Week 5 Topical: Anesthetic (1-2) vs. Xclusive! (0-0)

[Dex Aspen]

TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.




Check In Due: Monday, March 12th, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Wednesday, March 14, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: Two Turntables and a Microphone


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[Xclusive!]

CHECK...

great...

[Anesthetic]

I'm making it my mission to utterly destroy you, to where there's no fathomable reason why I wouldn't get any category I please... Just thought you should know. :?

In case you haven't noticed, this is my check.

[Xclusive!]

Oh ok. that makes me feel better thanks.

-ill edit this with my post when i key my verse-

[Xclusive!]

The Mic - such a simplistic revolutionizing tool utilized to its fullest potential
The brilliant texcee artist, paints lyrical masterpieces with brushes of genius credentials
The metallic equipment; mic and dual turntables, such melodic audio instruments
Capturing the complex essence and presence of my spirit when I vent these pents
Speaking in alga rhythmic formulas, lyrical curriculums glorifying the level of my rhyme etiquette
Befuddling the average artists and masses with extensive knowledge of microphone physics
Picking up the discs and cords spitting lackluster misdirected rhymes thrown fucking senseless
Killing the beats while ‘painting’ whack artists with arsenic chemicals, without being a chemist
On the apocalyptic stage, where audiences dream of life and fame fades in instance
The common dj’s look to different providences to prove the mic’s meaningful exsistance
The new mission of mcee’s holdin the mic to their eyes causing vision and mass attrition
So lend me your attention as I make a metaphorical allusion to the mic’s raw diction
Without such an instrument, flow’s pointless, but in reality the microphone is indispensable
Xclusive’s The invincible poet who usses the mic’s insatiable and physically indestructibility
Cause the details of the turntables are overshadowed by the masses of Dj’s in an instantaneity
Sites and images so vivid to the complexity of the intrsument causing my mental to border with the line of surrealness
The mic, dual turntables, such an essential part of every mcee’s arsenal
The rhythmic regiments physiological notes melodies carried on the instruments complexional…

[Anesthetic]

I've Decided To Match Yours In General Length.

..::The Masses Convulge On One Constiguent Point; Mindsets Permeated With The 'Scratching Sound ' Of Vinyl Being Forcefully Imposed Against The Bottom Of An Aluminum/Steel Alloyed Needle::..

Into The Sorroundings, Sound Washed Upon The Vacant Ears
Canonical Figures Stood Front And Center, Honing Their Craft For Years
Subtle Hues Danced Across The Mic; Sweat Giving It A Slick Appearance
Carnal Beats Drove Each In Attendance, Into Complete Adherence
A Primal Tendency Was Awakened From Long-Set Dormancy
Each Whimsical Halt And Resurgence Of Sound, Breaking Useless Conformity
Sound Asserted It's Presence Within The Dance Hall, The Gift & The Curse
Twisting A Sinewy Path Betwixt Ruler And Subordinate, As Enemy & Adverse
It Patrolled With A Languid Grace, Billowing From The Depths Of Jazz Tunes
Through The Bowels Of Rock And Roll, Passing Through Disco's Recent Runes
His Mastery Of Two Simplistic Objects, Coupled With The MC's Eloquence In Entendre
Liken It To An Opulent Symphonic Showcase, Executed By A Studied Orchestra

..::A Break In The Chilling Crescendo, As The Talented Orator Beings To Showcase His Excellent Verbiage::..

".. I Give Reverence For The Late-Greats, I Studied Their Great-Traits, Over The Beats I Skate-Straight, A Straight Pinpoint Delivery, Never Late But Ornate, Holding Syllabic Weight, I Won't, Make You Wait, On Any Given Date, I'll Start With A Clean Slate, And Without Debate Or A Misstate, The Flow-Rate Of My Words Equate, Into A Form That Dictates Like A Corrupt Chief Of State.."

An Explosion Of Jubilence, Fueled By The Precise Delivery, They Want More-Again
More Of The Blacksmith, Using His Tools Vertiginous To A Common Origin
That Carnal Beat Arose Once More, Driving Within His Finger Tendons
He Once Again Intoxicates The Crowd, With His Harmonious Emissions
The Emcee Was Recuperating, His Lungs Drawing Forth A Rush Of Air
A Wry Grin Stymied His Lips, As He Watched HIs Disc Jockey Prepare
It Was As If, Inadvertantly The Two Had Reached A Storied Divinity
A Conclusion Not Far From The Truth, When Observing The Patrons Of The Vicinity
Two Turn-Tables And A Microphone, Coupled With Two Men's Unrelenting Vitality
Aided In The Patrons' Momentary Escapes From The Mundane Visions Of This Reality

..::An Inscription, Bore By Both The Breadth Of The Microphone, And The Underside Of The Turn-Tables, Raged From Within, Illuminated By A Conflagration Within It's Depths::..


"..Music Redimio Nos Totus.. Subterlabor E Animadverto e Hems O Vestis O Notitia. Solvo Vestri Inhibitin Quod Nuto Music, Pro Music Il Operor Haud Nefas. Est Omnimodus Lingua , Quibus Nos Totus Can Exsisto Volubilis ; Omnimodus Lingua Quibus Nos Totus An Convoco. Music. .. Afflatus Resurgence.."

[DiLLi R]

Holy Luciferous Shit.


Damn. Wow. Shit. Shit. Shit.

That Was Incredibly Awesome. Both Of You.

On Topic: Tie
Depth: Tie
Imagery: Xclusive!
Originality: Tie
Flow: Annie
Multis: Annie
Enjoyment: Tie
Vocab: Tie

Overall Vote: Damn...I Don't Know, It's Pretty Close: Annie. No Offence Xclusive!.

--{{P3AC3}}--

[Xclusive!]

Oh Damn Close Battle

Heres my one UPPIN

[Anesthetic]

One-Nill Upping.

[Ahh Swoop Pen]

On Topic: Tie
Depth: Annie
Imagery: Annie ...that vacant ears ...His Lungs Drawing Forth A Rush Of Air .. shit like that was like whoa im there
Originality: Tie
Creativity: Annie .. kept me wait'n 4 the next line
Flow: tie
Multis: Annie
Enjoyment: Tie
Vocab: xclusive

overall i think annie overcame but a lil bit

[Xclusive!]

Aight alot closer than i thought it was gonna be so far

3-1 Annie

[DiMe™]

Nice Drops...

On Topic - TIE
Depth - Annie
Imagery - Xclusive
Creativity - Annie
Flow - TIE
Multies - Annie
Enjoyment - Annie
Vocab - Xclusive

Overall Vote = Annesthetic


4-1 TKO

..Nice From Both..

[Anesthetic]

WACHOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW. 8)