Week 5 Topical: ARMADA (2-0) vs. ChoosenOne13 (2-2)

[Dex Aspen]

TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.




Check In Due: Monday, March 12th, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Wednesday, March 14, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: Watchin T.V. on a Friday Night


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

Topical:

On Topic:
Depth:
Imagery:
Originality:
Flow:
Multis:
Enjoyment:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:


or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

You are allowed to PM me your verses

[ARMADA]

CHECK!

[The Chozen One 13]

i didnt sign up this week

but i will do it

check

[Dex Aspen]

i didnt sign up this week


thats what the sign in/out thread is for...to sign in and out.Thanks for stickin it out anyways.



-{A}-:out

[ARMADA]

ight fam good looks...we can make it a quick battle, 5 bars, 10 lines, if thats convenient for you.

[The Chozen One 13]

ok im good with that cant go over that limit

[The Chozen One 13]

it was a glum friday night relaxing with the family like never before/
skimming through shows,movies on every channel like i never seen more/
we determine on the channel we gonna watch with out contention/
as i take a thought is this a plot or am i in another dimension/
crack open the window as i feel a soft wind brush against me like a
girls natrual hair/
we are watching the cerlebraty paranormal project as my cuzin earl sat
through it scared/
change the channel as we tune in to dave chappel as we laugh our heads off like were beheaded/
chappel was better to watch cause we didnt to see heads shredded/
from laughs to cheers and scares to fears sadly the ending was near/
i wish we had more family nights like these they dont end servere/

[ARMADA]

Watchin T.V. on a Friday Night



normally a friday night consist of narda, "presently" im engaged in sports depiction of barbaric rivalry
i got fifty erect inches, of course I mean a tv screen, picture perfect plasma circuit definition quality
as silently I wait Intensely "Friday fights" I gotta see, main event is Winky Write vs Anthony Mundine
suddenly music cheers fighters walking to the ring, cant contain my inhibitions shadow box excessively
pepsi cola hits the carpet disregard it easily, I mean my wifey wont complain, cos it is our anniversary
shes really happy got her present, I left her in suspense, said I had a "big surprise" unveiled a tv set
Speechless, it was "majic" the desired effect, even more than id expect, she even had to take a breath
with respect im like honey while your out, can you grab some cigarettes CERTAINLY! you need more beer
perhaps some french courgettes or maybe you would like a skanky WHORE so we can have some kinky sex!!!
Im like yeerrreess! love you baby, ooooh and some skittles to, shes like "WHAT".....quiet honey the fight is starting soon



...ARMADA...

[GTech]

lol I woulda had a nice idea for this topic...

On Topic: TIE
Depth: felt like Chozen came out stronger
Imagery: Chozen
Originality: Armada
Flow: Armada
Multis: NONE
Enjoyment: Armada
Vocab: Armada

Overall Vote: Armada

Chozen man, ur ending was whack and cheesy and too predictable. But you held down the imagry no doubt. Flow was messy as well.. keep elevating

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[DiLLi R]

On Topic: Chozen
Depth: ARMADA
Imagery: Couldn't See Much...Sorry.
Originality: ARMADA
Flow: Chozen
Multis: Chozen
Enjoyment: Chozen (ARMADA's Was Weird At The End, I Didn't Really Feel That It Had Much To Do With The Topic)
Vocab: ARMADA

Overall Vote: The Chozen One 13

--{{P3AC3}}--

[The Chozen One 13]

1-1 good battle so far

[DiMe™]

Kind Of A Weird Topic But Both Did Aight Considering The Small Bar Limit You Guys Agree'd To


On Topic - Chozen
Depth - TIE
Imagery - Chozen
Creativity - Armada
Flow - Armada
Multies - TIE
Enjoyment - Chozen
Vocab - Armada

Overall Vote = TIE


Chozen your closer wasnt original at all, but Armada's closing lines drifted off the topic so it didnt really hurt you at all....


Decent drops from both....

[The Chozen One 13]

Kind Of A Weird Topic But Both Did Aight Considering The Small Bar Limit You Guys Agree'd To


On Topic - Chozen
Depth - TIE
Imagery - Chozen
Creativity - Armada
Flow - Armada
Multies - TIE
Enjoyment - Chozen
Vocab - Armada

Overall Vote = TIE


Chozen your closer wasnt original at all, but Armada's closing lines drifted off the topic so it didnt really hurt you at all....


Decent drops from both....

2-2

[ARMADA]

lmfao...how does your wifey getting mad at you for WATCHING TV,
veer away from the subject WATCHING TV...gtfoh

[The Chozen One 13]

lmfao...how does your wifey getting mad at you for WATCHING TV,
veer away from the subject WATCHING TV...gtfoh

who me

[GTech]

yea i think u mentioned it in your verse..

Every1 vote in my battle with MANE! For HW Champion!

[MC Fresh2Def]

On Topic: Chozen
Depth: Chozen
Imagery: Chozen
Originality: ARMADA
Flow: ARMADA
Multis: Chozen
Enjoyment: Tie
Vocab: ARMADA

Overall Vote: The Chozen One 13

[The Chozen One 13]

this is what i said

crack open the window as i feel a soft wind brush against me like a
girls natrual hair/
we are watching the cerlebraty paranormal project as my cuzin earl sat
through it scared/

[The Chozen One 13]

any ways 3-2 my lead first to 5 i think right

[The Chozen One 13]

upping

[!FEren]

Topic: C
Depth: C
Imagery: C
Originality: A
Flow: A
Multies: C
Enjoyment: C
Vocab: A

O/A: The Chosen One

Did Yu Wanna Drop a Vote In My Topical With X..

[The Chozen One 13]

5-2

good battle

i win

[GTech]

Please vote in my battle with MANE..juss need 1 more vote