Week 5 Topical:Quixotic(4-0) vs Evoligion(3-1) MW Champion [Archive]

Dex Aspen

03-10-2007, 02:38 PM

TOPICAL DATES ARE DIFFERENT THEN THE SIGN IN.TAKE NOTE.

Check In Due: Monday, March 12th, 11:59 PM
Verses Due: Wednesday, March 14, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Unlimited Bars
Topic: Muslim Hatred For The Jew's

Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations

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Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

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Evoligion

03-14-2007, 12:54 AM

Psalm 83:1-8: Keep not thou silence, O God: hold not thy peace, and be not still, O God. For, lo, thine enemies make a tumult: and they that hate thee have lifted up the head. They have taken crafty counsel against thy people, and consulted against thy hidden ones.

Bring forth the ring worm of the north side , ready to die to spring war,
swords rip into flesh and swing gore, bombs explode and fling corpses' ..
We ignore .. and things soar and escalade till noone in the land understands,
i'll be damned if noone stands up, and screams out till Allah and Messiah walk hand in hand ..
I demand it, dammit mutha fuckas, I'll command troops and charge n prevail !
Its no use .. the Jews just turn away and Muslim women chuckle under large veils ..

Why!?
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To exactally know why such hatred, I gotta explain to you, a story of two kids,
wanting friendship and their parents threw fits, and they knew they'd forbid ..
They did it anyways .. remembering their parents telling them .. Burning bridges is grief,
they believe they'd receive inner peace by knowing the hatred of two seperate religious beliefs ..
So they leave after school, debating the formation and location of a secret meeting place,
within some woods, the dark green foliage thick enough to block the sun's beating rays ..
They worked on forts under a sky died a deep sea blue .. enjoying a slow breeze,
the Muslim boy carved Allah , and the Jewish boy carved Messiah into their own trees ..
Three days go by, they apply knowledge to one another, and each listens and looks upon,
The Jew explains messiah , and the Muslim tells him of Muhammad and the book of Koran ..
It dawned onto the Muslim boy, of what their about, and how the lonelyness became,
He repeated the words, and the Jewish boy shouted , " WE DO NOT SPEAK OF THE HOLIEST OF NAMES !! "
Shame became a factor of the kid, but still enraged , the jew hopped up and bounced out,
about this time the Muslim is thinking he did nothing wrong, he didn't have an ounce of doubt ..
Without hesistation, that night, the Jewish boy sneaks out of his house, far from sober and shit,
he stumbles to their hang out , sees the god's name Allah on the tree, and carves a six point star over it ..
Admitting he was wrong, the Muslim boy goes to the meeting spot the next day to gather his things,
a pale white expression on his face when he sees the damage .. now he'd rather kill than swing ..
It stings and the Muslim boy is now filled with insanity .. This is when things turned worse,
He vowed to himself to end the Jew's life, or kill his family ... whichever occured first ..
Ready to burst any moment, the next day at school he didn't say hi or good-bye,
no problem on the Jew's side, from his mind they still wasn't seeing eye to eye ..
A high and dry friendship down the drain .. the Jew happens to see something that seems strange,
hes on his way to class and see the Muslim talking to another kid and sees an exchange ..
Later that day, its time for school to let out, the Jew wants to appologize but hes afraid to speak,
he swings by the restroom on his way to do so .. to gain his composure and to take a leak ..
while peeing hes thinking, worried with the situation .. hes comptiplating with the blackest of dread,
the Muslim boy sneaks up from behind, takes his gun and knocks him in the back of the head ..
sick of being forcefed the Jew's bullshit, hes determined and ready to pop this whore,
he fuckin yokes him up by his shirt collar ... drags his body into a stall and locks the door ..
Hes ready to settle the score, but instead of just killing him , there needs to be more said,
he takes out his pocket knife, leans down and carves a six point star being crossed out on his forehead ..
Ready to seal the deal now, he smacks the Jew across the face .. this sheeps been told,
he awakens and looks up and his eyes meet that of a deranged kid, staring deeply into his soul ..
This whole time he had no idea .. he sees the barrel of the gun, his heart drops .. its stuck and it throbs,
he slides the barrel into his mouth and repeats these words : " Hitler should of finished the fuckin job! "

** BANG !! **