His has alot better vocab and all the vocab just flowed together

Overall Vote: Dilli

[Evoligion]

Is this 3-0 K.O ?


Or is voting still a go ?

[DiMe™]

Nah Voting Was Cut Off After Chozen 13 Just No Mods Saw To Close It....


Thanks For Voting Exclusive But Yeh Doesnt Count....

3-0....


Thanks For The Battle Dilli... Unfortunalty Xclusive Didnt See This Earlier....


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